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[Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: This paper is well-written, clearly structured, and addresses an important issue in health services research. While the study provides valuable insights, the following suggestions are intended to further strengthen its quality and enhance its potential for publication. • The study addresses a relevant and timely topic in health services research by examining how physician payment models influence cardiac imaging in low-risk populations. • The use of a large retrospective cohort from administrative health data in Alberta enhances the robustness and generalizability of the findings. • The manuscript is generally well-written, with clear articulation of the research objective, methods, results, and conclusions. • The study design is appropriate for the research question, and the use of multilevel, multivariable logistic regression is methodologically sound. • The classification of patients into low cardiovascular risk is appropriately done using administrative data, although the limitations of such classification should be more clearly acknowledged. • The description of the payment models (fee-for-service vs. salary-based) could benefit from additional context to aid readers unfamiliar with the Canadian healthcare system. • The finding that salary-based physicians, particularly internal medicine specialists, are less likely to order imaging is compelling and aligns with hypotheses regarding financial incentives. • The discussion provides a good synthesis of the results, although more emphasis could be placed on potential policy implications of these findings. • The conclusion is supported by the presented data and underscores the role of physician incentives in potentially unnecessary care. • The authors performed several sensitivity analyses to confirm the robustness of their findings, which is commendable. • The manuscript could improve by including a brief explanation of the ethical approval process, particularly given the use of administrative health data. • Some figures or tables (if available in the full version) may need more detailed legends to stand alone for clarity. • There is no indication of ethical concerns or misconduct related to research design, data analysis, or authorship. Reviewer #2: Good work,the topic is timely and relevant, addressing an underexplored area within health services research. However, the manuscript would benefit from several improvements to maximize its global relevance, contextual clarity, and analytical completeness. The comments below are intended to guide your revision constructively. 1. Title and Keywords 1.1 The title is technically accurate but long and clinical. Consider simplifying it to improve accessibility, e.g., Physician Payment Models and Cardiac Imaging in Low-Risk Patients: A Population-Based Cohort Study in Alberta, Canada. 1.2 The keywords do not sufficiently capture the paper’s scope or uniqueness. Suggested replacements: physician remuneration, cardiac test overuse, primary care incentives, Alberta health system, low-value care. 2. Abstract 2.1 Avoid jargon like “receipt of imaging” — use more universally understood terms. 2.2 The conclusion is too narrowly framed. Consider broadening its relevance to readers unfamiliar with Canadian payment models. 3. Introduction 3.1 The introduction is well-focused on Choosing Wisely and overuse but lacks global context. A comparison of physician payment models across countries (e.g., FFS, capitation, salary) would help orient an international audience. 3.2 The literature cited is mainly Canadian; expanding to include studies from the US, UK, or Australia would strengthen framing. broaden this 3.3 The study objective is clearly stated but could be linked more explicitly to the broader issue of health system design and policy reform. 4. Methods 4.1 The study design is appropriate, but the term “retrospective cohort” may overstate longitudinal rigor. A more precise description would be: “A population-based cohort study using health service data in Alberta, Canada.” 4.2 The assumption of imaging attribution to the nearest outpatient visit should be explained and justified. 4.3 The impact of COVID-19 on test volumes in 2020 is not discussed. A sensitivity analysis excluding 2020 or a clear rationale for inclusion is needed. 4.4 While physician- and patient-level variables are handled well, missing clinical variables (e.g., symptoms) should be flagged more explicitly in Methods, not just in Discussion. 4.5 Ethics approval is mentioned but would benefit from more clarity — include board name, reference number, or waiver status. 5. Results 5.1 Results are presented clearly but are overly text-heavy. Consider including: A forest plot of ORs A STROBE-style flow diagram for cohort construction A bar or line chart showing temporal trends (2012–2020) 5.2 The interpretation of ORs should be supported with absolute risk or test rate examples to enhance real-world understanding. 5.3 No subgroup results by sex, rurality, or age are discussed — such insights could enrich interpretation. 5.4 Specialty comparisons could be disaggregated further for clarity (e.g., GP vs internist vs cardiologist). 5.5 A map or graph showing regional imaging variation would be informative. 6. Discussion 6.1 The discussion is balanced but too narrowly scoped. 6.2 Future research directions are not addressed. Consider suggesting: Multi-jurisdictional comparisons Studies with clinical data to assess appropriate vs inappropriate imaging Implications for payment reform or low-value care monitoring 6.3 The conclusion line is overly technical: “Physician payment models and specialty are strongly associated with receipt of imaging…” Consider rephrasing for global readability, e.g.: “How physicians are paid appears to influence imaging use patterns, even in low-risk patients. This has implications for health systems aiming to reduce low-value care.” 7. Global Relevance and Framing 7.1 The framing leans heavily on Alberta/Canada context. Consider: Generalizing findings into broader health economics or system design language Citing international frameworks (e.g., OECD health data, Choosing Wisely Global) 7.2 While local details are critical, striking a balance between specificity and transferability would increase the paper’s reach and relevance. This manuscript is well-conceived and methodologically sound but would benefit from revisions that strengthen its clarity, expand its global framing, and deepen result interpretability. Addressing the issues outlined above will improve the paper . all the best ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: Yes: Mohsin Hassan Alvi Reviewer #2: Yes: Thamburaj Anthuvan ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Physician payment models and cardiac imaging in patients at low cardiovascular risk: a population-based cohort study in Alberta, Canada. PONE-D-25-18807R1 Dear Dr. Manns, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Jialing Lin Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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