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| Original SubmissionApril 14, 2025 |
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Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: The present study examined how package labels influence food valuation—specifically perceived healthiness, perceived tastiness, and willingness to pay (WTP). The authors demonstrate that color‐coded frames indicating Nutri‐Score categories modulate these ratings as well as WTP. These behavioral changes are accompanied by increased fMRI BOLD responses in reward‐related, cognitive-control, and homeostatic regions. Overall, the manuscript clearly states its aims, results, and conclusions. My comments are as follows. Fixed order of conditions: The control trials always preceded the treatment trials. This fixed sequence could be a critical confound: differences in behavior and neural activity may reflect order effects rather than the manipulation itself. Please discuss this issue. Visual disparity between conditions: The treatment condition included a colored frame around each food image, whereas the control condition did not. Consequently, any behavioral or neural differences might stem from the mere presence of salient color cues rather than their Nutri-Score meaning. Please consider addressing this alternative explanation. vmPFC/striatum correlations with WTP: BOLD activity in reward-processing areas such as the ventromedial prefrontal cortex and striatum is consistently correlated with WTP. Did your data replicate this established relationship? Reporting such a validation would strengthen confidence in the fMRI findings. Sample-size justification: The manuscript does not explain how the sample size was determined. Please provide a power analysis or other rationale (e.g., prior literature, resource constraints) to justify the chosen N. Reviewer #2: 1. Page 6: I am a bit surprised that you have not formulated any hypotheses, especially for the food rating task (but also for the fMRI experiment). It would be interesting to be able to compare your findings to what you would expect based on the literature. 2. Page 8, lines 162-164: Why are the behavioral data not included in the paper? It might be interesting to see whether what happens on a neural level is in line with what participants indicate themselves. 3. Page 9, lines 179-181: Based on the title, I initially expected the study to focus specifically on the Nutri-Score front-of-pack (FOP) label. However, the experimental design uses only three colors derived from the Nutri-Score system, without incorporating its full structure—most notably, the accompanying letter grades and the complete five-color scale. These additional components are central to the Nutri-Score’s intended function, which is to avoid overly simplistic, dichotomous thinking and to provide a more nuanced, graded evaluation of product healthfulness. From a theoretical standpoint, and in line with Cadario and Chandon’s (2020) typology, the Nutri-Score is best classified as a cognitive nudge, as it provides consumers with explicit evaluative information. In contrast, the manipulation tested in your study—color-coded product frames—would more accurately be described as an affective nudge, since it relies on intuitive and emotional responses to color cues rather than direct informational content. While the neural findings you report are potentially valuable, I believe the current framing of the paper as an investigation of the neural correlates of a front-of-pack label may be misleading. A more precise positioning would clarify that the study focuses on an affective cue inspired by elements of FOP labeling, rather than a direct examination of a complete label system such as the Nutri-Score. In my opinion, the experiment does not answer the question raised in the introduction: “How do these labels alter food perception and decision-making?”. 4. Following up on the previous comment, the theoretical background should elaborate on how the chosen nudge (in your case the use of colored frames) has affected consumers’ perceptions. Currently, there is very limited information on how the Nutri-Score affects WTP, healthiness perceptions and tastiness perceptions and the focus is immediately on neural activation. As I would no longer focus on the Nutri-Score in your research, I do not suggest to include these findings in the theoretical background of the paper. However, I would recommend to include some overview of how affective nudges have impacted WTP, healthiness perceptions and tastiness perceptions in previous research. 5. I think it is important to include the fact that you ran a pretest in the paper to select the different products (which is now explained in the S2 file). Based on this pretest, I am bit worried about the 6 options you used to measure willingness to pay, given that some products were priced higher than the maximum (i.e., €3.19). Maybe this is something to include in the limitations section of your study? 6. Although the fMRI sample size (n = 40) is solid, the behavioral sample may be underpowered. A formal power analysis would help justify the adequacy of this sample. 7. Page 9, lines 184-185: Although I understand why you first showed the control trials, I would have suggested to counterbalance across participants and present the control trials first to some participants and the experimental trials first to others. You now introduce order confounds. This should be included as a limitation of your study. 8. Page 10, lines 193-195: I do not understand why all participants rated the products in the same sequence. This design choice introduces potential order effects and undermines randomization. 9. Page 13-14: Your current analyses do not take into account the hierarchical data structure (i.e., you average the responses across the 21 green, yellow, and red-framed products) for each dependent variable. Hence, you ignore trial level variability as well as potential differences between stimuli. Therefore, I would recommend to run multilevel analyses. In addition, multilevel models can deal better with missing data (which you very likely have as respondents have to answer quickly). 10. Page 13-14: In line with comment number 5, I am worried that the fact that you found that WTP and tastiness dropped in the color conditions may be partly explained by participant fatigue. 11. Page 13-14: I would suggest reporting effect sizes (cohen’s d) for the post hoc tests. 12. It is important to rewrite the discussion. Now it is constantly mentioned that you studied whether labels impact decision values, this claim overstates the manipulation. A color-coded frame is not equivalent to a front-of-pack nutrition label. 13. Page 19, lines 383: You mention “it was hypothesized” though no hypothesis were included in the manuscript. 14. Page 19, lines 387-388: Why would you expect that the green frame would positively impact tastiness perceptions? Participants were informed upfront that the frames were health-related, so why would participants infer that a healthier product is also tastier? This is actually going against a large body of literature on the unhealthy = tasty intuition (Raghunathan, Naylor, & Hoyer, 2006). Reference: Raghunathan, R., Naylor, R. W., & Hoyer, W. D. (2006). The unhealthy= tasty intuition and its effects on taste inferences, enjoyment, and choice of food products. Journal of Marketing, 70(4), 170-184. Some smaller comments: 1. Page 13, line 173: I would start the sentence with “An ANOVA revealed…” 2. Small typo on page 14, line 274: η²partial = 46 should be η²partial = .46 ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Dear Dr. Javaheri, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 24 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. 2. Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: 1. I would kindly suggest formulating the hypotheses in a more formal and structured way. It would be helpful to number them and present them in a separate paragraph (e.g., H1, H2, etc.), so that you can then clearly refer back to them in the results section. 2. Regarding my earlier third comment, I feel it has not been fully addressed. As I mentioned, your study examines an affective rather than a cognitive nudge. However, references on how affective nudges influence consumer behavior are still missing. Adding these would considerably strengthen the theoretical foundation of your paper. 3. More generally, I think the theoretical background could benefit from a clearer structure. I would suggest starting with a discussion of behavioral responses to color-coded labels and frames, exploring this stream of research in more depth, and then formulating hypotheses (H1, H2, etc.) related to the behavioral aspects. Afterwards, you could discuss the literature on neural responses and also formulate formal hypotheses in this section. Following the same structure throughout the paper would make it much easier for readers to follow your argument. 4. Page 21, lines 412–414: I recommend nuancing the statement “which is consistent with prior research of how FoPL alter choices (2,19).” For the Nutri-Score in particular, findings are mixed: while some studies show that consumers tend to select more healthy products, they do not substantially modify their choices of unhealthy products (see below). van den Akker, K., Bartelet, D., Brouwer, L., Luijpers, S., Nap, T., & Havermans, R. (2022). The impact of the nutri-score on food choice: A choice experiment in a Dutch supermarket. Appetite, 168, 105664. De Temmerman, J., Heeremans, E., Slabbinck, H., & Vermeir, I. (2021). The impact of the Nutri-Score nutrition label on perceived healthiness and purchase intentions. Appetite, 157, 104995. 5. I recommend adding the multilevel results to the appendices, as these analyses are, in my opinion, more appropriate and provide a more accurate representation than the current approach. Including them as supplementary material would strengthen the manuscript and allow readers to better assess the robustness of the findings. Thank you, my other comments have been addressed satisfactorily. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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