Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionApril 23, 2025 |
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Please see our Supporting Information guidelines for more information: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/supporting-information. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: General Comments The present study examined the impact of ergometer cycling with visual foraging (EC + VF) on executive function (EF) and prefrontal cortex activation, in comparison with ergometer cycling (EC) and visual foraging (VF) alone. The research hypothesis was that the EC + VF condition would exhibit a more pronounced effect on EF and prefrontal cortex activation than either EC or VF alone. The research theme is interesting, and the findings may contribute to our understanding of the relationship between acute exercise and cognitive function. However, there are several serious concerns regarding the methods that the authors should address. 1) Sample Size Calculation via Power Analysis The authors state that a power analysis using G*Power indicated an adequate sample size (Lines 122–127). However, the statistical model used in the study—a two-way repeated measures ANCOVA—is not well-supported by G*Power. In general, G*Power does not allow for accurate power analysis for repeated measures ANOVAs involving multiple within-subject factors, as these models include multiple random effects that are not easily distinguishable from error. In fact, G*Power version 3.1 does not include an option for computing within-within interactions for F-tests. The authors should provide a more detailed explanation of how the sample size was determined for the two-way repeated measures ANCOVA. 2) Treatment of Confounders in fNIRS Data In Lines 284–291, the features of the fNIRS device (INVOS 5100C) are described. However, the authors do not mention how potential confounders in fNIRS data, such as systemic physiological factors (e.g., respiration rate, heart rate), changes in scalp blood flow, and postural changes, were handled, even though it is well known that fNIRS data are vulnerable to these confounders. More details about fNIRS data processing should be provided. Additionally, it is unclear whether cerebral oxygenation was measured during the cognitive tasks. Typically, when investigating the association between cognitive functions and brain activation, fNIRS records oxyHb and deoxyHb during the cognitive tasks, not during exercise itself. Referring to Figure 10, the fNIRS data, represented as oxygen saturation (%), appear to have been measured during both exercise and VF conditions. The authors should clarify the validity and interpretation of fNIRS measurements in this study. 3) Statistical Analyses The authors used a two-way repeated measures ANCOVA with baseline EF performance as a covariate. However, this model may not be appropriate. Since both “Condition” (EC, VF, EC + VF) and “Time” (Pre, Post) are within-subject factors, the interaction between these two factors is sufficient to test for differential effects on EF. Including baseline EF performance as a covariate may be redundant. Moreover, because baseline scores are likely to be correlated with both pre- and post-test scores, their inclusion as covariates could introduce multicollinearity and bias the results. A repeated measures two-way ANOVA would likely be more appropriate. 4) Explanation of Gaze Fixation Gaze fixation is a central variable in the current study. However, the description is insufficient; the manuscript only states that “Gaze data were automatically collected into the iMotions software” (Line 380). To ensure reproducibility using different devices or software, the authors should provide more detailed information about how gaze fixation was measured and defined. 5) Other Issues (Typos and Errors) There are numerous typographical and formatting errors throughout the manuscript. A thorough review and revision are recommended. Examples include: -Line 154: “(see (41)” -> should be either “(see [41])” or “(see (41))” -Line 216: “(hits/hits + errors) x 100” → should be “(hits / (hits + errors)) × 100” -Line 341: “(see 3)” -> it is unclear what this refers to. -Line 403: “F(2,42) = ηp2 = 0.14, p = 0.046” → the F-value appears to be missing. -Line 437: “The upper panel of Figure 8 illustrates average rSO2 at the left optode, by Condition.” -> Figure 8 appears to display self-reported affect values, not rSO2. -Line 445: “t(39) = 22.23.” -> Please verify the degrees of freedom; this value seems unusually high. Reviewer #2: This pilot study examines the effects of dual-task training (ergometer cycling + visual foraging) on executive function (EF), prefrontal cortex (PFC) activation, and gaze behavior. The topic is timely, and the experimental design is rigorous, incorporating fNIRS, eye-tracking, and validated EF tasks. While the findings contribute to the literature on exercise-cognition interactions, several issues require clarification to strengthen the manuscript. Major Comments 1. The authors hypothesized that the combined condition (EC+VF) would yield greater EF improvements, yet the results did not support this (e.g., near-ceiling effects in EF tasks). This discrepancy should be discussed in more depth, addressing potential explanations such as task difficulty or individual differences. Consider higher-complexity EF tasks (e.g., 3-Back, Stroop) in future work to avoid such constraints. 2. The reduced cadence/energy in the EC+VF condition suggests dual-task costs, but the mechanistic explanation (e.g., resource competition vs. strategic trade-offs) is underdeveloped. The authors should: Cite dual-task frameworks (e.g., Kahneman’s Capacity Model) to contextualize findings. Discuss whether the observed PFC-gaze correlation in EC+VF reflects shared resources or compensatory effort. 3. Exercise Intensity Control: Cadence varied significantly between EC and EC+VF (Fig. 11). Was intensity matched via HR or RPE? If not, this confounds comparisons. fNIRS Data: Specify whether rSO₂ changes were normalized to baseline. Correlations between rSO₂ and behavioral outcomes (beyond gaze) would bolster claims about neural efficiency. 4. The Condition × Time × Covariate interaction for the Flanker task (p = 0.038) is a key finding but lacks post-hoc detail. Include effect sizes (e.g., η²) and simple-effects analyses to clarify which groups improved. Minor Comments 1. Figures/Tables: Label axes in Figures 8–11 (e.g., "rSO₂ (%)" and "Time (min)"). Report exact p-values (e.g., "p = .012" vs. "p < .05") in Table 2 footnotes. 2. Compare findings with meta-analysis to explain null results (e.g., differences in exercise intensity/duration). When discussing ecological validity of the foraging task, explicitly link it to real-world cycling scenarios (e.g., attentional allocation on roads). Language and Formatting 1. Standardize terms (e.g., "oxygen saturation" vs. "rSO₂"). 2. Check the fonts in all the pictures, including their colors and types. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Dear Dr. Bishop, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 26 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols . Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols . We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Takao Yamasaki Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: If the reviewer comments include a recommendation to cite specific previously published works, please review and evaluate these publications to determine whether they are relevant and should be cited. There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments: The authors need to make minor revisions in response to reviewer 1's comments. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: The authors have addressed most of the comments raised previously. Although I do not fully agree with all of the responses and additional explanations, the revised manuscript is generally convincing. However, the issue of the power analysis still remains. First, I agree that a sample size of 27 is adequate for the current study. Nevertheless, as noted in my previous comment, G*Power cannot directly perform a power analysis for a two-way repeated measures ANOVA model. Therefore, I assume that the authors conducted the analysis using either “ANOVA: Repeated measures, within factors,” “ANOVA: Repeated measures, within–between interaction,” or another approximation. The current explanation does not provide sufficient detail for readers to reproduce the analysis. I encourage the authors to clearly specify the exact procedure they used in G*Power. Furthermore, the reported effect size is inappropriate. For repeated measures ANOVA, the conventional indices are partial eta-squared (η²p) or f, not Cohen’s d as stated in the manuscript. It would strengthen the manuscript if the authors could report the appropriate effect size (η²p or f) used in the power analysis. Reviewer #2: I thank the authors for their thoughtful responses and great efforts to address the comments. I have no further comments for the authors to address at this time. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/ . 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The Effect of Ergometer Cycling and Visual Foraging on Brain Function: A Pilot Study PONE-D-25-20437R2 Dear Dr. Bishop, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Takao Yamasaki Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: Yes: Shinji Takahashi ********** |
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