Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionAugust 7, 2025 |
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PONE-D-25-42933HybridoNet-Adapt: A Domain-Adapted Framework for Accurate Lithium-Ion Battery RUL PredictionPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Trinh, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 25 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The following points should be addressed to further improve the manuscript: 1. On Page 3, the statement “Many existing methods predict RUL based on estimated maximum discharge capacity, representing the remaining life as a percentage of the nominal capacity” is actually the definition of SOH, not RUL. Please carefully distinguish between these two concepts. Accordingly, some references listed in Table 1 are not truly RUL prediction studies. 2. To further strengthen the introduction, it would be beneficial to include more recent and relevant works, such as DOI: 10.1016/j.jpowsour.2022.230975; 10.1016/j.est.2025.116024. 3. The manuscript currently lists five contributions. This number is excessive and somewhat redundant. It would be clearer and more impactful to condense and reorganize them into three key contributions. 4. Section titles should not contain references or colons. Please revise accordingly. 5. All equations should be numbered, and every variable used in the equations must be explained. Avoid using whole words as variable names in formulas. 6. In Figure 2, the arrows pointing from the MSE loss and MMD loss to the Input are confusing. Please check whether the statement is correct or explain the meaning of the arrows. 7. It appears that target-domain labels may have been used from Page 7. If so, why not directly train and test using the target-domain data? Please clarify whether target labels are available, and if they are, discuss the meaningfulness of the domain adaptation task under this setting. 8. In many published works using the TRI dataset, models are typically trained on Batch 1 and tested on Batches 2 and 3. If target-domain labels were used to aid model training, then the task defined in this paper may be easier, and the results may not provide strong evidence that the proposed method is more effective than existing approaches. 9. Hyperparameters should be presented in a table for clarity and reproducibility. Reviewer #2: This paper proposes HybridoNet-Adapt, a novel domain-adaptive framework for accurate Remaining Useful Life (RUL) prediction of lithium-ion batteries. Although the experimental results seem promising, there are still some major issues. Therefore, the paper needs to be rejected and resubmitted. Other comments: 1) The study lacks practical interpretability. Although the methodology is emphasized, the model predictions are not supported by physical explanations or visual analyses. 2) The baselines are mostly traditional methods or relatively simple deep learning models, while more recent approaches such as advanced transfer learning or self-supervised learning are not systematically compared. 3) While different feature extraction modules and alignment losses are examined, the ablation study remains incomplete, as it does not explore alternative feature selection strategies or the sensitivity to different sampling window lengths. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Overall, the manuscript presents an interesting framework (HybridoNet-Adapt) that combines domain adaptation with deep temporal feature extraction for lithium-ion battery RUL prediction. The idea of addressing domain shift through Maximum Mean Discrepancy (MMD)-based alignment and hybrid predictors is promising. However, several important issues remain that limit the clarity and rigor of the work. The following points should be addressed to further improve the manuscript: 1. On Page 3, the statement “Many existing methods predict RUL based on estimated maximum discharge capacity, representing the remaining life as a percentage of the nominal capacity” is actually the definition of SOH, not RUL. Please carefully distinguish between these two concepts. Accordingly, some references listed in Table 1 are not truly RUL prediction studies. 2. To further strengthen the introduction, it would be beneficial to include more recent and relevant works, such as DOI: 10.1016/j.jpowsour.2022.230975; 10.1016/j.est.2025.116024. 3. The manuscript currently lists five contributions. This number is excessive and somewhat redundant. It would be clearer and more impactful to condense and reorganize them into three key contributions. 4. Section titles should not contain references or colons. Please revise accordingly. 5. All equations should be numbered, and every variable used in the equations must be explained. Avoid using whole words as variable names in formulas. 6. In Figure 2, the arrows pointing from the MSE loss and MMD loss to the Input are confusing. Please check whether the statement is correct or explain the meaning of the arrows. 7. It appears that target-domain labels may have been used from Page 7. If so, why not directly train and test using the target-domain data? Please clarify whether target labels are available, and if they are, discuss the meaningfulness of the domain adaptation task under this setting. 8. In many published works using the TRI dataset, models are typically trained on Batch 1 and tested on Batches 2 and 3. If target-domain labels were used to aid model training, then the task defined in this paper may be easier, and the results may not provide strong evidence that the proposed method is more effective than existing approaches. 9. Hyperparameters should be presented in a table for clarity and reproducibility. Reviewer #2: This paper proposes HybridoNet-Adapt, a novel domain-adaptive framework for accurate Remaining Useful Life (RUL) prediction of lithium-ion batteries. Although the experimental results seem promising, there are still some major issues. Therefore, the paper needs to be rejected and resubmitted. Other comments: 1) The study lacks practical interpretability. Although the methodology is emphasized, the model predictions are not supported by physical explanations or visual analyses. 2) The baselines are mostly traditional methods or relatively simple deep learning models, while more recent approaches such as advanced transfer learning or self-supervised learning are not systematically compared. 3) While different feature extraction modules and alignment losses are examined, the ablation study remains incomplete, as it does not explore alternative feature selection strategies or the sensitivity to different sampling window lengths. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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