Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionAugust 11, 2025 |
|---|
|
PONE-D-25-43674 Safety and efficacy of quick-soluble gelatin microparticles for transarterial embolization of the lower urinary tract in a rabbit urinary bladder embolization model PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Chang, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The reviewers pointed out specific concerns with the work in particular noting issues with the statistical studies. Please address these in a revision. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 23 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols. Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Gayle E. Woloschak, PhD Section Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: When submitting your revision, we need you to address these additional requirements. 1. Please ensure that your manuscript meets PLOS ONE's style requirements, including those for file naming. The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and 2. If the reviewer comments include a recommendation to cite specific previously published works, please review and evaluate these publications to determine whether they are relevant and should be cited. There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. Additional Editor Comments: The reviewers noted many specific concerns about the manuscript; the issue about statistics should be corrected either by using a different statistical analysis or justifying why this particular analysis is appropriate over others. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: General Please make sure that all figures and tables are cited in the text in the correct order. Each figure and table should also have a full legend or footnote placed at the end of the document, in an orderly manner. This will make the review process clearer and easier to follow. The manuscript should be revised to fully follow the ARRIVE 2.0 guidelines for animal research reporting. Title Consider adding the word “Preclinical” (or “Pilot Study”) to the title. This will clearly indicate that the study is exploratory and translational in intent, rather than a definitive clinical trial. Introduction Please expand on the justification for using rabbits as the experimental model. Provide some background on their urinary tract and vascular anatomy, especially the relevance of the umbilical artery and vesical branches to the embolization procedure. Clarify whether the main objective of this work is to develop a preclinical model for human applications (for example, future treatment of bladder or urinary tract conditions in people), or whether it is primarily directed toward veterinary applications in animals with bladder or urinary tract disease. Materials and Methods The euthanasia schedule should be described more clearly. If 12 rabbits were used, please state explicitly that 3 animals were euthanized at each of the four time-points (0 days, 3 days, 7 days, and 14 days post-embolization). Consider presenting this in a table or study flow diagram to make it easier to understand. Report the sex distribution of the rabbits. If only one sex was used (for example, only males), explain the reason for this choice. If both sexes were included, indicate the numbers of males and females. Please provide details of the manufacturer’s composition of the quick-soluble gelatin microparticles (QS-GMP). In addition, provide supporting data or a reference for the dissolution kinetics of the embolic. You state in the Discussion that the particles begin dissolving at about 12 hours and are completely gone by 48 hours. This needs to be supported by either published data, experimental bench testing, or manufacturer specifications. No a priori sample size or power calculation is presented. Please justify the use of 12 rabbits and 3 animals per group. Either explain what effect size this design was expected to detect or clearly state that the study was exploratory or pilot in nature, and interpret the results with appropriate caution. Results Please report the technical success rate of the embolization procedures. Specifically, how many procedures achieved distal embolization in the cranial vesical artery, and how many had to be performed more proximally because the microcatheter could not be advanced far enough. Describe whether there were any technical problems with catheterization during follow-up procedures. Indicate whether any medications (such as vasodilators or spasmolytics) were given to manage arterial spasm during embolization. Clarify exactly how stasis was defined and achieved during embolization. Indicate whether reflux occurred, how it was monitored, and whether it was considered acceptable or a sign of endpoint achievement. Statistics The use of the Friedman test is not appropriate in this design. The animals at each time-point are different groups, not repeated measures of the same individuals. Discussion In the first paragraph you state that this model “may prove valuable.” Please restate this more clearly in the final paragraph of the Discussion and in the Abstract. Explicitly identify whether the main objective was to establish a preclinical translational model for future human use, or to propose a veterinary clinical application. Please add explicit reporting of non-target embolization of the ductus deferens. Indicate whether this was observed in your study, whether it was analyzed, and whether it was considered a potential complication. Reviewer #2: General Comments This manuscript investigates the safety and efficacy of quick-soluble gelatin microparticles (QS-GMP) in a rabbit urinary bladder embolization model. The study is methodologically well-structured, with comprehensive evaluation using angiography, histopathology, hematological and biochemical analyses. The establishment of a reproducible preclinical bladder embolization model is of clear significance and could contribute to the development of safer embolization strategies for lower urinary tract interventions. However, there are several issues that need to be addressed before publication. The writing sometimes overstates the novelty or clinical readiness of QS-GMP, whereas the data mainly support feasibility and preliminary safety. Furthermore, while angiographic and histopathological scoring systems are well-described, representative images illustrating these criteria should be included to enhance clarity and reproducibility. Finally, the Discussion could be improved by sharpening the interpretation of findings, avoiding overstatements, and more clearly positioning the contribution of this model within the broader field of embolization research. Abstract Line 20: The phrase “promising embolic agents” is overstated at this stage. Since QS-GMP are still in early evaluation, “emerging embolic agents” or “novel embolic agents under investigation” would be more appropriate. Discussion Paragraph 1 While the rationale is clear, the paragraph could be strengthened by more explicitly comparing this model to other existing embolization models (e.g., hepatic, renal, prostatic). Paragraph 5 The discussion of transient hypervascularization is interesting but could be expanded by clarifying whether this represents reactive angiogenesis or an artifact of inflammation. The comparison to hepatic TAE studies is valuable, but it should be noted that urinary bladder physiology may differ substantially. Paragraph 6 The safety profile is presented convincingly, but the conclusion is slightly overstated. The data support feasibility and short-term safety, but not necessarily long-term safety or clinical application. The language should be moderated accordingly. Table 1 and Table 4: The scoring system for angiographic findings is clearly described, but representative angiographic images corresponding to each score should be provided. This will help readers understand how the criteria were applied in practice. Table 2: Similarly, representative histopathological images illustrating each scoring category (edema, necrosis, inflammation, neovascularization, regeneration, etc.) should be included. Without these, it is difficult to validate the scoring method. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: José Andrés Guirola Ortiz Reviewer #2: Yes: KEN KAGEYAMA ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
| Revision 1 |
|
Safety and efficacy of quick-soluble gelatin microparticles for transarterial embolization of the lower urinary tract: preclinical study in a rabbit urinary bladder embolization model PONE-D-25-43674R1 Dear Dr. Chang: We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Gayle E. Woloschak, PhD Section Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Thank you for addressing the concerns of the reviewers. Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you, this is a clear and well-executed revision. The point-by-point responses and the revised manuscript materially improve clarity and reproducibility. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: JA Guirola Reviewer #2: Yes: Ken Kageyama ********** |
| Formally Accepted |
|
PONE-D-25-43674R1 PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Chang, I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now being handed over to our production team. At this stage, our production department will prepare your paper for publication. This includes ensuring the following: * All references, tables, and figures are properly cited * All relevant supporting information is included in the manuscript submission, * There are no issues that prevent the paper from being properly typeset You will receive further instructions from the production team, including instructions on how to review your proof when it is ready. Please keep in mind that we are working through a large volume of accepted articles, so please give us a few days to review your paper and let you know the next and final steps. Lastly, if your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. You will receive an invoice from PLOS for your publication fee after your manuscript has reached the completed accept phase. If you receive an email requesting payment before acceptance or for any other service, this may be a phishing scheme. Learn how to identify phishing emails and protect your accounts at https://explore.plos.org/phishing. If we can help with anything else, please email us at customercare@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Gayle E. Woloschak Section Editor PLOS ONE |
Open letter on the publication of peer review reports
PLOS recognizes the benefits of transparency in the peer review process. Therefore, we enable the publication of all of the content of peer review and author responses alongside final, published articles. Reviewers remain anonymous, unless they choose to reveal their names.
We encourage other journals to join us in this initiative. We hope that our action inspires the community, including researchers, research funders, and research institutions, to recognize the benefits of published peer review reports for all parts of the research system.
Learn more at ASAPbio .