Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionOctober 28, 2025 |
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If the reviewer comments include a recommendation to cite specific previously published works, please review and evaluate these publications to determine whether they are relevant and should be cited. There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Does the manuscript provide a valid rationale for the proposed study, with clearly identified and justified research questions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Is the protocol technically sound and planned in a manner that will lead to a meaningful outcome and allow testing the stated hypotheses??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 3. Is the methodology feasible and described in sufficient detail to allow the work to be replicable??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors described where all data underlying the findings will be made available when the study is complete??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above and, if applicable, provide comments about issues authors must address before this protocol can be accepted for publication. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about research or publication ethics. You may also provide optional suggestions and comments to authors that they might find helpful in planning their study. Reviewer #1: This is a well-structured and clearly written study protocol for a scoping review. The research question is relevant and timely, the methodology is sound and follows established frameworks. However, there are several areas where the manuscript can be improved to enhance its clarity, rigor, and impact. Under-Specified Data Charting (Extraction) Process: The data extraction section is too vague. A scoping review's credibility hinges on a transparent and reproducible data charting process. The manuscript mentions a "standardized data extraction form" but does not detail the specific variables to be extracted. For example, what “public health strategies” mean. This should be explicitly listed and explained. What is the relation between the key words in the searching strategy and the data extraction? The description of how the data will be synthesized and presented is minimal. The plan to use "narrative summaries, tables, flow diagrams, and evidence maps" is good, but it needs more detail. How will the evidence be mapped? What will the tables contain? A clearer plan is needed. The choice of literature from "January 2000 to August 2025" is arbitrary without a stated rationale. Why 2000? Is this to capture the "re-emergence" in a modern context? This justification should be explicitly provided. The decision to exclude case reports is a significant limitation, especially for a re-emerging condition like scurvy in a high-income country. Early evidence and clinical notes often appear first in case reports. This exclusion should be strongly justified, or the criteria should be reconsidered. Minor Issues Authors stated that “Data extract will be completed in November 2025” And “Final results will be expected in January 2026”. Does that mean the work has been done before this protocol being published? Reviewer #2: This review by Ndukwe et al. addresses the prevalence and incidence of vitamin C deficiency a, predisposing factors, health outcomes, health system responses and public health implications among Canadian populations. Scurvy, resulting from vitamin C deficiency is linked to serious health outcomes and continues to be present at high rates among certain populations. While this is an important topic, there are some issues in the review raised below that need the author’s attention during the revision. General Comments 1) Please provide more details regarding the reason(s) why the stated scoping review methodology was chosen for this work. 2) The protocol has not included the context of geographic location in the search strategy. Numerous reports are emerging that demonstrate the utility of geospatial science and tools such as geospatial informatics systems (GIS) and geodemographic segmentation methodology to study incidence, prevalence, income status, social lifestyles, and dietary habits. Reference #9 (Dangerfield K.) cited by the authors directly points to a regional association with scurvy and an increased risk of insufficient vitamin C intake by residents of Northern Saskatchewan (La Ronge). In addition, the authors cite “limited access to fruit” as a factor associated with vitamin C deficiency. This also likely has a location-based feature. Please modify the manuscript to include the context of location. For example, in Table 1, under the Canada category, add terms related geospatial science such as geospatial, geographic, location, region, and neighborhood. Because the literature on scurvy is sparse, it is likely these terms will not return results. However, an important knowledge gap may be identified. 3) Lines 91-93 state that Indigenous populations are predisposed to scurvy “due to food insecurity, income status, social lifestyles, greater reliance on low nutrient market foods, breakdown of traditional agricultural systems, climate change, and nutrition transition [11].” There are several issues with this passage. o First, the words “due to” imply causal relationships have been established for each of these factors. Due to the observational nature of several studies cited, many of these factors have only an established association (e.g., food insecurity and low vitamin C) not a causal relationship (e.g., vitamin C deficiency causes scurvy). This issue is also present in Line 79, where it is stated “have been proven”. Consider “suggest” or “have been demonstrated to be associated with”. Please review the entire manuscript for other places where authors may have erroneously implied a causal relationship exists and revise the text. o A second issue is that the passage includes potential risk factors that are not directly addressed by the study search methodology. I am in agreement that there likely are associations between low vitamin C intake and “the breakdown of traditional agricultural systems, climate change, and nutrition transition” (i.e., reduced consumption of traditional diet elements). Additionally, Line 81 mentions other Indigenous population-relevant factors: “dietary change” and “colonization”. However, it is unclear to me how these factors which are specific to Indigenous populations will be captured by the search terms outlined in Table 1. 4) As described in Gandhi (cited reference #1), smoking and alcoholism are risk factors for vitamin C deficiency. And although the literature is sparse, studies have reported higher prevalence rates of these factors in Indigenous populations. These potential factors should be addressed in the manuscript. Specific comments • In the Title capitalize “light” • Abtract Lines 39-40 “PRISMAScR (Preferred Reporting Items for Systematic Reviews and Meta-Analyses extension for Scoping Reviews)” reverse what is in parentheses • Abstract Lines 52-53: Consider changing “Risk profile” to “Risk” as a Key Word to make your article more discoverable. Also, intervention should be capitalized for consistency. • Reference 2 “Persistent scurvy after vitamin C supplementation in a high-risk patient: a case report” does not seem to be the best reference for the mechanism of actions related to hypovitaminosis C. • Table 1: o Under “Vitamin C deficiency” category, remove the word “level” behind “low vitamin C”. o In addition to “symptoms” (i.e. subjective observations) also Include “signs” (i.e., objective clinical observations) under the “Clinical Outcomes” category • Under the “Canada” category, it is unclear what the asterisk in “Canadian*” is notating. • Line 81 Needs a reference regarding “colonization” as a risk factor • Line 101:“Predisposing” should not be capitalized • Lines 101-103: “scurvy and vitamin C deficiency” is repeated multiple times. Please revise the redundancy. Consider using a colon and reorganizing the sentence • Line 123 typo “Inaddition” • Line 130: change “of vitamin” to “of scurvy and vitamin” • Line 205 change “November” to “December” • Line 232 - C “deficiency in Canada, focusing on prevalence”, this sentence should include “incidence” ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: Yes: Weikuan Gu Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Shining light on Vitamin C Deficiency and Scurvy in Canada: A Scoping Review Protocol of Risk Profiles, Health Outcomes, and Interventions. PONE-D-25-56435R1 Dear Dr. Ndubuka, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Subburaman Mohan Academic Editor PLOS One Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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