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| Original SubmissionFebruary 26, 2025 |
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Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: This manuscript presents a novel and region-specific epidemiological study on the association between birth month and allergic diseases (AD, AR, and asthma) in children. The dataset size and analytical methods are commendable. This is the first study of its kind in Russia and adds valuable data to the international literature on seasonal and perinatal risk factors for allergy. Major Comments: The conclusion implies causality (e.g., "seasonality is an independent factor"). This wording should be revised to reflect an association rather than causation due to the observational nature of the study. While asthma was included, its adjusted odds ratios were not statistically significant. This point should be addressed more clearly in the Discussion section. Limitations such as parental recall bias, self-selection in the data collection process, and potential unmeasured confounding (e.g., vitamin D levels, exposure to specific allergens) should be more explicitly discussed. Figures and tables should include more descriptive legends for better standalone comprehension. Minor Comments: Minor language edits are suggested, such as: “requiring merits further investigation” → “which merits further investigation” "In the Russian" → "In Russia" Reviewer #2: Thank you for the opportunity to review this study on month of birth and allergic outcomes based in Moscow, Russia. It is nice to see some Russian data on this topic and excellent that the authors have put it in the context of other findings particularly in the northern hemisphere with similar seasonality. Some comments: 1. METHODS: The main issue with this study is that it potentially is affected by selection bias. The study population has been selected as children who went to a pediatric visit. Does this mean that the study population is only children who have some kind of illness or do all children in Russia go to pediatricians? I think more context needs to be supplied. In Western countries usually only children with very particular issues go to pediatricians, and often only if their parents can afford it. Therefore, there could be two layers of selection bias which effect the generalisability of these findings - only children with illnesses, and only wealthy people. Please put more context and description around these points. The fact that there are 50 000 children who go to pediatricians in only a 9 month period seems really large, so I think explanations about practices in Russia would help. Is there a way to include the general population in this study? if not, then it needs to be specified in the abstract, main findings, discussion that these findings are within a population of children with health issues and the issues with generalisability must be discussed in the Limitations section. 2. METHODS: Is there a way the authors can adjust for socioeconomic status which is an important confounder and potential source of selection bias in this study? if not, please discuss in limitations and its effect. 3. METHODS: Is it possible to adjust for month of conception or adverse perinatal outcomes such as gestational age? these could both be affecting the outcomes 4. METHODS: Related to point 1, please provide more information about what the EMIAS is and how data is collected. 5. METHODS: Was it the pediatricians who assigned the ICD-10 code from the visit? 6. METHODS: I think it would help if you provided inclusion and exclusion criteria to the study population. I am unsure if they only people included were those with allergy or whether the ICD 10 codes were used to define the outcomes of interest. 7. RESULTS: I am surprised that the children started at age 4 years, since AD, AR and asthma often show up in younger children. Please again provide context as to why this is. 8. RESULTS: The term 'odds' should be used instead of 'risk' eg in the abstract and in the results. Risk implies relative risk which is different to an odds ratio. Similarly use 'association' rather than 'correlation'. 9. RESULTS: Please refer to the formatting instructions of the journal for decimal places and inclusion of p values. Usual practice is to have 2 rather than 3 DP and to not include p values. 10. DISCUSSION: The first paragraph of the discussion should be a summary of the findings, please add this. 11. DISCUSSION: there needs to be more discussion about why there is heterogeneity between findings in this area, it is not enough to just say there is heterogeneity, some thoughts on why this is, and what your study adds are needed 12. DISCUSSION: an important undiscussed factor to explain the associations is perinatal factors associated with season which are also highly related to allergic outcomes. For instance, I am wondering if preterm births, low birth weight and caesarean sections are more likely to happen in winter which could explain the findings? 12. DISCUSSION: related, there needs to be more discussion about why the month of BIRTH is driving long term outcomes. that it could be affecting outcomes 6 months later as in some other studies makes sense, but month of birth on disease 4-18 years later seems a big claim. How do we know it is not the exposure in the first few months after birth or the month of conception or the exposures during pregnancy? I am trying to suggest to consider in the discussion what month of birth represents in a broader context. As the authors say, there are so many factors that could be influencing (confounding or mediating) these findings. Could the authors suggest given the breadth of literature on this topic which areas the research should branch into rather than more of the same? ********** what does this mean? ). 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Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #3: Dear authors, This study makes an important contribution to understanding seasonal birth effects on allergic diseases in Russian children. The large sample size, appropriate statistical methods, and novel geographic context are significant strengths. The findings generally align with global patterns showing increased allergy risk in autumn/winter births, likely mediated by vitamin D deficiency and other seasonal factors. Many methodological and statistical issues have been addressed in previous reviews. I have attached a file with some recommendations for improvement: 1. Abstract: Minor spelling corrections I. "Crude odd ratio" should be "crude odds ratio" (line 31) II. Consider stating the study period (2024) in methods III. The phrase "elevated odd" (line 41) should be "elevated odds" 2. Introduction: I. Lines 58-65: The sentence beginning with "Notably, the season factor itself is heterogeneous..." is overly complex and should be broken into shorter, clearer statements for better readability. II. The connection between seasonal factors and specific mechanisms (vitamin D pathways, allergen exposure) could be included with more current evidence. 3. Methods: The manuscript does not address how missing data were managed. Authors should either: Describe the specific approach used for handling missing values (e.g., complete case analysis, multiple imputation) OR explicitly state if there were no missing values in the dataset 4. Results: The relatively low asthma prevalence (4.8%) compared to global ISAAC estimates (11.8-13.8%) requires more discussion. 5. Discussion: Recommended additional discussion of potential prevention strategies based on findings 6. Limitations: Missing discussion about generalizability beyond Moscow 7. Conclusion: Recommended to include clinical implications discussion for prevention strategies Thank you ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Birth month as a risk factor of allergic diseases: analysis of database of about 50 thousand children PONE-D-25-05996R2 Dear Dr. Natalia Esakova, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Vasuki Rajaguru, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): All the required revisions are amended. |
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