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The AAPC formula uses aggregated counts instead of age-standardized rates, and counts make comparability over time questionable. These intrinsic limitations with the data sources used must be addressed by the authors. Furthermore, the accuracy, comprehensiveness and readability of the information presented could be significantly improved, and the Reviewers have both provided detailed feedback to the authors. In sum, this paper requires a major revision before it can be considered for publication. Reviewers' comments: Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: The manuscript addresses an important topic about the growing burden of non-communicable diseases in different regions around the world. However, major revisions are recommended to clarify methodology, condense results, correct inconsistencies, spelling and grammar. In the introduction section, there is a sentence which states: “This paper examines the global burden of NCDs by analysing trends in incidence, mortality, and disability-adjusted life years (DALYs) across regions and income levels from 2000 to 2021, with projections extending to 2025”. Should this not read, “…projections extending to 2050” as is outlined in the Methods and Results sections? The abstract and the methods report the data source year inconsistently – both GBD 2019 and 2021 are mentioned. This needs to be clarified. The AAPC formula uses aggregated counts instead of age-standardised rates. Counts make comparability over time questionable. If aggregated counts are used, this mostly reflects population growth and aging and not necessarily true changes in disease risk. The methodology should be clarified, and, limitations of this method described. The results section is comprehensive, but it is very difficult for readers to follow. I would suggest condensing all the numeric detail into more readable sentences and using tables/graphs to show disparities and trends. Exhaustive lists can be provided as supplementary data. Figure 3 needs to be altered so that there is no confusion with the graph and the labels. Scales and annotations to the figures should not overlap with other figures/maps Captions can provide more information about the figures. The discussion can be improved by linking each major finding with plausible explanations and potential health policy implications. Suggest expanding on some of the novel findings like the sex differences, which is interesting. Spelling switches between US and UK English throughout the manuscript. This needs to be carefully checked and corrected. Spelling: “3.5.4. Diabetes Maleates” and “3.8.4. Diabetes Maleates” Reviewer #2: Comments to the authors, This is a well-structured manuscript that describes the burden of NCDs using GBD data. Although there are several published studies reporting similar findings with this data source, the authors have added projections to 2050, which strengthens the manuscript. I have made several comments to improve the content, below. One of the major issues when using GBD data is addressing the technical pitfalls related to the identification of original information to construct mortality and other outcomes. The manuscript makes no mention to this issue (other than briefly outlining one of the limitations in the use of SDIs) and I would recommend that this gap is carefully addressed in the discussion. Abstract – Background, please edit first line to clarify that NCDs, [including] CVD etc are the leading cause of death. It might be argued that NCDs are not the leading global health challenge Introduction – Well-structured and places the topic into context. Page 9, paragraph 1 - I suggest editing the first paragraph to clarify that NCDs disproportionally affect the most vulnerable socio-economic communities (there appears to be a disconnection between sentences linking the socio-economic contexts [not driven by urbanization or ageing populations)] Page 9, paragraph 3 - The Intro states that projections of estimates extend to 2025, while the abstract describe them as of 2050 – other sections of the manuscript (e.g., Methods) also refer to either, please review for consistency Methods – A description is required of what was included as NCDs to quantify incidence, mortality and DALYs – please provide details with levels of NCD classification i.e., level 1, 2 and 3, and include the information in a supplementary table Page 10, paragraph 1 – Unclear why selecting 204 countries ‘ensure methodological consistency with international standard’ (please clarify); same paragraph, please add reference for DALYs Page 10, paragraph 2 – when first introducing standardized rates, please state 100,000 ‘population per year, or 100,000 ‘’people per year. For subsequent mentions in the manuscript, 100,000 would suffice’. Please add reference to cite DALYs and SDI Results – The majority of results on mortality/incidence and DALYs reported for 2021 replicate those by Li et al (Int J Surgery, May 2025) – I would suggest citing them and further differentiating the reporting of findings; also please indicate in the Discussion how the two studies are complementary (where not overlapping) Page 11, paragraph 1 – it is stated that the global incidence of NCDs was 12.4 billion new cases, and the four most common types CVD (66.8 million), cancer (66.5 million), chronic respiratory disease 55.2 million, and DM (24.4 million) represent less than 3% of all global NCD incidence. It would be helpful to report this, and to indicate what the leading incident NCDs were. Is the incidence rate correct (156,680 per 100,000 population)? Figure 1 – it shows incidence trends for the period 200-2021, however, the figures for the incidence in 2021 does not appear to match what is described in paragraph 1 of Results. In figure 1, the incidence of CVD for 2021 is ~850 (million?) with similarly high numbers reported for the other three causes. Please clarify. Figure 1 – it needs to indicate the unit of the incidence trends (e.g., age-standardised rates per …, or just raw numbers? ) if the info is incidence per 100,000 population, the numbers do not align with what is described in the first paragraph of results for incidence Page 11, section 3.2. – the description provided in this paragraph does not match Figure 1, the AAPC are not appreciated in Figure 1 (they are in S Table 1 B, which his correctly cited). Figure 1 would need to have more information about what axis Y and X represent, and a brief description of the trends observable in the figure, provided Figures 2A and 2B – please include the year for which the estimates are provided, I assume it is 2021 ? Page 12, section 3.3. – I would suggest reordering this paragraph to make the summary of findings easier to read (please note some punctuation is also missing. Rather than repeating all the info provided in Figure 2A, I suggest complementing it in the text, and summarizing in which SDI regions incidence, mortality, and DALYs for each of the four NCDs were highest and lowest Page 14, country-based analysis – please indicate in this paragraph a brief summary of the types of NCDs included and mention that estimates are illustrated in Figure 3 (rather than repeating ‘figure 3’ in each sub-section of NCDs) Pages 15 and 23, I think the authors mean diabetes mellitus, not diabetes maleates ? The abstract, Methods and Intro sections describe it as the former. Page 18, Figure 4 – please insert the year (2021) for which the reporting of metabolic and other risk factors is reported is presented in this figure (same applies for figure 5) Discussion – the main findings are summarized and the impact of the magnitude of NCD burden is outlined. However, no discussion is given to the type of data used to determine NCD incidence or mortality, and this is a critical aspect when interpreting data from the GBD consortium. This should be described and discussed (in addition to being stated as a limitation of the study in the corresponding section, which is also not mentioned) ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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