Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMay 16, 2025 |
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Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: The paper accurately reflects the focus of the study—exploring the relationship between COVID-19-related stress and mental health outcomes in international students. The use of a mixed-methods approach is also clearly signaled, which is a strength, as it suggests both quantitative and qualitative data are utilized. This paper is a valuable contribution to the growing body of research on the pandemic’s mental health impact. It particularly underscores the unique stressors international students face. While some methodological clarifications may be needed, the paper offers important insights and practical implications for improving mental health support systems in higher education. Reviewer #2: 1. The voluntary email- and social-media recruitment strategy is likely to have attracted students who were already engaged or distressed; please acknowledge this selection bias and explain how it limits generalizability to the wider international‐student population—especially those who are less connected to university listservs or who disengaged during the pandemic. 2. The study is single-institution and Florida-specific, with data collected in October 2020 (pre-vaccine, high policy uncertainty). Add a brief paragraph clarifying how time, place, and institutional context constrain external validity; readers need to know that results may not transfer to other campuses, later stages of the pandemic, or countries with different support systems. 3. Provide basic regional or cultural origin data (e.g., East Asia, Latin America, South Asia). If they were not collected, state this explicitly as a limitation because pandemic experiences and acculturative stress vary by region. 4. The xenophobia subscale of the COVID-Stress Scale was removed, yet discrimination is central to international-student stress. Offer a detailed rationale (e.g., conceptual mismatch, redundancy, statistical misfit), report any reliability or validity analyses you ran with and without that subscale, and discuss what information may have been lost by excluding it. 5. Explain why path analysis was chosen instead of a simpler multiple-regression framework. If the intent was to model simultaneous outcomes, indirect effects, or moderation, state that plainly and note any underlying assumptions (e.g., multivariate normality, linearity) and diagnostics performed. 6. Clarify whether the path coefficients were standardized using the rescaled CSS variable (divided by 10). Readers will want to know if interpretation of effect sizes aligns across differently scaled measures. 7. Unmeasured confounders—prior mental-health history, coping style, visa status, social support, cultural distance—could affect both stress and mental-health outcomes. A short paragraph in the limitations acknowledging these unrecorded factors would temper causal claims. 8. Missing data were minimal, but specify how you verified that data were missing completely at random before proceeding with listwise deletion. If you ran Little’s MCAR test or examined patterns, report it. 9. Adopt a joint display to integrate quantitative and qualitative findings. A simple matrix could list each significant quantitative association (e.g., COVID-19 stress → anxiety stronger for undergraduates) next to illustrative quotes and thematic interpretations (academic workload, faculty expectations). This single table or figure would satisfy mixed-methods best practice and make triangulation evident. 10. Integration in the discussion is currently light. Deliberately weave qualitative insights into each key quantitative result—e.g., link the regression coefficient for financial strain to the narrative of job loss and remittances; use grief quotes to contextualize the depression path coefficient. 11. The qualitative strand relies on a single open-ended question and one coder. Describe how you ensured rigor—inter-coder reliability (even a second coder on a 20 % subsample), peer debriefing, reflexive journaling, or member checking. If none were applied, state that explicitly and recognize the interpretive limitation. 12. Applied thematic analysis usually involves iterative coding, codebook refinement, and theme saturation checks. Outline the exact steps: how many iterations, how code definitions evolved, how you decided saturation was reached with 115 responses, and whether you tracked theme-frequency counts. 13. Consider adding sub-theme counts or proportions (e.g., “40 % of undergraduates mentioned academic pressure vs 25 % of graduates”). Even simple counts in the joint display would help readers judge the weight of each theme across groups. 14. Offer a brief reflexivity statement: describe the coder’s positionality (international student? domestic? researcher role?) and how that may have influenced interpretation of narrative responses. 15. The discussion of the non-significant moderation for depression is brief. Speculate why education level does not modify this pathway—perhaps depressive symptoms arise from universal stressors (loss, isolation) less tied to academic role—and reference any supporting literature. 16. Provide clearer reasoning for scaling the CSS scores by dividing by 10. While it aids comparability, reassure readers that scaling did not distort reliability or model estimates, and note that scaling does not affect significance. 17. The Cronbach’s alpha values are strong, but add item-total or subscale alphas in an online supplement; this would be especially helpful given the CSS modification. 18. Acknowledge social-desirability and recall bias inherent in self-reported mental-health scales, and note that online anonymity may mitigate but not eliminate these effects. 19. Table 1 and Table 2 contain a mix of continuous means and ordinal age categories; consider reporting median and IQR for skewed variables or justify why means are appropriate despite large SDs (e.g., anxiety). 20. You reference “normality assumptions were met” for path analysis; briefly state how this was checked (e.g., skewness/kurtosis thresholds, inspection of histograms). 21. The IRB description is inconsistent—one section is blinded, another lists the board and approval ID. Align them (non-blinded) to avoid reader confusion and to meet PLOS data-sharing transparency norms. 22. End with a concise conclusion section that recaps the integrated findings: “COVID-19–specific stress increased anxiety (especially for undergraduates) and depression in all international students; qualitative narratives identify academic pressure, financial strain, travel constraints, social isolation, and grief as underlying mechanisms. Universities should…” This will give readers a clear takeaway. 23. Finally, recommend posting the anonymized dataset and analytic code (Mplus and Excel coding files) in a public repository to adhere to PLOS ONE’s data-availability standards and enhance reproducibility. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Exploring the influence of COVID-19 stress on mental health among international undergraduate and graduate students: A mixed-methods approach PONE-D-25-25688R1 Dear Dr. Salinas-Miranda, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Mukhtiar Baig, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #2: All reviewer suggestions have been appropriately incorporated or justified, with line references, new text additions, and supplementary materials confirming compliance with PLOS ONE’s methodological and data-sharing standards. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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