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Thank you for stating the following financial disclosure: [This work was supported by the Guangdong Provincial Education Science Planning Project (2023GXJK354), the Guangdong Provincial University Ideological and Political Education Research Project (2021GXSZ061) and the 2024 Guangdong Provincial Higher Education Teaching Research and Reform Project, and the 2021 Guangdong Provincial Quality Engineering (Teaching and Research Office of the School Physical Education Curriculum Group); 2021 Guangdong Province Quality Engineering (Provincial First-class Undergraduate Course "School Sports"); 2023 Guangdong Provincial Quality Engineering (Excellent Sports Talent Training Program of Zhaoqing University); Funded by Guangdong Philosophy and Social Science Planning Project (GD23YDXZTY02).]. Please state what role the funders took in the study. 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Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: This study aims to explore the relationship between physical exercise and adolescent socio-emotional competence and to analyze the mediating effects of social support and peer relationships in the chain. An interesting idea, but not a new one. This manuscript could bring an additional novelty, if it presented the details of the research application correctly and completely. In the Introduction section, I recommend these studies, even though they are applied to athletes, most of whom are adolescents and provide support for the authors' argument: https://doi.org/10.1177/00315125211005235, https://doi.org/10.3390/children9050753 https://doi.org/10.7717/peerj.12803, https://doi.org/10.1177/00315125221135669 https://doi.org/10.3390/ijerph19031696 L151: "A total of 427 questionnaires were distributed ...." ??? Were 427 questionnaires or a single questionnaire applied to 427 subjects? I don't think it would be possible to apply 427 questionnaires!!! I think it's a mistake in the authors' expression. I recommend correct adaptation everywhere in this section and throughout the manuscript. Example here too ” 316 valid questionnaires”??? L154 ”The sample included 164 males and 152 females...” – I think this formulation should be adapted (example, maybe: teenagers and teenage girls), because at the age of 14 subjects cannot be classified as men or women L155: ” ± 1.405 years.” ?? I think expressing with only 2 decimal places would be ok! That is ” ± 1.40 years.” I can't find the criteria for inclusion and exclusion of subjects in the study? I recommend highlighting them in the manuscript L163: ” Physical Activity Rating Scale developed by Hashimoto(1990)” – why such an old instrument? 35 years old? The authors should argue, because today's adolescents have a completely different vision of social aspects, compared to respondents 35 years ago, when was the instrument validated? Was it validated on a specific population? (another question addressed to the authors) In the "2.Research Methods" section, data should be provided regarding the duration of completion, where were these assessment instruments applied, as a location? How long did it take to complete them? Were the subjects assisted by an adult? Did the subjects understand, accurately, at their age, all the items that the 4 instruments assess? Did they have any questions and to whom did they address them? How were the 4 instruments applied: in a single form or in separate forms? Were the subjects aware that they were completing 4 assessments or did they know that they were completing a single instrument with 4 aspects? Is this section unclear and does not provide criteria for the reproducibility of the study? The supplementary documents are not in English, which does not allow the reviewers to analyze these aspects (for example, I would like to find out details about Research protocols and Data.xlsx to verify the validity of the data, but I do not know the language used by the authors). I believe that translating the supplementary documents into English is essential, especially since some reviewers do not know the language used by the authors. I do not see the point of sending the main manuscript in English, the platform asks me if the English used by the authors is ok, but I, as a reviewer, cannot analyze most of the documents!!!!! This study does not allow for data validation or reproducibility... due to the lack of certain details and supporting documents in a language that reviewers are not required to know in this journal. Reviewer #2: Dear authors, I have studied an interesting article, with a well-proposed purpose, but with some limitations that require clarification. Below, I offer my observations and recommendations: 1. The Introduction section should include more aspects of social support through sports activities 2. I ask the authors to argue the relevance of the instruments used, compared to other instruments for evaluating the aspects targeted, which are newer, more recent (The first evaluation instrument is from 1990!!); 3. I recommend that the authors add to the manuscript the criteria for including and excluding subjects in the research group 4. I ask the authors to provide more details in the Research Methods section about how, when, where, how long the practical intervention lasted? (application of the questionnaire or the 4 evaluation instruments). To specify whether the adolescent subjects knew that they would be part of a research that targets several aspects!? The level of education of the adolescents is relevant and should be specified (were all respondents active in educational institutions?) 5. How were the questionnaires administered to the over 300 subjects? Did the authors administer them and provide details, or were they assisted by other people? Were those people able to provide additional information, as clearly as the authors?! Why do I ask this? Because in the “Acknowledgments” one of the authors thanks colleagues and students who helped? Or are these “students” the subjects involved in the study?!! In this case, they should use the same term, “adolescents” everywhere! I ask the authors to clarify! 6. Were the adolescents involved in the research provided with information regarding their role in what they have to complete or answer? 7. Were the assessment tools validated on the population, of which the subjects of this study are part? 8. I think that the numerical data in the manuscript should all be in the same format (with two decimal places). Please check everywhere in the manuscript 9. If the study is about children / adolescents, I recommend eliminating the words "male", "female" 10. In table 2, p=0.000.??? cannot be checked because the additional documents are not in English 11. I did not clearly understand what the purpose of the research was (the authors should clarify): to highlight certain relationships between the components of social support or to build a model and propose this model? I ask the authors to clarify in the conclusions and at the end of the discussions 12. I believe that the limitations of the study are few and I recommend the authors to analyze all aspects and specify them clearly (the study, as it is proposed, does not provide enough details to be replicated, due to limitations of context, age, level of education of the respondents, etc. etc.) 13. The conclusions are presented schematically!! I think it is more academic for authors to formulate clearly, concisely and scriptively what the ideas that resulted are. If readers want to read the title, abstract and conclusions, to see the basic idea, they have nothing to understand in the conclusions, in the form in which they are presented. The scheme with arrows can be included in the discussions or in the form of diagrams or figures, but the conclusions must be written 14. In References, there are extremely many references from the Asian area, which could provide subjectivity to the argued aspects!! It is not a bad thing, but it orients the ideas towards a certain area of the world, with certain influences of education or thinking, which does not offer the possibility of generalizing the conclusions. If they still maintain it, then the authors should conclude with reference to a certain typology of population. Maybe even in the title the reference to teenagers from China appears, and then the purpose and discussions that orient the idea are much clearer. 15. How did the authors evaluate whether each question is relevant, clear and sufficient? 16. How were the items translated or adapted for the subjects? Who checked the validity of the translation? 17. I recommend carefully checking the references, some are not relevant to this article, because they do not target the same age or context, and others are on subjects with conditions, and the authors did not specify anything about this aspect regarding the subjects in this study!!! Reviewer #3: Introduction The article begins by mentioning the importance of "non-cognitive skills", but its relationship to "social-emotional skills" is unclear. It is recommended to add a transition sentence. The third paragraph mentions the definition and impact of physical exercise, but suddenly inserts "Scientific participation in physical exercise..." This seems abrupt. It is recommended to make a clear transition in the previous sentence. The citation format is inconsistent, some have spaces before the brackets, and some do not. There are issues with the standardization of English punctuation marks. Some punctuation marks have no space after them and need to be fully checked. The overall research design is too simple, the method is outdated, and lacks innovation. Research Methods 2.1 Participants The article mentioned the distribution and return of questionnaires, but did not describe the sampling method (e.g., random sampling, convenience sampling), which affects the reproducibility of the study. 2.2.1 Measurement of physical activity The calculation (Duration × Intensity × Frequency) does not indicate whether it has been validated or whether other studies support the rationality of the formula. 2.3 Data processing The number of bootstrap samples (usually 5000) and the type of confidence interval (e.g., bias-corrected 95% CI) were not specified. Results and analysis 3.1 Common method bias test "Unrotated exploratory factor analysis extracted 11 factors with eigenvalues >1, the largest of which explained 34.719% of the variance (<40%)." It was not stated whether principal component analysis (PCA) or exploratory factor analysis (EFA) was used, and the method was vague. 3.2 Descriptive statistics and correlation analysis Only significance (p < 0.01) was reported, and the strength of the correlation coefficient (r) was not stated, which suggests that it is additional. The font size of the table is not uniform, and it is recommended to coordinate the reference format. Discussion 4.1 Physical Exercise and Social-Emotional Competencies “Physical exercise plays a key role in improving adolescents’ social-emotional competences. Cross-sectional studies cannot prove causality and cautionary statements should be used. 4.2 Independent mediating role of social support Literature comparison is weak and only cites “previous findings” without specifying which studies support them. “Social support equips adolescents with basic social skills…” Specific skills (e.g., conflict resolution, empathy) are not specified. 4.3 Independent mediating role of peer relationships The mixed use of "peer acceptance" and "peer relationships"; coordination is suggested. Classical theories (e.g., Sullivan's interpersonal relationship theory) can be cited to explain the role of peer relationships. 4.4 Chain mediation model analysis "Social support consistently enhances peer relationships" Unexplained mechanism, how social support reduces peer conflict. 4.5 Limitations No mention of sample representativeness (only three schools in Guangdong) and homology bias. "Considering other potential variables, such as cognitive reappraisal..." 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The Impact of Physical Exercise on Adolescents' Social-Emotional Competence: The Chain Mediating Role of Social Support and Peer Relationships PONE-D-25-20277R1 Dear Authors, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Ashraf Atta Mohamed Safein Salem Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Manuscript ID: PONE-D-25-20277R1 Title: The Impact of Physical Exercise on Adolescents' Social-Emotional Competence: The Chain Mediating Role of Social Support and Peer Relationships Dear Author(s), Thank you for submitting your revised manuscript to PLOS ONE. The reviewers have carefully evaluated your responses and the updated version of your article. Both reviewers are satisfied that you have adequately addressed their comments. Reviewer 1 noted that the manuscript has been improved in structure and clarity, while Reviewer 2 indicated that your responses resolved their concerns and that no further comments were necessary. In light of the reviewers’ recommendations and my own assessment, I am pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been accepted for publication in PLOS ONE. We congratulate you on this accomplishment and look forward to the contribution your work will make to the field. Sincerely, Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: N/A ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: The authors responded to my and the other reviewers' requests, clarified the issues in question, and adapted the manuscript into a better structured form. I have no further comments. Reviewer #2: Dear authors, In the review of an article, there are always other observations and questions, or recommendations. I, personally, will not make any more comments or observations, because you have answered my requests and I would risk, by other requests, diluting the direction and central idea of your research. I wish you success and to develop the idea on a wider population, perhaps on a national level, so that you can generalize, at least at the level of children in your country. It is known that each region of a country also has different cultural contexts, education with differences, so that you cannot generalize a study on a region (you have now identified the limit, in your article). ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: Yes: Dan Iulian Alexe Reviewer #2: Yes: Cristina Ioana Alexe ********** |
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