Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMay 28, 2024 |
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Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: This manuscript presents an analysis of 131 SARS-CoV-2 genomes sequenced from samples collected in Jordan between 2020-2023. The study provides valuable genomic data from an understudied region and demonstrates the utility of cooperative partnerships in developing sequencing and bioinformatics capabilities. Overall, the work contributes useful information on SARS-CoV-2 lineages circulating in Jordan over time. However, there are some areas that could be improved to strengthen the manuscript: Major comments: 1. The sample size is relatively small (131 genomes) compared to many published SARS-CoV-2 genomic epidemiology studies. The authors should more clearly acknowledge this limitation and discuss how it may impact the conclusions that can be drawn 2. The phylogenetic analysis and discussion of lineage dynamics over time could be expanded. More detail on how the observed patterns compare to regional and global trends would provide valuable context. 3. The statistical analysis of symptoms and vaccination status (lines 265-271) is limited by small sample sizes in some groups. The authors should be more cautious in drawing conclusions from these analyses and clearly state the limitations. 4. The discussion of the utility of the EDGE-COVID-19 platform feels somewhat disconnected from the rest of the manuscript. This section could be condensed and better integrated with the main findings. Minor comments: 5. Lines 79-91: The background on Jordan's healthcare system and involvement in COVID-19 response is useful but feels somewhat out of place in the introduction. Consider moving some of this information to the methods or discussion. 6. More details on the quality control criteria used to exclude samples from phylogenetic analysis would be helpful. 7. Figure 1: The color scheme in panel C is difficult to interpret. Consider using a more color-blind friendly palette In summary, while this manuscript provides valuable genomic data and insights from an understudied region, addressing these comments would help to strengthen the analysis and presentation of the findings. With appropriate revisions, this work could make a solid contribution to our understanding of SARS-CoV-2 genomic epidemiology in the Middle East. Reviewer #2: This manuscript reports sequencing and analyses of 99 COVID-positive samples from Jordan. However, I don't think it is adequate to be published with the current write-up, as: 1. The authors are trying to showcase the outcome is the collaborative research between two countries which enable NGS-based sequencing and bioinformatic analyses. Publication in research journal should merit research outcome i.e. the results and discussion but not the collaborative efforts. This is not a platform for this purpose. Unless the authors willingly remove credits on the collaboration and emphasize only on the results and discussion, this manuscript could then be considered for publication in a scientific journal. 2. The sample size is too small to represent a country. This manuscript should go for a short communication or brief report. Other minor comments: 1. Should provide the GISAID ID i.e. uploaded and accepted sequences in the manuscript, in stead of the submission form to GISAID (suppl file). 2. The data analyses should be specific. It mentioned that the sequence reads were mapped to the reference genome. But the subsequent description revealed that the genomic sequences used are assembled (de novo?). 3. Do you mean some of the assembled genomes only cover 65% of the reference genome, or reads mapping rate is 65%? I prefer only assembled genome sequences at complete and near complete to be used for subsequent analyses to avoid loss of data and inaccurate assignment of lineage and interpretation of prevalence of strains. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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Dear Dr. Koehler, Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 27 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. 2. Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: No ********** Reviewer #1: Title: Sequencing and analysis of 131 SARS-CoV-2 samples in previously sampled and unsampled regions of Jordan from 2020 to 2023 Overview This manuscript presents a genomic analysis of SARS-CoV-2 samples collected across various regions in Jordan over three years. The study aims to contribute to the limited genomic data available from Jordan, particularly from under-sampled regions, and to demonstrate the utility of the EDGE COVID-19 bioinformatics platform in facilitating rapid analysis and sequencing efforts in countries developing their next-generation sequencing (NGS) capabilities. Assessment of Incorporation of Reviewers' Comments The authors have made significant efforts to address the reviewers' comments: 1. Acknowledgment of Sample Size Limitation (Reviewer #1 & #2): o The authors have revised the Abstract, Introduction, and Discussion sections to acknowledge the limitation of the relatively small sample size and discuss its impact on the conclusions. 2. Expansion of Phylogenetic Analysis (Reviewer #1): o An expanded paragraph in the Discussion now more thoroughly compares the findings to existing global and Jordanian COVID-19 pandemic phylogenetic reports. 3. Caution in Statistical Analysis (Reviewer #1): o The authors have removed the statistical analysis limited by small sample sizes to avoid overstating conclusions. They still describe vaccination patterns qualitatively and have retained the logistic regression of SARI symptoms and vaccine type. 4. Integration of EDGE-COVID-19 Platform Discussion (Reviewer #1): o The manuscript has been revised to better contextualize the EDGE platform in relation to the development of new NGS capabilities, integrating this discussion with the main findings. 5. Relocation of Background Information (Reviewer #1): o The background on Jordan's healthcare system has been moved from the Introduction to the end of the Discussion. 6. Details on Quality Control Criteria (Reviewer #1): o The Phylogenetics section now includes more details on the quality control criteria used to exclude samples from phylogenetic analysis. 7. Revised Figures for Clarity (Reviewer #1): o Figure 1.C has been revised to use a more color-blind friendly palette. 8. Reduced Emphasis on Collaboration (Reviewer #2): o The emphasis on collaboration has been significantly reduced, focusing more on the results and discussion. 9. Inclusion of GISAID IDs (Reviewer #2): o The Bioinformatics section has been revised to describe how the uploaded and accepted sequences may be accessed on GISAID. 10. Clarification of Data Analysis Methods (Reviewer #2): o The Bioinformatics and Phylogenetics sections have been revised for greater specificity, clarifying whether the sequences were mapped to the reference genome or assembled de novo. 11. Clarification on Genome Coverage and Mapping Rates (Reviewer #2): o The authors have clarified that the mapping rates refer to the percentage of total raw reads, and only samples with >95% linear coverage were included in the phylogenetic analysis. Overall, the authors have adequately incorporated the changes suggested by the reviewers. Critical Review Major Comments 1. Contribution to Genomic Surveillance: o Strength: The study provides valuable genomic data from Jordan, especially from under-sampled regions, contributing to the global understanding of SARS-CoV-2 evolution. o Suggestion: The manuscript could further highlight how these new sequences fill specific gaps in the global databases and their potential impact on public health strategies in Jordan. 2. Depth of Phylogenetic Analysis: o Strength: The authors have expanded their phylogenetic analysis to compare findings with global and regional trends. o Suggestion: A more detailed interpretation of the phylogenetic tree could be provided. Discussing possible transmission pathways, introductions of variants, and the implications for local transmission dynamics would strengthen the analysis. 3. Integration of the EDGE Platform Discussion: o Strength: The revised manuscript better integrates the discussion of the EDGE COVID-19 platform. o Suggestion: Providing specific examples of how the platform facilitated the research and any challenges faced would offer practical insights into its utility in resource-limited settings. 4. Analysis of Symptoms and Vaccination Status: o Strength: The authors appropriately removed statistical analyses limited by small sample sizes. o Suggestion: The qualitative descriptions could be enhanced by comparing them with national vaccination campaigns and existing literature to provide context and possible explanations for observed patterns. 5. Clarity and Organization: o A thorough proofreading is necessary to improve clarity and readability. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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Sequencing and analysis of 131 SARS-CoV-2 isolates in previously sampled and unsampled regions of Jordan from 2020 to 2023 PONE-D-24-19649R2 Dear Dr. Koehler, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Nihad A.M Al-Rashedi Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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