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| Original SubmissionApril 17, 2025 |
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Please follow the link for more information: https://blogs.plos.org/plos/2019/06/looking-good-tips-for-creating-your-plos-figures-graphics/" https://blogs.plos.org/plos/2019/06/looking-good-tips-for-creating-your-plos-figures-graphics/-->?> [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Partly Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: No Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: No Reviewer #5: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: The work presented by these authors is very interesting, but here are some limitations, in my opinion. The introduction is not very engaging, and the authors do not clearly present the limitations of the literature on the paper, nor do they address the gap that their work fills. There is no debate raised regarding the directions of the literature concerning new fields of research on the determinants. If possible, please consider including a flow diagram for the sample screening process to facilitate better understanding of the sampling procedure. In terms of methodology, the authors do not explain the benefits of using a model and the gaps it addresses, as well as the potential robustness of the results compared to other studies. Reviewer #2: Strengths: The study employs an appropriate combination of cluster analysis and MANOVA to identify and validate student profiles based on motivation, procrastination, and adjustment. The table clearly demonstrates meaningful differences between clusters, especially in terms of procrastination and intrinsic motivation. The profiles generated align with GPA performance, making the results potentially useful for targeted educational interventions. Suggestions for improvement: Please clarify how the number of clusters was determined (e.g., elbow method, silhouette analysis, or decision tree splits). It would strengthen the findings to elaborate on why extrinsic motivation shows no significant differences across profiles, and whether other subdimensions of motivation were considered. Reviewer #3: The manuscript is generally well-executed, but I have the following suggestions: Clarify Methodological Choices: It would be helpful to explain in more detail why the K-means and decision tree methods were selected over other potential techniques and the limitations associated with these methods. Contextualization of Findings: Further exploration of how the results relate to the specific cultural and educational context in Greece would strengthen the manuscript, especially considering the unique influences of Greek educational and societal norms on student behavior. Practical Applications: It would be beneficial to expand on how universities and educational programs can apply these findings in practical terms to support students better, focusing on interventions that target academic procrastination and motivation. Consideration of Additional Variables: The study focuses on motivation, procrastination, and adjustment. Including additional variables such as socio-economic status or mental health might provide more comprehensive insights into student success. Reviewer #4: Higlights This research is a great contribution to the field of educational psychology. Although the study focuses on variables that have been extensively studied such as academic adjustment, procrastination, and extrensic and intrinsic motivation, it provides a comprehensive discussion on the dynamic interplay of variables under study in Greeks’ context. Discussion of findings flows logically from the study results. To enhance the paper for publication, the researchers may consider the following: 1. Provide additional studies in Greece on similar variables to illustrate the study’s context. Only one study in Greece focusing on the positive effect of academic adjustment on students’ academic success was included. It will enrich the study’s context if the researcher will provide additional studies along this topic. 2. Revise the introduction to improve its coherence and cohesiveness. The researcher may also include a brief background or context on the status of Greek college students’ academic adjustment, motivation and procrastination in general. 3. Include participants’ relevant demographics such as their year level in college and degree programs because these data can also provide insights to the study’s results. 4. Add the title, Results, after Statistical Analysis to provide demarcation between Methodology and Results Sections. 5. Elaborate on specific interventions recommended in the conclusion section. Would it be school interventions only? Can policy makers be included too? 6. Ensure consistency in writing reference entries, capitalization of journal titles, use of period before the url. Observe hanging indentation. 7. The paper provides interesting, relevant, and insightful findings. To improve its clarity, consider improving awkward sentence construction and cohesion. Reviewer #5: It is good that the manuscript recognizes the need for academia to remain diligent in seeking ways to continuously improve support of student outcomes. However, in reading the manuscript I struggle to identify the meaningful contribution or expansion of knowledge. The constructs, academic motivation, procrastination, and adjustment have been extensively studied. Many of the findings are readily available and known. Perhaps a more beneficial study could assess the influence of online modalities or select AI policies in relation to academic motivation, procrastination, and adjustment. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: Yes: Shibiru Jabessa Dugasa Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: No Reviewer #5: No ********** While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/ . PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org . Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step.
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Dear Dr. Kalamaras, Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 17 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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If the reviewer comments include a recommendation to cite specific previously published works, please review and evaluate these publications to determine whether they are relevant and should be cited. There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. 2. Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments: Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: (No Response) Reviewer #4: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Thank you for the opportunity to review the revised manuscript. The authors have carefully addressed the comments raised in the previous round, and the revisions have significantly improved the overall clarity and quality of the paper. The theoretical framework is now more coherent, the methodology is sound, and the discussion of the findings is insightful and well-supported by the data. I find the manuscript to be well-structured and of potential interest to the journal’s readership. I recommend that the paper be accepted for publication. Reviewer #3: (No Response) Reviewer #4: The study is a good addition to existing knowledge in the field of educational psychology that investigates the correlation among variables such as motivation, adjustment to college, and academic achievement. The author was able to address the reviewers’ recommendations in the revised paper. The introduction incorporates studies in Greece on similar topic as well as research gaps. Ideas in the introduction flow naturally and cohesively. The methodology section is logically sound, clear, and replicable. The author also includes respondents’ relevant demographics and educational implications recommended by the reviewers. However, I have three recommendations: 1. Include a graphic organizer (e.g. flow chart) for the study procedure from choosing the respondents to the statistical analysis to make it easy to grasp? 2. Provide a table for the respondents’ demographics to accompany the written description so that at glance, readers can make sense of it. 3. Add an introductory statement in the Results section before mentioning the findings of the study: As expected, procrastination assessment scale was negatively correlated to intrinsic motivation ... Also, take note of the correct usage in the following sentences: 1. Freshmans make up 13.8% of the sample. (Correction: Freshmen) 2. The sample comprised of 36.2% male and 63.4% female students. (Correction: The sample comprised 36.2% male and ….) ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Dear Dr. Kalamaras, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 02 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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Academic Motivation, Procrastination, and Adjustment: Exploring Their Impact on Student Profiles and Academic Performance PONE-D-25-16926R3 Dear Dr. Kalamaras, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Assoc. Prof. Phakkharawat Sittiprapaporn, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #4: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #4: Yes ********** Reviewer #4: In line 112, concept is mispelled. Kindly correct it. in line 246, is it Result or Results? Please check because what I know is the section title is Results. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #4: No ********** |
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