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Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: 1. General Impression This is a well-organized and important study that explores the underreported burden of Trichuris trichiura infection in under-five children using a sensitive molecular diagnostic method (qPCR) in a malaria-endemic region of Papua, Indonesia. The paper is relevant and timely, addressing an important public health gap in low-resource tropical settings. It contributes valuable data on early childhood helminthiasis and its relationship with anaemia and malaria coinfection. 2. Major Strengths Use of qPCR: The application of molecular diagnostics strengthens the study's validity and highlights the underestimation of infection prevalence with conventional microscopy. Age Focus: The focus on children <5 years is crucial as they are often excluded from deworming programs. Rigorous Methodology: The study is methodically sound with a clear description of the sample collection, molecular techniques, and statistical analyses. Clinical Relevance: The finding of a significant association between trichuriasis and anaemia, especially in malaria-endemic regions, is highly relevant for integrated disease control policies. 3. Weaknesses and Areas for Improvement A. Study Design and Limitations Cross-sectional nature: The manuscript acknowledges the limitation of causality inference but could benefit from a clearer justification on how the study informs policy despite its observational design. Time lag in sample analysis: There is a 6-year delay between stool sample collection (2013) and qPCR analysis (2019). The authors should elaborate on the impact of this delay on sample integrity, especially regarding DNA degradation, despite proper storage conditions. B. Laboratory and Diagnostic Issues Coinfections by qPCR: The study only assessed T. trichiura using qPCR. Given that multiple STH infections are prevalent, the absence of multiplex qPCR for Ascaris and hookworms limits a comprehensive parasitological profile. Lack of DNA quantification: The authors acknowledge the absence of DNA quantification due to lack of a spectrophotometer. This affects the ability to assess infection intensity via qPCR, which is a missed opportunity. No validation data: The manuscript should include validation parameters (e.g., sensitivity, specificity, LOD) for the qPCR assay used, possibly referencing the standard curve or internal controls. C. Statistical Presentation Confidence intervals for prevalence: The point prevalence estimates (e.g., 31.5%) would be more robust if accompanied by 95% confidence intervals. Socioeconomic factors: The study used principal component analysis to generate SES quintiles, but the description lacks detail. The authors should briefly mention the input variables used and the rationale for their choice. D. Interpretation and Discussion Stunting and wasting: The lack of statistical association between trichuriasis and stunting/wasting is noted, but alternative explanations (e.g., sample size limitation, confounders) are not sufficiently discussed. Anaemia causality direction: The bidirectional relationship between anaemia and helminths is complex. The authors should clarify whether anaemia is interpreted as a cause or consequence of infection—or both. E. Ethical and Reporting Standards Ethics: Ethical approval is adequately addressed. However, the long time gap between sample collection and analysis requires a brief ethical justification or clarification on data use agreements. Funding & Conflict of Interest: The study claims no specific funding. Yet molecular work requires significant resources. A clearer explanation of in-kind contributions from partner institutions (e.g., QIMR) would improve transparency. 4. Novelty and Contribution This is the first known report of T. trichiura prevalence using qPCR in under-five children in Papua, Indonesia. The study adds to the limited literature on preschool STH infections and coinfection risks in high-burden malaria areas. The recommendation to include under-fives in deworming programs is evidence-informed and impactful. 5. Recommendations for Improvement Add 95% confidence intervals for prevalence data. Provide more detail on SES scoring method. Clarify the impact of long-term sample storage on molecular results. Discuss the lack of multiplex qPCR for other STHs as a limitation. Include information on the diagnostic performance of the qPCR method used. Elaborate briefly on implications for national deworming policy—should under-fives be routinely included? Minor Comments Lines 1–2: Revise title to: '...in a malaria-endemic area...' for grammatical correctness. Lines 39–41: Add 95% confidence intervals to prevalence estimates in the abstract for clarity. Lines 47–48: Consider acknowledging limitations of qPCR availability in resource-limited settings. Lines 61–63: Rephrase to avoid redundancy: use 'diagnostic methods relying on direct microscopy, which has low sensitivity.' Lines 70–72: Clarify study aims: '...estimate the prevalence using qPCR and identify associated risk factors...' Lines 86–89: Clarify sampling process for 181 children from 629 enrolled to explain inclusion criteria. Line 92: Clarify 'without preservatives' by explaining sample storage conditions more explicitly. Lines 103–105: Indicate whether internal controls were used to check for DNA degradation. Line 120: Mention the method used to quantify plasmid concentration for standard curve accuracy. Line 173: Ensure figure is embedded with correct caption below and properly labeled. Lines 186–191: Include 95% CI and test statistical significance of increased detection by qPCR. Line 199: Clarify detection method for coinfections—were *Ascaris* and hookworm microscopy-only? Table 2: Add confidence intervals where appropriate; specify handling of missing data. Table 3: Include subgroup sample sizes and clarify total N used for each category. Lines 240–241: Acknowledge potential impact of DNA degradation due to long-term storage. Line 248: Use consistent age group terminology (either '<3 and >3' or specific year ranges). Line 259: Soften speculative language unless supported by qualitative data. Lines 295–299: Mention lack of multiplex qPCR for other STHs as a limitation. Lines 328–442: Ensure reference formatting is consistent and check for duplicate citations. Throughout: Unify terminology (e.g., 'trichuriasis' vs '*T. trichiura* infection'), units (g/dL), and italicization of species names. Reviewer #2: This work provides baseline data for comparison with recent data and efficient use of archived resources. Abstract Methods The method of diagnosis of malaria and assessment of anaemia should be included. Introduction The introduction should include a brief discussion on the interaction between malaria and STH. Methods Change molecular works to Molecular analysis Master mix was prepared at the Parasitology Laboratory, Faculty of Medicine, Public Health and Nursing, Unversitas Gadjah Mada, Yogyakarta. Explain why the master mix was prepared in another location and what precautions were taken to avoid contamination and degradation. Singleplex qPCR The preparation of controls and generation of a standard curve should be included in the methods and results section. The master mix was prepared based on prior optimization and pipetted at 5 µL into 1.5 mL Eppendorf tubes, followed by the addition of 25 µL of homogenized DNA template. This contradicts the information in the supplementary file. Assessment of trichuriasis, nutritional status, and socioeconomic status T. trichiura infection (trichuriasis) was defined as positive qPCR results. What Ct values were classified as positive? Supplementary S1 Promega GoTaq is used for PCR. Authors should check and name the correct reagent Statistical analysis Potential risk factors for trichuriasis included for the analysis were age (< 3 years and >3 years old), sex (male and female), ethnic groups (Papuan and non-Papuan), nutritional status by weight for age (normal, wasting, and severe wasting), stunting (yes/no), malaria (yes/no), anaemia (Hb 10 g/dl) ...... The authors did not describe the methods for detection of malaria infection and assessment of anaemia. Results Nearly one-third of the children had low nutritional status (28.6%, 178 51/178) and 41% (74/181) were classified as stunted. Check that values match with Table 2. Result presentation pattern should be uniform. Separate the bolded from the bracket. Prevalence of T. trichiura infection The results should be represented by a table showing both methods of diagnosis. The prevalence of T. trichiura infection was 13.8% (25/181) by Kato-Katz microscopy examination and 31.5% (57/181) by qPCR, increasing the prevalence by 17.7%. Of 156 children with negative results by microscopy, 21% (33) had T. trichiura detected by qPCR. The figures suggest that only 32 samples were positive by qPCR not 33. Clarify There was one sample with T. trichiura detected by microscopy, but not detected by qPCR. Was this sample rerun? The range of quantification cycle (Cq) value observed in this study was from 24.09 to 37.86. Authors should explain the rational of considering Ct of 37.86 as positive. Risk factors associated with trichuriasis With reference to this earlier statement in methods “Multiple logistic regression was used to analyse independent risk factors for trichuriasis by entering all significant risk factors with p-value <0.05 in univariate analysis”, Confounder are excluded, interactions are missed and borderline predictors are excluded. The multivariate logistic regression should be rerun with all the risk factors. Same applies to Supplementary S3 Malaria and trichuriasis coinfection Result should be shown in a table for clarity. Discussion Line 287 The prevalence of children defined as wasting and stunting Change to wasted and stunted The results from the reanalysis of logistic regression should be incorporated into the discussion. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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Dear Dr. Poespoprodjo, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 04 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: Summary of the Study This study investigates the prevalence of Trichuris trichiura infection in children under five years old in Papua, Indonesia, using quantitative PCR (qPCR) on archived stool samples. The findings reveal a substantially higher prevalence (22%) compared to previous microscopy-based estimates, highlighting the potential underestimation of trichuriasis burden in young children. The study has important implications for public health programs, particularly mass drug administration strategies that currently exclude this age group. General Comments The revised manuscript is clearly written and significantly improved. The authors have addressed the reviewers’ concerns comprehensively, especially by: * Providing detailed methodology on qPCR procedures * Reporting statistical outputs with adjusted odds ratios and confidence intervals * Clarifying ethical approval and rationale for the reuse of stored samples * Discussing the limitations and public health relevance of their findings This work adds meaningful evidence to the discourse on helminth control in vulnerable populations and is suitable for publication following minor revisions. Specific Comments** Major Comments 1. qPCR Validation The use of a standard curve with plasmid DNA is appropriate; however, please acknowledge the absence of full diagnostic validation (e.g., LOD, specificity) in the discussion as a limitation. 2. Socioeconomic Status Index (PCA) The PCA approach is appropriate, but further clarification on the asset selection and weighting would improve reproducibility. Consider adding a brief explanation or table in the supplementary material. 3. Terminology and Formatting Please standardize the formatting of parasite names (italicized), units (e.g., g/dL), and terminology (avoid excessive switching between “trichuriasis” and “T. trichiura infection unless contextually justified). Minor Comments Line 373: Consider rewording “might indicate gaps in knowledge…” to a more neutral phrase such as “may suggest limited awareness…” -Clarify rationale for the DNA input volume (2 µL) in the qPCR if it differs from standard recommendations. - Consider suggesting future work involving multiplex qPCR and infection intensity quantification using more sensitive or quantitative techniques. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** what does this mean? ). 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Molecular diagnosis of Trichuris trichiura: Prevalence and associated risk factors in children under five living in a malaria-endemic area in Papua, Indonesia PONE-D-25-23992R2 Dear Dr. Poespoprodjo, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Hammed Oladeji Mogaji, Ph.D Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: Yes: Uwem Friday Ekpo ********** |
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