Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionAugust 27, 2025 |
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PONE-D-25-45645Temporal social network modeling of mobile connectivity data with graph neural networksPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Kaski, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 03 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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[Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors compare and predict the phone call and SMS activity by several types of temporal GNN and a baseline rEdgeBank. The results show that ROLAND is the most effective for predicting their activity, comparing with other methods. The motivation is understandable, and the results contribute to both academic and practical fields. On the other hand, as indicated, the prediction task itself may have become too simple. While rEdgeBank's high accuracy and low surprise are practical, it is possible that the task has become overly straightforward. In addition, the absence of detailed data disclosure due to NDAs and similar agreements is also weakness. Overall, this is a study of quite high quality. As there is still a little potential for improvement, I recommend a minor revision. Major comments: 1. At first reading, I mistakenly thought you would be proposing a new GNN architecture. For instance, explicitly stating in the introduction that you are comparing existing models, or revising section/subsection in Materials & Methods, would help reduce such misunderstandings. 2. I recommend adding a bit more context about the motivation for this prediction task. In what specific situations or practical challenges could SMS and call prediction be useful? Minor commnets [if possible]: 3. I understand this is difficult due to the NDA, but even within the data used, knowing the distribution of gender and age would likely help advance our understanding. 4. I thought rEdgeBank's high accuracy was due to its coarse temporal resolution. Couldn't the GNN model achieve higher accuracy if the prediction task were performed on finer-grained temporal data? Reviewer #2: This paper presents a comprehensive and timely investigation into the use of temporal graph neural networks (GNNs) for predicting communication activity in a large-scale, real-world mobile phone dataset. The study is well-structured, the methodology is thorough, and the problem it addresses is of significant interest to the network science and machine learning communities. The authors are to be commended for their rigorous evaluation of four distinct GNN architectures against a well-conceived baseline, and for providing a nuanced analysis stratified by user demographics. The work is a valuable contribution, and my comments below are intended to help further strengthen the manuscript. 1.A primary point that warrants further discussion is the potential impact of the data preprocessing steps on the study's main findings. The authors state that they filtered the dataset to include only users who were active in all three consecutive years of data collection. While the motivation to handle potential user ID changes is practical, this is a rather stringent criterion that likely removes a significant amount of natural user churn and network evolution. This filtering may have inadvertently curated a network core of exceptionally stable users. This could be a contributing factor to the observed temporal properties of the graph, namely the very high reoccurrence index of 0.78 and the low surprise index of 0.03. Consequently, the prediction task becomes more susceptible to success via memorization, which might explain the formidable performance of the rEdgeBank baseline. It would strengthen the manuscript if the authors could expand on this in their discussion, explicitly connecting this filtering choice to the dataset's temporal characteristics and considering how it might frame the relatively small performance margin achieved even by the best-performing GNN, ROLAND. 2.Another intriguing aspect of the results is the disparity in performance among the GNNs themselves. The finding that only ROLAND managed to consistently outperform the rEdgeBank baseline is significant. The authors' hypothesis that ROLAND's success stems from its native ability to utilize multi-dimensional edge features is compelling and well-argued. This point could be elaborated upon further. For example, how might the model leverage the distinct bidirectional call and SMS features to capture richer social dynamics, such as the patterns of reciprocity mentioned in the introduction? Conversely, the underperformance of the other three state-of-the-art GNNs is a noteworthy result. A deeper reflection on why these models failed would be beneficial. Was the information loss from compressing edge features into a single scalar weight the critical handicap, or are there other architectural limitations that make them less suitable for this type of social interaction data? A more detailed discussion of these model-specific successes and failures would provide valuable insights for future research in this area. 3.Finally, the authors rightly acknowledge the age of the dataset (2007-2009) as a limitation. Their perspective that this dataset provides a unique window into communication patterns before the widespread adoption of over-the-top messaging applications is valid and interesting. To enhance the paper's forward-looking relevance, it would be helpful to include a brief, speculative discussion on the generalizability of these findings to contemporary communication networks. Given the dramatic shifts in how people communicate (e.g., the decline of SMS, the rise of encrypted messaging apps), how might the feature representations and model architectures need to evolve? For instance, would the clear distinction between calls and texts, seemingly vital for ROLAND's performance, retain its predictive power in a modern context? Adding some thoughts on these future challenges would round out the discussion nicely. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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