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| Original SubmissionJuly 23, 2025 |
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If the reviewer comments include a recommendation to cite specific previously published works, please review and evaluate these publications to determine whether they are relevant and should be cited. There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. Additional Editor Comments: This article is not well prepared. I suggest to take considerations to the: 1: Title 2: keywords 3:Abbreviations 4: Scoring, e.g., Likert 4 5: phases of CKM 6: figures and Tables are not clear and tables missed footnotes 7: statistical analysis: rephrase to be clear 8: discussion is weak [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: The manuscript addresses an important and timely topic: the interplay between social isolation, cardiometabolic burden, and physical dysfunction in aging Chinese adults, using nationally representative CHARLS data. The integration of social and biological determinants, threshold analyses, and causal mediation models is innovative and of interest to the aging and public health community. The findings have potential policy implications for integrated interventions targeting both social and biomedical risk factors. However, several issues need to be addressed before the manuscript can be considered for publication. These include clarification of methodology, further justification of analytical choices, and improvements in presentation, interpretation, and discussion of limitations. 1. Study Design and Causality - The manuscript acknowledges the cross-sectional nature of the study but still makes causal inferences (e.g., “EPWV → frailty → physical dysfunction” as a pathway). The language in the results and discussion should be moderated to avoid implying causality without longitudinal validation. - Consider clarifying that mediation analyses in cross-sectional data can only suggest potential pathways and require prospective confirmation. 2.Operationalization of Social Isolation - The social isolation score derivation requires more detail. Please specify which CHARLS items were used, their weighting, and whether the measure has been validated in the Chinese population. - Indicate how missing data in social isolation components were handled, as imputation could affect classification. 3.Biomarker Threshold Determination - The approach for identifying inflection points (threshold effect analysis) should be described more explicitly. Were spline regressions, piecewise linear models, or other non-linear models used? How was the optimal cut-point determined and validated? - Consider presenting sensitivity analyses to show robustness of thresholds. 4. Confounding and Effect Modification - While demographic, lifestyle, and socioeconomic covariates were adjusted for, residual confounding is likely. Variables such as depressive symptoms, physical activity, and nutritional status may influence both social isolation and physical function. - Some effect modification findings (e.g., stronger effects in males <60 years) warrant deeper exploration — could occupational patterns, migration history, or gender norms explain this? 5. Interpretation of Mediation Results The reported mediation effect of frailty (57.8%) is large. Please clarify whether the frailty index shares overlapping components with the physical dysfunction outcome, as this could inflate mediation estimates. Discuss possible bi-directionality between frailty and vascular aging in more depth. 6.Generalizability - As the data are from 2015, please discuss whether changes in social structures, healthcare access, or biomarker profiles in recent years might limit applicability to the current Chinese older adult population. Recommendations for the Authors - Temper causal language and clearly state the observational nature of the study. - Provide greater detail on construction and validation of the social isolation index. - Explain threshold modeling methods and include sensitivity checks. - Address potential measurement overlap between frailty and physical function. - Expand on contextual factors that could explain subgroup differences. - Streamline tables/figures for clarity and reader engagement. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Social Isolation and Cardiometabolic Burden Synergistically Predict Physical Dysfunction in Aging Chinese Adults: Evidence of Risk Thresholds and the Mediating Role of Frailty PONE-D-25-39258R1 Dear Dr. Zhongqing Guo, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Marwan Salih Al-Nimer, MD, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): No comment Reviewers' comments: |
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