Peer Review History
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[Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: No ********** Reviewer #1: Review of the manuscript “Reinforcing Intensive Motherhood: A Study of Gender Bias in Parental Responsibilities Allocation by Large Language Models” Context and contribution Building on the idea that Large Language Models (LLMs) may reproduce social stereotypes, the article investigates whether two frontier systems (GPT‑4.1 and DeepSeek‑V3) implicitly endorse the ideology of intensive mothering -- the culturally dominant expectation that mothers shoulder the bulk of childcare. Using a 3‑factor experiment that crosses (i) model type, (ii) caregiver role (mother, father, neutral parent) and (iii) responsibility framing (prescriptive vs. descriptive), the authors show that both LLMs assign systematically higher caregiving scores to mothers and that prescriptive prompts elicit stronger attributions of responsibility than descriptive prompts. Mediation analysis suggests these effects are not driven by the models’ gender‑equality attitudes but rather by associations embedded in training corpora. By extending bias research into the domestic sphere, the study highlights the risk that advanced language technologies may reinforce traditional gender norms in private life and argues for gender‑sensitive model design and data curation. 1. Major (general) issues • Missing page numbers: The PDF has no pagination, which makes it difficult for reviewers to reference specific passages. Please insert page numbers before an eventual resubmission. • Data availability statement: The link provided (https://osf.io/nzs49/?view_only=7746022768c1455bb2a970b14c7d6fcb) leads to an Unauthorized page. • Citation formatting: The phrase “(Hays, 1996) concept of intensive mothering” needs correction. 2. Specific comments # Section Comment 2.1 Introduction Several key terms--intensive mothering, prescriptive advocacy, descriptive advocacy, and the distinction between “ideal” vs. “actual” responsibilities--are mentioned but not defined. PLOS ONE has a broad readership; add concise definitions or footnotes. 2.2 Motivation The manuscript implies that parents rely on LLM‑powered tools, but the mechanism connecting model outputs to real childcare decisions remains implicit. Brief statistics on global AI adoption in parenting (e.g., UNESCO 2024) would ground the argument. 2.3 Hypotheses H1 references “caregiving responsibility scores” yet the construction of these scores only reappears deep in the Methods section. Move a short description to the hypothesis paragraph. 2.4 Experimental settings The “temperature” parameter (set to 1.0) is jargon. Add a one‑sentence explanation: e.g., “Temperature controls the randomness of generated text--higher values yield more varied but potentially less coherent responses.” 2.5 PROCESS macro The mediation test is summarized in a single sentence. Readers unfamiliar with Hayes’ PROCESS require more detail: model number, bootstrapping strategy, indirect‑effect confidence intervals, and the operationalization of “gender‑role beliefs.” A short appendix or table would suffice. 2.6 Table/figure clarity Results tables should list exact p‑values or 95 % confidence intervals rather than qualitative descriptors (“obvious gender bias”). Figures illustrating mean scores with error bars would greatly aid interpretation. 3. Minor editing suggestions • Replace long em‑dashes with the journal’s preferred punctuation or use “--” throughout, for consistency. • Standardize American vs. British spelling (e.g., “behavior” vs. “behaviour”). • Check subject‑verb agreement in long sentences (e.g., “LLMs were likely driven” → “LLM outputs were likely driven”). 4. Recommendation The manuscript addresses a timely and socially significant question and employs a creative experimental design. However, the current draft is conceptually under‑explained and methodologically terse, which obscures its contribution. With clearer definitions, fuller reporting of the mediation procedure, restoration of the data link, and improved formatting, the study has strong potential for publication in PLOS ONE. I therefore recommend major revisions before the article can be considered for acceptance. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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Reinforcing Intensive Motherhood: A Study of Gender Bias in Parental Responsibilities Allocation by Large Language Models PONE-D-25-32416R1 Dear Dr. Yongjie Sun, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Zheng Zhang Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): The quality of the manuscript has improved after revision; acceptance is recommended. Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-25-32416R1 PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Sun, I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now being handed over to our production team. At this stage, our production department will prepare your paper for publication. This includes ensuring the following: * All references, tables, and figures are properly cited * All relevant supporting information is included in the manuscript submission, * There are no issues that prevent the paper from being properly typeset You will receive further instructions from the production team, including instructions on how to review your proof when it is ready. Please keep in mind that we are working through a large volume of accepted articles, so please give us a few days to review your paper and let you know the next and final steps. Lastly, if your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. You will receive an invoice from PLOS for your publication fee after your manuscript has reached the completed accept phase. If you receive an email requesting payment before acceptance or for any other service, this may be a phishing scheme. Learn how to identify phishing emails and protect your accounts at https://explore.plos.org/phishing. If we can help with anything else, please email us at customercare@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Zheng Zhang Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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