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| Original SubmissionOctober 16, 2025 |
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Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. 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Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: Firstly, I would like to say thank you for the opportunity to review this interesting manuscript on the Relationship between dietary thiamine, riboflavin, and niacin intake and hypertension subtypes. The topic is relevant to current public health priorities. The study is based on a large dataset and uses appropriate analytical methods. Below, I outline some concerns after thoroughly reading the manuscript. 1. During the extraction of data, you may have so many participants who took a single food that contains riboflavin, thiamin, and niacin in a 24-hour dietary intake assessment. So, what did you do to categorize such participants as riboflavin, niacin, and thiamin groups? Have you included or excluded such participants? Please make it clear in your methodology part. 2. In the introduction section, in lines 69-81, you have stated that extensive studies were conducted even in China regarding the association of vitamin B complex (riboflavin, niacin…). But you have stated that as a gap, as limited studies were conducted. So, I recommend that you clearly put real gaps and the burden and mortality of hypertension in your local context to make your study sound. 3. In the methodology section, lines 127-28, you discuss that the nutrition intake of the study participants was disaggregated into food source and supplement source for separate estimation. However, the separate estimation risk for hypertension among food sources and supplement sources was not present in the results section. I thought that a separate estimation of risk for hypertension among participants with food and a supplementary source was needed for a specific intervention. Therefore, incorporate this point in your results section. 4. The authors finding showed that the intake of riboflavin increases the risk of hypertension. However, how to differentiate whether the patient develops hypertension due to the effect of riboflavin or due to the effect of the age of the patients, behavior of the patients, like smoking, or any other covariates that directly have an effect on the development of hypertension for individuals who take riboflavin-containing foods 5. In the abstract line 29, you stated that propensity score matching methods were used to identify the relationship between nutritional intake and hypertension subtype risk, but not incorporate them in the methodology part of the manuscript. So, incorporate it in the methods part, including the type of Propensity score matching used and covariates tested 6. In the single-factor analysis part, line 213, you stated that the female gender has a negative effect on IDH and SDH. But, the OR with 95% CI was (1.58(1.26-1.98) p<0.001). This indicates that being a female was a risk for hypertension as compared to being male. So, this discrepancy must be resolved. 7. Statistical inconsistency should be revisited. In lines 262-68, you discussed that the covariates were significantly associated with ISH. But, in Figure 4, the trend test value indicates that no variables had a p-value <0.05. This inconsistency should be fixed. 8. All the figures have no legends. Please include the figure legend at the bottom of each figure. 9. The discussion part needs major revision since it seems like a statement of the problem rather than a discussion. So, it is better to modify by including your study findings compared with previous research findings, with justification. Reviewer #2: Study description vs. actual design The manuscript repeatedly describes the work as a “trial,” but it is a cross-sectional secondary analysis of NHANES. Update the title, abstract, and methods to correctly state the design and avoid implying randomization, intervention, or temporality that the data cannot support. NHANES years/cycles are inconsistent Reported cycles (e.g., 12 vs. 25) and analytic denominators do not reconcile with the final sample. Provide one authoritative cohort flow (with inclusion/exclusion, missingness, and analysis-specific Ns) and ensure every table and figure reflects those same counts. Hypertension subtype definitions and case ascertainment Subtypes (ISH/IDH/SDH) appear to rely only on measured BP thresholds without a clear plan for antihypertensive users. Define hypertension and subtypes a priori, specify treatment handling (exclude/stratify/adjust), and justify your operational choices against NHANES conventions. Intake vs. “blood levels” confusion Methods indicate dietary intake (24-h recall + supplements), but results repeatedly reference “serum” or “blood” vitamin levels. Remove biomarker language unless assays were actually analyzed and available for the same cycles; otherwise consistently refer to intake. Survey design and weighting All estimates must account for NHANES weights, strata, and PSUs. Specify which weights were used (and how multi-cycle weights were constructed), confirm that every analysis was survey-weighted, and report weighted means/percentages with appropriate SEs or 95% CIs. Energy adjustment and diet confounding Nutrient–outcome associations should adjust for total energy intake and key diet/behavior covariates (e.g., sodium, potassium, alcohol, physical activity, overall diet quality). Add energy adjustment (density, residual, or kcal covariate) and expand confounding control accordingly. Propensity score matching (PSM) PSM is claimed but not reported. Either remove PSM entirely or fully implement and present it: model specification, matching method and caliper/ratio, balance diagnostics (SMDs), matched sample sizes, and sensitivity analyses. Unsupported “threshold” claim The stated riboflavin “threshold” around ~6 mg/day is not supported by nonlinearity tests or stable estimates. Temper the language, present survey-weighted spline plots with confidence bands, and describe intake distributions to show how many participants are near that range. Quartile cut-points and plausibility Several quartile boundaries appear off by a decimal place or inflated by high-dose supplements. Recalculate cut-points, report medians (IQR) within each quartile, describe outlier handling, and verify unit consistency across all vitamins. Conclusion scope creep Abstract conclusions introduce gut/GI health without corresponding analyses. Restrict conclusions to hypertension outcomes studied and rephrase to reflect observational design and the limits of intake-based associations. Methods & reporting gaps Clarify covariate selection with a DAG or rationale (include energy, diet markers, alcohol, physical activity, kidney function, medication use), state handling of missing data, address multiple testing (e.g., FDR), report model diagnostics (linearity, collinearity, influence), and explain BP harmonization across NHANES protocol changes. Add food-only vs. supplement-user stratified analyses or interactions. Statistics clarity & coherence Unify the software stack (e.g., R 4.x with the survey package), remove placeholders, and include sessionInfo. Ensure the text matches the tables, and present all descriptive and inferential results as survey-weighted with appropriate uncertainty. Tables, figures, and terminology Clean titles/stubs, fix typos, align units and decimals, and label forest plots correctly. Include interaction P-values in subgroup figures and ensure figure captions accurately describe the statistical test (linear vs. nonlinear). Ethics, data availability, funding & competing interests Revise ethics to reflect NHANES ERB approvals and that this is a secondary analysis; add exemption language if applicable. Provide a precise data availability statement (NHANES portal + documentation) and complete funding details (grants, roles). Keep competing interests in PLOS wording. Language and typographical quality Systematically proofread to remove misspellings, inconsistent US/UK spelling, placeholder URLs, and fragmented sentences. Standardize terminology (e.g., NHANES, isolated systolic hypertension) and maintain consistent capitalization and abbreviations. Strengths The focus on hypertension subtypes, separation of food vs. supplement sources, and the large, nationally representative dataset are notable strengths—retain these while tightening design description and analyses. ********** what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files.). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files.). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files.). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Dear Dr. Chang, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 28 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols.... We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Nafisa M. Jadavji, PhD, MSc, BSc Academic Editor PLOS One Journal Requirements: If the reviewer comments include a recommendation to cite specific previously published works, please review and evaluate these publications to determine whether they are relevant and should be cited. There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. 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Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: I have notice some gramatical errors in some part of the manuscript. So, the author better to review and correct it before publication. Reviewer #2: The revised manuscript has been carefully reviewed. All previously raised comments and requested corrections have been adequately addressed, and no further revisions are required. ********** what does this mean?). 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Relationship between dietary thiamine, riboflavin, and niacin intake and hypertension subtypes: A cross-sectional study from the 1999-2023 PONE-D-25-55578R2 Dear Dr. Chang, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support.... If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Nafisa M. Jadavji, PhD, MSc, BSc Academic Editor PLOS One Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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