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| Original SubmissionOctober 27, 2025 |
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PONE-D-25-57679A data-driven analysis of spatiotemporal cues and experience accumulation effects for pitch type predictionPLOS One Dear Dr. Takamido, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 01 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This study endeavors to identify the spatio - temporal cues for predicting baseball pitch types and analyze the experience accumulation effect by means of data - driven machine learning approaches. The research perspective holds a certain degree of novelty, and the methodological design is relatively systematic. Nevertheless: ### 1. Research Sample and Data - **Limited Sample Size**: The sample consists of only 8 pitchers, all of whom are at the college level. This significantly restricts the generalizability of the research findings. It is advisable to explicitly state this limitation within the discussion section and propose that future research incorporate a more diverse and higher - caliber athlete sample. - **Insufficient Basis for Pitch Type Classification**: The classification of pitch types is solely predicated on speed differentials (≥10 km/h) and pitchers' self - reports. The absence of objective pitch trajectory data (such as lateral or vertical displacements provided by TrackMan) may introduce classification biases. - **Unbalanced Data**: There is an imbalance in the number of fastballs and off - speed pitches among pitchers. Despite attempts to balance the data during sampling, this may still impact the stability and generalization ability of the model during training. ### 2. Methodological Modeling and Interpretation - **Unverified Association with Human Cognition**: The study highlights the adoption of a logistic regression model due to its interpretability. However, it fails to verify whether the "cues" identified by the model are actually utilized by human batters. It is recommended to clearly demarcate between "machine - identifiable information" and "information practically employed by humans" in the discussion. - **Assumption of Temporal Independence**: The model is trained independently at each time point, overlooking the temporal dependence inherent in the action sequence. It is suggested to supplement the analysis with sequence models such as LSTM or GRU for comparative purposes and explore the influence of temporal information on prediction. - **Oversimplified Feature Engineering**: Feature engineering is overly simplistic, relying solely on joint angles while neglecting dynamic features such as joint velocities and accelerations, which may contain more discriminative information. ### 3. Result Analysis and Interpretation - **Over - Reliance on Cluster Permutation Tests in Statistical Analysis**: Although cluster permutation tests are suitable for time - series data, the failure to report effect sizes (such as Cohen's d) renders it arduous to evaluate the practical significance of the results. - **Inadequate Analysis of Individual Differences**: While individual differences are acknowledged, a deeper analysis of their origins (such as pitching motion styles and pitch type combinations) is lacking. There is a dearth of in - depth exploration regarding why certain pitchers are more predictable. - **Prudent Interpretation of the "Experience Accumulation Effect"**: The improvement in model accuracy with an increase in training samples does not necessarily equate to the "experience accumulation" of human batters. This should be clearly presented as a computational analogy rather than direct evidence of a cognitive mechanism in the discussion. ### 4. Manuscript Writing and Structure - **Refinement of English Expression**: Some sentences are overly long and exhibit unnatural grammar. It is recommended to seek professional English editing services or the assistance of native speakers for language refinement. - **Chaos in Figure Referencing**: The manuscript frequently refers to "Fig 5–Fig 10", yet some figures in the submitted file are labeled as "In review" or are missing, which severely hinders the review process. - **Streamlining of the Discussion Section**: Some parts of the discussion section repetitively describe the results. It is advisable to strengthen the comparison with prior research and accentuate the theoretical contributions and practical implications of this study. Reviewer #2: The manuscript aims to explore, through an innovative perspective, how data-driven analytics and machine learning can reveal spatiotemporal cues relevant to baseball pitch prediction. The study is distinguished by its complementary approach to conventional research, overcoming the limitations of hypothesis-based paradigms and allowing the identification of predictive information sources that, traditionally, might escape observation. The authors use ML models applied to time series of joint angles collected through motion capture, performing two distinct analyses—one on the temporal evolution of cues and the other on the effects of accumulating opponent-specific information. The originality of the project lies in the integration of ML predictions with detailed analysis of body movement, providing new insight into the moments and regions where relevant cues appear, as well as how progressive experience with the same pitcher can influence predictive accuracy. The study thus makes a significant contribution to the understanding of the mechanisms of sports prediction, opening promising directions for future research and for combining computational methods with the assessment of real-life athlete behavior. The introduction of the article is notable for its solid structure and convincing argumentation of the need for the study. The theoretical context of sports prediction is clearly presented, and the specialized literature is coherently integrated, which gives the text rigor and academic relevance. Also, the contributions made by the proposed method are well outlined: the identification of spatiotemporal cues, the use of real athlete data, and the analysis of the accumulation of opponent-specific information. The objectives are explicitly stated, and the originality of the ML-based approach is evident, which reinforces the innovative nature of the research. However, the introduction could be improved by more concisely formulating the limits of conventional methods and by more directly clarifying the problems they raise, such as the dependence on pre-established hypotheses and the risk of omitting relevant cues. In addition, mentioning the methodological challenges related to the relatively small data set or individual variations would strengthen the justification for choosing the proposed method. A slightly more compact structuring of the section would facilitate reading and highlight more clearly the exact direction of the study's contribution. The Materials and Methods section provides a rigorous and well-founded presentation of how the machine learning-based analysis for baseball pitch prediction was built. The choice of task is well-argued by its relevance to real-world game situations, and the use of individualized models for each pitcher faithfully reflects how athletes construct their knowledge of their opponents. At the same time, the integration of theoretical concepts — including the adaptation of modern neuroscientific frameworks — gives depth to the approach, and the clear presentation of the two analyses, together with the availability of the code on GitHub, supports transparency and replicability. On the other hand, including a lot of technical information in a compact space can make the material difficult to navigate. Some methodological explanations, descriptions of the ML model, and theoretical justifications appear grouped in extended paragraphs, which the reader may require additional information. A more fragmented structuring and more direct restatement of certain concepts—for example, the reason why postural cues were treated independently at each temporal point—could make the presentation more accessible. In the Discussion section, the authors manage to coherently capitalize on the results obtained, emphasizing both the relevance of spatial and temporal cues and the way in which they align with previous research. It is the merit of the text that it highlights original contributions, such as the emergence of predictive cues in earlier phases of the movement or the influence of information accumulation on anticipatory accuracy. The connection with applied sports phenomena, such as the “Times Through the Order Penalty”, strengthens the practical value of the conclusions. The analysis of differences between pitchers and the suggestion of future directions — including direct comparisons with athlete behavior or the expansion of the database — pertinently complete the interpretation of the results. However, the exposition of ideas in the Discussions is sometimes very rich, which can make the thread of explanations harder to follow. Some passages include several interpretive directions at the same time, and certain details about the models or the structure of the temporal data would have been more appropriate in the methodological part. At the same time, the practical applicability could be further delimited by a clarification of the inherent limits of ML models in relation to the real perceptual strategies of athletes. A more visible thematic segmentation would facilitate the understanding of the evolution of the arguments. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I appreciate the author's revisions; I now believe the article is ready for publication in a journal. Reviewer #2: I thank the authors for their detailed responses and rigorous revisions to the manuscript. The changes made reflect real attention to the comments made during the review process and demonstrate a sustained effort to clarify and strengthen the study's contribution. The reformulation of several conventional methods, clarification of methodological challenges related to small data sets and interindividual variation, and the restructuring of the Introduction, Materials and Methods, and Discussion sections have significantly improved the readability and coherence of the argument. In particular, the thematic segmentation of the Discussion and the clearer delineation of the practical implications and limitations of machine learning models contribute to a more balanced and nuanced interpretation of the results. I believe that these revisions make a substantial contribution to the scientific quality of the article and will facilitate the development of its contribution by readers. I congratulate the team of authors for the careful and professional way in which they approached the review process and for the care they need, which undoubtedly reinforce the value of the manuscript. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes:Ilie Eva ********** |
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