Peer Review History
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Comparative analysis of choroidal thickness and pigment epithelial detachment in Acute and Chronic Central serous chorioretinopathy PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Bhatta, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== ACADEMIC EDITOR: 1. Please include this is a study of Nepalese patients in the title. 2. The abbreviations and terminology related to subfoveal choroidal thickness, chronic serous chorioretinopathy and subfield choroidal thickness are not carefully defined and appear to be used interchangeably in places. Please review and please be consistent throughout. Thank you 3. The control patients need to be explained clearly. Also in Table 5, there is a column with non-affected fellow eyes? What are the controls specifically used for the study please. 4. The distinction between acute and chronic/persistent (same thing?) disease is not established clearly in the Methods, nor is there comparative data, as noted in the title. Please clarify or change the title to reflect the exact purpose of the study. Thank you. 5. For any measurements in Tables (for example, Table 5), the measurement units (microns) must be included and the number of decimal places biologically meaningful (not to 3 decimal places for example). Any abbreviations used in tables should also be fully explained so that the reader can follow the information easily. Thank you. 6. Table 4 is described as showing associations between the different pathologies, however, no statistics are reported (as far as can tell) and this seems to be a summary table of numbers of patient eyes for the different conditions. Please either anaylse for associations as noted or remove this table. The same comments apply to Table 5, which also notes associations in the title but does not provide any analysis. Thank you. 7. The observations regarding PED, subfoveal choroidal thickness as biomarkers for CSCR (acute or chronic?) are reported previously in literature, and the conclusions around this finding and need for more choroidal biomarkers to be examined requires a more defined and focused statement, supported by the observations. Thank you. 8. The literature cited is limited and not current for this area of ophthalmology, noting the most recent reference cited appears to be 2023. Much has been published in this area related to pathophysiology, classification of pachychoroid spectrum diseases and management since 2023. For example, a review from Khan and Lotery, Ann Rev Vis Sci 2024 doi: 10.1146/annurev-vision-102122-102907, is but one example. Am updated and thorough literature review is required please. 9. With regard limitations, please note the limited (around 140) patient numbers, and be careful using the term 'population' in referring to the study group, noting sample size. Thank you. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 01 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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If the reviewer comments include a recommendation to cite specific previously published works, please review and evaluate these publications to determine whether they are relevant and should be cited. There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. Additional Editor Comments: Reviewer 1 This study examines the relationship of subfoveal choroidal thickness (SFCT) and pigment epithelial detachment (PED) morphology with disease activity in CSCR, using OCT data from a Nepalese cohort. The manuscript provides region-specific normative SFCT values, which are lacking in current literature, and adds to the understanding of pachychoroid spectrum disorders. The findings are clinically relevant, particularly in differentiating acute from chronic disease, and in identifying biomarkers of progression. However, there are view concerns that could impact the clarity of the study. 1. Distinction between “persistent,” “recurrent,” and “chronic” CSCR could be explained more clearly. 2. Criteria for selecting controls (e.g., refractive error, systemic diseases, medications) are not fully described. These factors may influence choroidal thickness. 3. Multiple comparisons were made without correction (e.g., Bonferroni), raising risk of type I error. 4. Lack of correlation between SFCT and PED/CST is an important negative finding, but underexplored. Discussion should consider alternative biomarkers such as choroidal vascularity index (CVI) or OCT angiography metrics. 5. Abstract and results sections use inconsistent terminology (CMT vs CST). Terminology should be standardised. 6. p-value reporting should follow uniform format (e.g., “p < 0.05” rather than “p=<0.05”). Reviewer 2 The title of this study suggests that the analysis will look for differences in choroidal thickness and PED for acute and chronic CSCR. However the results and conclusion do not offer any differences or similarities between the two. The significance of PED morphology was not clear. The conclusion of increase SFCT and PED serving as a significant marker in CSCR is not new. It is unclear which OCT slice or if more than one was used to measure the choroidal and PED measurements. Also PED measurements appear to be CST, but not always is the PED at the fovea. How would the PED be measured if its not foveal? I have not learnt what is difference between measurements of acute or chronic changes. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: I Don't Know ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: This study examines the relationship of subfoveal choroidal thickness (SFCT) and pigment epithelial detachment (PED) morphology with disease activity in CSCR, using OCT data from a Nepalese cohort. The manuscript provides region-specific normative SFCT values, which are lacking in current literature, and adds to the understanding of pachychoroid spectrum disorders. The findings are clinically relevant, particularly in differentiating acute from chronic disease, and in identifying biomarkers of progression. However, there are view concerns that could impact the clarity of the study. 1. Distinction between “persistent,” “recurrent,” and “chronic” CSCR could be explained more clearly. 2. Criteria for selecting controls (e.g., refractive error, systemic diseases, medications) are not fully described. These factors may influence choroidal thickness. 3. Multiple comparisons were made without correction (e.g., Bonferroni), raising risk of type I error. 4. Lack of correlation between SFCT and PED/CST is an important negative finding, but underexplored. Discussion should consider alternative biomarkers such as choroidal vascularity index (CVI) or OCT angiography metrics. 5. Abstract and results sections use inconsistent terminology (CMT vs CST). Terminology should be standardised. 6. p-value reporting should follow uniform format (e.g., “p < 0.05” rather than “p=<0.05”). Reviewer #2: The title of this study suggests that the analysis will look for differences in choroidal thickness and PED for acute and chronic CSCR. However the results and conclusion do not offer any differences or similarities between the two. The significance of PED morphology was not clear. The conclusion of increase SFCT and PED serving as a significant marker in CSCR is not new. It is unclear which OCT slice or if more than one was used to measure the choroidal and PED measurements. Also PED measurements appear to be CST, but not always is the PED at the fovea. How would the PED be measured if its not foveal? I have not learnt what is difference between measurements of acute or chronic changes. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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