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Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** Reviewer #1: The study by Minamoto and Colleagues investigates the activation of the mirror neuron system (MNS) during the observation and imitation of Japanese Sign Language, an unfamiliar action for the participants. By analyzing mu rhythm suppression in EEG signals, the study evaluates the effects of intentionality on gesture comprehension and the impact of practice on MNS activity. Understanding how the human brain processes unfamiliar gestures can provide valuable insights into the mechanisms of learning and social cognition. However, several aspects in the description of the methods and results reduce my enthusiasm for the findings presented in this manuscript. -Sample size: The study includes 37 participants, but the final EEG data is based on only 32 subjects due to the exclusion of some data for artifacts. While this number is not excessively low, it may be useful to discuss the statistical power of the study. -Mu vs. alpha comparison: The study attempts to distinguish mu rhythm suppression from alpha wave suppression, but the chosen method (analyzing central channels for mu and occipital channels for alpha) may not be sufficient to rule out overlap between the two components. I do not believe that an in-depth discussion alone is enough on this point; the authors should consider using more sophisticated methodologies to separate these rhythms, such as Independent Component Analysis (ICA). -Randomized trial order: Was the order of trials (counting task first, meaning task afterward) randomized? -EEG baseline selection: The baseline was defined as the first static frame of the video. However, using a static image may not be an ideal control. How can it be ruled out that participants do not anticipate the movement and already exhibit different neural activation compared to a true resting state? I would suggest adding control analyses to justify this choice. -Morlet Wavelet parameters: The key parameters of the Morlet wavelet transform, such as the number of cycles used, are not specified. This is a critical aspect, as a low number of cycles provides good temporal resolution but poor frequency resolution, whereas a high number has the opposite effect. Furthermore, I would have explored beta rhythms as well, given their functional association with the motor system. -Electrodes: It is necessary to precisely indicate the sensors used for the analyses, referring to the standard nomenclature (e.g., O1, O2, etc.). Additionally, providing a template with the spatial mapping of the selected electrodes would be beneficial. -EEG data figures: The current figures do not clearly allow an appreciation of signal quality or inter-subject variability. It would be useful to plot individual values. Moreover, since temporal resolution is one of EEG's strengths, it would also be helpful to include figures showing power changes over time across a broader frequency range. Classic wavelet plots are very useful tools for visualizing the variation in the power of a signal over time and across different frequencies. Reviewer #2: In the study entitled “Effects of Intention Understanding and Action Practice on the Mirror Neuron System: An EEG Study using Japanese Sign Language”, the authors investigate how two cognitive processes—intention understanding and action practice—affect activation of the mirror neuron system (MNS), as indexed by mu suppression measured through EEG. While the study addresses a relevant question in social neuroscience, I find that the current version suffers from significant conceptual and methodological limitations. The term “practice” is used throughout the manuscript (e.g., pre-practice, practice, post-practice) to describe participants’ brief imitation of sign language gestures. However, I find the use of this term misleading. Based on the experimental design, participants first observe an unfamiliar gesture (pre-practice), then imitate it once (practice), and finally observe the same gesture again (post-practice). Simply observing a movement multiple times does not equate to motor practice, particularly for symbolic, unfamiliar movements such as those in sign language. The hypothesis that participants engaged in “intention understanding” during the meaning task is problematic. The authors appear to conflate intention inference with semantic recognition. In the context of sign language, interpreting a gesture generally involves identifying its linguistic meaning, not inferring the actor’s motor goal. In mirror neuron research, "intention understanding" refers to recognizing the purpose behind a motor action (e.g., grasping to drink vs. to move)—not mapping symbolic gestures to predefined meanings. Instructing participants to choose the correct meaning from a list of sentences is a semantic task, not a test of motor intention. In my view, the study is better characterized as investigating semantic processing or gesture recognition, rather than “intention understanding” as defined in the MNS literature. In the Introduction and early parts of the Discussion, the authors heavily rely on findings from a study involving the Cham alphabet to support the claim that brief motor practice of unfamiliar actions enhances MNS activity. However, this study is neither cited nor included in the reference list. Given that it appears to be a key source underpinning the theoretical rationale for the experiment, it is essential that the authors (1) provide a complete and accurate citation for this study, and (2) clarify whether its findings genuinely support the mechanisms proposed (e.g., effects of unfamiliar symbolic content, MNS modulation via brief motor exposure). Furthermore, the use of references 6 (Cannon et al.) and 7 (Marshall et al.) is problematic. The Cannon et al. study does not focus on unfamiliar actions, nor does it show that observing and then practicing such actions enhances MNS activity. On the contrary, it emphasizes that self-generated motor experience is a stronger driver of mu desynchronization than observational learning. The Marshall et al. study cited does not investigate practice effects or unfamiliar action learning; rather, it reports overlapping EEG responses to observed and executed actions in infants. These references do not support the claim that brief practice of unfamiliar actions enhances MNS activity, and the sentence in question should be revised or removed accordingly. Given these significant conceptual concerns, I believe it is premature to evaluate the EEG methodology and findings. It is essential that the authors first clarify their operational definitions of “practice” and “intention understanding,” justify the use of these terms within the framework of MNS research, and revise their theoretical rationale and citations accordingly. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Dear Dr. Minamoto, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. as you will see the reviewer was fully satisfied with the revision work. Please address the minor suggestions in a revised version. Once this is done, the new version will not be sent off for further review. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 27 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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Effects of Intention Understanding and Brief Imitative Experience on the Mirror Neuron System: An EEG Study using Japanese Sign Language PONE-D-25-05068R2 Dear Dr. Minamoto, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Luigi Cattaneo, MD, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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