Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJuly 7, 2025 |
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Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: The authors recruited 20 healthy adults to evaluate how body position influences microcirculatory and autonomic responses. The results showed that body position influences both microcirculatory dynamics and autonomic nervous system responses. 1. Randomization was implemented for the order of position for each participant. Considering with limited sample size in this study, it would be helpful to also report the actual order at the end. 2. Inconsistency in the sample size. The power analysis reported 12, the statistical methods section reported 16, but the results section reported 15. Clarification on these inconsistencies is needed. 3. A nonparametric test was conducted due to the potential non-normality. However, the mean and standard deviation were reported in Table 1. It’s more common and appropriate to report median and IQR instead, while using a nonparametric test. 4. TR has an extremely large SD as shown in Table 1. This should be further examined, and a sensitivity analysis is warranted. Also, along this concern, it may be informative to add each data observation into the figures to show the variability of observations. Reviewer #2: The quality of this manuscript needs to be improved. 1. What are the data for quantifying HRV? 2. The authors stated that “Studies suggest that HRV typically increases with parasympathetic activity in the supine position, contrasting with a more pronounced sympathetic response when upright”. What does “HRV typically increases” mean? 3. The description of method of determining the arterial occlusion pressure is unclear. 4. Regarding the statistical analyses: 1) the Wilcoxon signed-rank test is not the standard post hoc method for the Friedman test, potentially increasing false-positive risks. 2) With small samples (n=16, 15 or 12?), the normal approximation of Z-values may be inaccurate, casting doubt on the reliability of effect size r 5. The introduction and discussion sections lack clarity in organization and demonstrate insufficient depth. Addittionally, the reationship between changes in reactive hyperemia and changes in HRV was not discussed. For the effects of postures on reactive hyperemia, the authors may refer the following papers. Effect of Durations of Wheelchair Tilt-in-Space and Recline on Skin Perfusion Over the Ischial Tuberosity in People With Spinal Cord Injury, 2013, Archives of Physical Medicine and Rehabilitation Skin blood flow dynamics and its role in pressure ulcers, 2013, Journal of Tissue Viability. Reviewer #3: The authors examined the effects of three body positions (supine, seated, and standing) on post-occlusive reactive hyperemia (PORH) and autonomic nervous system activity in healthy individuals. The results demonstrated that the standing position increased arterial occlusion pressure (AOP) and microcirculatory responses, as well as altered heart rate variability (HRV). However, there are still some issues that might need to be clarified. SPECIFIC COMMENT Abstract 1. Line 34-35: Please define all abbreviations (AVNN, SDNN, LF/HF, and HR) at first mention. 2. Line 36: “…sensorsStanding…” should be “…sensors. Standing…”? 3. Line 38: What do “upright postures” mean? Do upright postures include standing and sitting positions? I recommend making terminology consistent. Introduction 1. Again, I recommend making terminology consistent or clearly defining upright positions. 2. Line 62: Please define EDHF at first mention. 3. Line 74-79: I recommend elaborating more on HRV and autonomic response to justify the purpose of investigating HRV in the PORH protocol. The relationship between HRV and PORH should be described as well. 4. Line 82: “raising concerns about understanding…” Please clarify what concerns and why the results of this study are critical for optimizing Blood Flow Restriction protocols. 5. Line 91-97: It might not be necessary to describe the detailed outcome measures here. The authors might consider replacing this part with HRV measures and describing detailed outcome measures in the method section. Methods 1. Line 134: Please provide a reference for McKay’s participant classification or clearly describe the criteria of level 1 classification. 2. Line 135: The normal range of ABI should be 0.9-1.4. 3. Line 140: Why did the study choose 95 mmHg as the diastolic blood pressure threshold? The criteria of hypertension are 140/90. 4. Line 171: Please provide the model of ultrasound and the type of transducer. 5. Line 174: What is the model for Doppler ultrasound? 6. Line 174: What is the model for the laser Doppler flowmeter? 7. Line 203: Again, please define the upright position or simply describe sitting or standing position. 8. Line 208: Please describe which artery was measured. 9. Line 212: How did the study determine the dominant leg? 10. Line 213-214: What were the two arteries? 11. Line 240-243: How did this study determine the value and the time of peak perfusion? How to identify that the resting flow is reduced? The raw LDF signals are noisy. Did you apply any filter or any processing? 12. Line 270: Why did this study decide to use the medium effect size to estimate sample size? I suggest using the data from a previous study to perform estimation. 13. Line 275: Although the sequence of conditions is random, the study still needs to evaluate and report the effect of the sequence on outcome measures. 14. Line 285: What test was used for assessing the normality of data? Results 1. Line 299: A participant was excluded from the study. Please explain the reason for the dropout. 2. Line 321: What is horizontal position? Is it the supine position? 3. The information in Table 1 is also shown in Figures 4 and 5. The authors might consider removing the figures. Discussion 1. The authors discuss each outcome in each paragraph. It might be better to discuss the effects of positions on PORH and HRV together to better understand the whole physiological changes in different positions more comprehensively. 2. The current discussion lacks physiological explanations for the findings. The authors might need to include some physiological mechanisms of PORH and HRV to interpret the results. 3. The safety of BFR and clinical implications should be discussed. 4. Line 391-404: The authors may minimize repeating the study findings and elaborate more on the physiological mechanisms of how vascular resistance affects AOP. 5. Line 405-415: Again, please elaborate on the physiological mechanisms. 6. Line 466-469: “The significant increases in…the supine position.” What clinical recommendation for BFR training do the authors give according to the current results? Is it a good thing to impose greater hemodynamics and autonomic stress during BFR? 7. How do you evaluate the effects of the standing position on BFR training? Any potential harm to individuals with chronic conditions or older adults? ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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<p>Influence of Body Position on Microcirculatory and Autonomic Responses During Arterial Occlusion in Healthy Adults PONE-D-25-32645R1 Dear Dr. Trybulski, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Yih-Kuen Jan, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes: Fu-Lien Wu ********** |
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