Peer Review History
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PONE-D-25-41258-->-->Box breathing or six breaths per minute: which strategy improves athletes post-HIIT cardiovascular recovery?-->-->PLOS ONE?> Dear Dr. Kasap, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 09 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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Additional Editor Comments: Dear Dr. Murat Kasap Your manuscript entitled "Box breathing or six breaths per minute: which strategy improves athletes post-HIIT cardiovascular recovery? submitted to PLOS One has been reviewed. The comments of the reviewers are included at the bottom of this letter. The Reviewers found your manuscript interesting but it will require Major revision in order to be considered for publication. Therefore, I invite you to respond to the Reviewers' comments and revise your manuscript. Reviewer #1: The study sought to investigate a relevant topic by comparing the impact of three different breathing protocols on cardiovascular and perceptual recovery. The proposal is interesting, as it addresses an area of growing scientific and practical interest, especially in the context of physical performance and health. However, some adjustments are necessary to improve the clarity and consistency of the text. General Recommendations References should be formatted according to the Vancouver style, as required by the journal. Objectives and hypotheses should be presented within the running text, rather than in separate subsections. Introduction Line 43: The sentence “...also how and how quickly the body responds to this load..” contains a repeated “how” and should be corrected. Line 52: The term “psychological variables” requires clarification. Please specify which variables are considered (e.g., stress) and provide a brief description. Materials and Methods Exclusion criteria were not reported. If applied, please describe them. Was there any control regarding the type of sport practiced by participants? Certain sports involving respiratory techniques could bias the sample. Please provide more details about the randomization process, including the method used. Clarify how respiratory control was adequately ensured during the procedures. Were heart rate variability (HRV) data collected? If so, their inclusion could substantially enrich the discussion. Results Measures of dispersion for the mean difference are missing in Table 4. Discussion The paragraph addressing heart rate variability states: “In addition, the difference detected in heart rate variability was found to be significant not only statistically but also in terms of effect size (η² = 0.127). In particular, Cohen's d = 0.907 obtained in the comparison between Box Breathing and 6 Breaths/min indicates a large difference. This supports the idea that the aforementioned breathing technique may have a significant effect on physiological stress.” This section is confusing. It is necessary to clarify whether HRV data were actually collected or whether only heart rate (HR) was measured. HRV indices, such as time-domain and frequency-domain parameters, could strengthen the interpretation of the findings. If only HR was measured, please revise the terminology to avoid misleading readers by conflating HR with HRV. Reviewer #2: This manuscript presents an experimental study comparing the effects of two controlled breathing strategies—box breathing and breathing at six cycles per minute (6 bpm)—on cardiovascular and perceptual recovery after HIIT sessions on a cycle ergometer. This is a current topic of practical relevance for sports training and exercise physiology, especially considering the scarcity of studies on respiratory protocols applied to acute recovery after high-intensity exercise. The study is well-structured, with an appropriate methodological design (randomized crossover), an adequate sample size (n = 40), and statistical analysis consistent with the proposed objectives (repeated measures ANOVA, Tukey's post-hoc test, sample power analysis, and effect size calculation). The article also meets the formal criteria required by PLOS ONE, such as sections on ethics, conflicts of interest, and data availability. However, for the manuscript to fully meet the publication criteria, adjustments are needed regarding methodological clarity, standardization of language, and a more in-depth discussion of practical aspects and limitations. Strengths The topic is relevant and applied, with direct implications for optimizing recovery between HIIT sessions, a critical factor for athletic performance and safety in training prescription. The randomized crossover experimental design is adequate to minimize interindividual variability, increasing the reliability of the findings. The sample size (n = 40) is satisfactory, and the inclusion of power analysis via G*Power demonstrates methodological rigor. The presentation of the results through tables and figures is well-designed, facilitating comprehension of the data and effectively complementing the text. Points to Address 1. Determination of HRmax The manuscript states that participants performed HIIT based on 85–95% of their maximum heart rate (HRmax), but does not specify how this HRmax was determined. It is essential to clarify whether a direct exercise stress test or a predictive formula (e.g., 220 - age) was used, as this directly impacts the accuracy of the exercise prescription. 2. Standardization of Terminology There are inconsistencies in how the six-cycles-per-minute breathing protocol is referred to: "six breaths per minute," "6 breaths/min," "6 breaths/minute." It is suggested to standardize this to "6 bpm" (breaths per minute) throughout the manuscript, maintaining consistency and clarity. 3. Discussion – Practical Applicability The discussion could be improved with greater emphasis on the practical implications of the findings, especially for coaches, physical trainers, and physiologists. For example, how can the 6 bpm breathing protocol be easily implemented in sports settings? What is the best way to instruct athletes? Should it be applied immediately after exercise or in separate sessions? 4. Limitations The study acknowledges limitations such as its focus on acute effects and the sample size of young university students. However, it is recommended to emphasize that the generalizability of the results is limited and that the effects may vary depending on the intensity of the exercise, the sport, and the training level of the participants. 5. Redundancy and Style The discussion presents some repetitions and could be more concise in certain sections. A revision is suggested for greater objectivity, without compromising the depth of the analysis. Summary Recommendations Include clear details on the method for determining HRmax. Standardize the nomenclature to "6 bpm" throughout the text. Streamline the discussion, reducing repetitions. Expand the discussion on the practical applicability of respiratory protocols. Reinforce the limitations related to the sample and the acute nature of the observed effects. Final Comment This manuscript presents a relevant and well-conducted contribution to the field of exercise physiology, exploring understudied respiratory strategies in the context of post-HIIT recovery. The suggested adjustments are specific and aim to improve methodological clarity, textual standardization, and the applied value of the discussion. With these modifications, the study has the potential for publication in PLOS ONE. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: The study sought to investigate a relevant topic by comparing the impact of three different breathing protocols on cardiovascular and perceptual recovery. The proposal is interesting, as it addresses an area of growing scientific and practical interest, especially in the context of physical performance and health. However, some adjustments are necessary to improve the clarity and consistency of the text. General Recommendations References should be formatted according to the Vancouver style, as required by the journal. Objectives and hypotheses should be presented within the running text, rather than in separate subsections. Introduction Line 43: The sentence “...also how and how quickly the body responds to this load..” contains a repeated “how” and should be corrected. Line 52: The term “psychological variables” requires clarification. Please specify which variables are considered (e.g., stress) and provide a brief description. Materials and Methods Exclusion criteria were not reported. If applied, please describe them. Was there any control regarding the type of sport practiced by participants? Certain sports involving respiratory techniques could bias the sample. Please provide more details about the randomization process, including the method used. Clarify how respiratory control was adequately ensured during the procedures. Were heart rate variability (HRV) data collected? If so, their inclusion could substantially enrich the discussion. Results Measures of dispersion for the mean difference are missing in Table 4. Discussion The paragraph addressing heart rate variability states: “In addition, the difference detected in heart rate variability was found to be significant not only statistically but also in terms of effect size (η² = 0.127). In particular, Cohen's d = 0.907 obtained in the comparison between Box Breathing and 6 Breaths/min indicates a large difference. This supports the idea that the aforementioned breathing technique may have a significant effect on physiological stress.” This section is confusing. It is necessary to clarify whether HRV data were actually collected or whether only heart rate (HR) was measured. HRV indices, such as time-domain and frequency-domain parameters, could strengthen the interpretation of the findings. If only HR was measured, please revise the terminology to avoid misleading readers by conflating HR with HRV. Reviewer #2: Overview This manuscript presents an experimental study comparing the effects of two controlled breathing strategies—box breathing and breathing at six cycles per minute (6 bpm)—on cardiovascular and perceptual recovery after HIIT sessions on a cycle ergometer. This is a current topic of practical relevance for sports training and exercise physiology, especially considering the scarcity of studies on respiratory protocols applied to acute recovery after high-intensity exercise. The study is well-structured, with an appropriate methodological design (randomized crossover), an adequate sample size (n = 40), and statistical analysis consistent with the proposed objectives (repeated measures ANOVA, Tukey's post-hoc test, sample power analysis, and effect size calculation). The article also meets the formal criteria required by PLOS ONE, such as sections on ethics, conflicts of interest, and data availability. However, for the manuscript to fully meet the publication criteria, adjustments are needed regarding methodological clarity, standardization of language, and a more in-depth discussion of practical aspects and limitations. Strengths The topic is relevant and applied, with direct implications for optimizing recovery between HIIT sessions, a critical factor for athletic performance and safety in training prescription. The randomized crossover experimental design is adequate to minimize interindividual variability, increasing the reliability of the findings. The sample size (n = 40) is satisfactory, and the inclusion of power analysis via G*Power demonstrates methodological rigor. The presentation of the results through tables and figures is well-designed, facilitating comprehension of the data and effectively complementing the text. Points to Address 1. Determination of HRmax The manuscript states that participants performed HIIT based on 85–95% of their maximum heart rate (HRmax), but does not specify how this HRmax was determined. It is essential to clarify whether a direct exercise stress test or a predictive formula (e.g., 220 - age) was used, as this directly impacts the accuracy of the exercise prescription. 2. Standardization of Terminology There are inconsistencies in how the six-cycles-per-minute breathing protocol is referred to: "six breaths per minute," "6 breaths/min," "6 breaths/minute." It is suggested to standardize this to "6 bpm" (breaths per minute) throughout the manuscript, maintaining consistency and clarity. 3. Discussion – Practical Applicability The discussion could be improved with greater emphasis on the practical implications of the findings, especially for coaches, physical trainers, and physiologists. For example, how can the 6 bpm breathing protocol be easily implemented in sports settings? What is the best way to instruct athletes? Should it be applied immediately after exercise or in separate sessions? 4. Limitations The study acknowledges limitations such as its focus on acute effects and the sample size of young university students. However, it is recommended to emphasize that the generalizability of the results is limited and that the effects may vary depending on the intensity of the exercise, the sport, and the training level of the participants. 5. Redundancy and Style The discussion presents some repetitions and could be more concise in certain sections. A revision is suggested for greater objectivity, without compromising the depth of the analysis. Summary Recommendations Include clear details on the method for determining HRmax. Standardize the nomenclature to "6 bpm" throughout the text. Streamline the discussion, reducing repetitions. Expand the discussion on the practical applicability of respiratory protocols. Reinforce the limitations related to the sample and the acute nature of the observed effects. Final Comment This manuscript presents a relevant and well-conducted contribution to the field of exercise physiology, exploring understudied respiratory strategies in the context of post-HIIT recovery. The suggested adjustments are specific and aim to improve methodological clarity, textual standardization, and the applied value of the discussion. With these modifications, the study has the potential for publication in PLOS ONE. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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