Peer Review History
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PONE-D-25-25428Knowledge Transfer-Driven Estimation of Knee Moments and Ground Reaction Forces from Smartphone Videos via Temporal-Spatial Modeling of Augmented Joint DynamicsPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Hossain, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please be sure to address all reviewer comments for clarifications and additional details. If at all possible, including at least a small pilot study to diversify the subject pool would strengthen the paper. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 05 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: General Overview Overall, this study presents a smartphone-based kinetics estimation pipeline that integrates augmented kinematic data, knowledge transfer, and spatio-temporal modeling. The diverse machine learning techniques alongside biomechanical insights has led to improved estimation performance, which the authors have validated through rigorous ablations. However, I have a major concern regarding the generalizability of the proposed pipeline. Although the study includes data from seventeen subjects, the variation in gender, age, height, and weight is extremely limited. This raises doubts about the robustness of the estimation performance, particularly when tested on subjects with gait characteristics similar to those in the training set. Due to the narrow subject diversity, applying this technology to patients with irregular or pathological gait patterns may result in poor estimation accuracy and unreliable clinical interpretation. Additionally, the term “joint dynamics” does not seem appropriate for describing the input to the proposed framework. Dynamics typically refers to properties involving mass or inertia, which are not directly captured by IMUs. I recommend using alternative terms, such as “joint kinematics,” to avoid confusion. (Page 3, Line 60; Page 4, Line 85) Introduction While IMUs can be used to predict inertial information such as joint moments, they do not directly provide this information. I recommend using more precise terminology—such as “predict” instead of “provide”—to avoid the confusion. Method I recommend that the authors include quantitative results comparing their smartphone-based motion tracking to ground-truth kinematic data. Providing motion tracking metrics (e.g., RMSE of joint angle predictions) would help readers understand the system’s inherent accuracy. This distinction is crucial for understanding whether the observed kinetics estimation errors come from the model itself or limitations in the motion tracking input. The manuscript states that 2D joint positions were normalized to the subject’s height to mitigate size variability. However, joint kinetics inherently depend on body segment lengths and mass distribution. How did the authors recover the true scale required for joint moment estimation? It is unclear how the authors combined joint keypoints extracted from two different smartphone videos. Was triangulation or another 3D reconstruction method used? This step should be described in the methodology section for reproducibility. The authors mention that accelerations and angular velocities were derived from positional data. Since IMUs directly measure these quantities, it would be insightful to compare the derived signals with true IMU measurements. I suggest including a comparison plot of smartphone-derived versus IMU-recorded accelerations and angular velocities. This would help readers evaluate how much signal error propagates through the pipeline. Deriving acceleration and angular velocity from position data is prone to noise. Did the authors apply any signal processing techniques (e.g., low-pass filtering, smoothing, or delaying) to address this? A brief explanation of the data preprocessing pipeline would improve transparency. Does the proposed pipeline require the subject’s body weight for joint kinetics estimation? If so, how is this information incorporated into the model? If not, can authors comment on how the absence of body weight information might impact the accuracy of the estimated forces and moments. Regarding comparisons with state-of-the-art (SOTA) models: did the authors evaluate all models using the exact same dataset and evaluation protocol? Clarifying this in the manuscript will enhance the fairness of the comparative results. Figure 2: For improved readability, I suggest labeling components like attention score, attention-weighted features, and final outputs directly along the arrows with their corresponding symbols in the diagram. Figure 3: Please include the units for moment and force values. Discussion The authors mentioned that the smartphone-based tracking has inherent limitations due to camera placement. From the utility perspective when used in real clinical settings, how many gait cycles can the proposed framework capture within the reported error boundary (NRMSE of 4.68)? Also, would it be enough to get NRMSE of 4.68 for most of the clinical applications? I would be more helpful to include such information in the discussion part with some references. Reviewer #2: This is a well-written and technically robust manuscript that presents an innovative method to estimate knee joint moments (KAM, KFM) and 3D ground reaction forces (GRFs) using only smartphone video data. The authors introduce a multi-modal knowledge transfer approach from a teacher model (with IMU and video data) to a student model (video-only) for improving estimation accuracy. The proposed method significantly enhances accessibility and usability for gait analysis and rehabilitation purposes, potentially translating to real-world clinical settings. 1. The dataset includes only young healthy male subjects. The lack of diverse populations (e.g., females, older adults, patients) limits generalizability. 2. As acknowledged, 2D joint estimation quality from OpenPose can degrade in real-world conditions (e.g., occlusions, variable lighting), which can impact model performance. 3. While the model outperforms others, the architecture may still be computationally intensive for real-time use on mobile devices without further optimization. 4. Although the knowledge transfer reduces the performance gap, it’s still notable (NRMSE of 4.68 vs. 3.63), and more discussion on real-world acceptability of this gap would be helpful. 5. While the translational potential is mentioned, real-world deployment strategies, clinical thresholds for acceptability, or use in longitudinal tracking are not deeply discussed. 6. Future studies should test on older adults, females, and patients with gait abnormalities to assess model generalizability. 7. Perform experiments under various lighting, occlusion, and video quality conditions to evaluate robustness. 8. Explore lightweight versions of the model for edge computing or real-time deployment on smartphones. 9. Consider testing how well the model tracks changes in KAM/KFM/GRFs over time, particularly in clinical recovery settings. 10. Provide insights into which joint features (e.g., hip vs. ankle) most influence kinetic estimation to improve interpretability for clinicians. 11. Grammar: The writing is clear and grammatically sound. 12. Figures: Ensure all figures (especially Figs 1–3) are high-resolution and clearly labeled. They are essential for understanding model structure and performance. 13. Acronyms: Ensure all acronyms are spelled out at first use (e.g., GRF, GCN, Bi-LSTM). 14. Ethical Statement: Appropriately addressed; no issues. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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