Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMay 14, 2025 |
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Dear Dr. Shi, Both reviewers confirm the timely nature of the study, but address very important points considering unbalances in sampling, geological comparativeness, and statistical treatment insufficiencies. At the same time, the manuscript seems sloppy written. At this point, one revision is allowed if the authors can substantially improve the story. Otherwise, it is suggested the authors wait untile the story can be fully sustained and then re-submid as a new paper.plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: This manuscript compares bacterial community structure, assembly processes and interaction networks between consolidated and non-consolidated paddy soils in the Yangtze River Delta. The topic is timely and the dataset sizeable; analytic approaches (NMDS, NCM, network topology) are appropriate. However, shortcomings in abstract completeness, methodological detail (sample handling, sequencing data deposition, statistical assumptions) and formatting (figure/table call-outs, reference metadata) currently hinder reproducibility and clarity. Lines 8-10. Only the background sentence is present; methods, key findings and conclusions are missing. Please expand to a structured abstract (Background-Methods-Results-Conclusions) within ~300 words as per PLOS ONE guidelines. Lines 11-15. The Introduction ends without explicit hypotheses or research questions. Please articulate 2-3 testable hypotheses to strengthen the narrative. Lines 18-20. Only the 20-40 cm layer was taken, omitting the typical topsoil (0–20 cm). Provide ecological justification, clarify composite vs. replicate cores, and state whether field blanks were included. Lines 63-65. No mention of negative controls, extraction/PCR blanks, or read-quality thresholds. Detail QC pipeline and supply NCBI SRA (or equivalent) accession numbers in the Data Availability statement. NMDS and network analyses lack distance metrics, correlation thresholds and FDR correction approach; PCNM/VPA model F and p values are also omitted. Please provide these parameters in Methods and Results. Section 3.2.2 is present but 3.2.1 is missing. Verify section numbering and ensure all figures are cited in order at ≥300 dpi. Several citations lack DOIs and journal titles are inconsistently abbreviated. Please format all references per PLOS ONE style (full titles + DOI) and remove extra indents. To help readers visualize the sampling layout and surrounding context, please add a study-area location map (~1:50,000 scale) with coordinates, and cite it in the “2.1 Study area” or Methods section. Reviewer #2: This study explores the profound impacts of land consolidation practices in the Yangtze River Delta on soil bacterial communities. Drawing on a comprehensive dataset derived from 50 paddy soil samples—36 from consolidated plots and 14 from non-consolidated ones—the researchers employed advanced 16S rRNA sequencing techniques in conjunction with a diverse array of ecological and statistical tools, including NMDS, RDA, VPA, the Neutral Community Model, niche metrics, co-occurrence networks, and cohesion analysis. The findings reveal that land consolidation significantly homogenizes soil properties, shifts community assembly mechanisms toward stochastic dynamics, broadens species' ecological niches, and fosters stronger positive interspecific interactions—collectively contributing to an enhanced level of community stability. This study establishes a connection between macro-scale land management interventions and micro-scale ecological mechanisms, specifically community assembly and network stability. Few previous studies have explored this relationship in paddy soils. However, the manuscript does not adequately position itself within the broader context of literature on agricultural intensification versus ecological restoration. It is therefore necessary to clarify how consolidation differs from conventional practices such as tillage or fertilization. The experimental design includes sufficient spatial replication; however, the comparison of 36 versus 14 sites is substantially unbalanced. A power analysis (e.g., conducted using G*Power or the pwr package) indicates that to detect a medium effect size (Cohen’s d = 0.5) at a significance level of α = 0.05 with 80% statistical power, a balanced sample size of approximately 26–30 per group is required. Such imbalance in the current design may increase the risk of Type II error and potentially lead to inflated effect size estimates. Single time-point sampling fails to capture the dynamic fluctuations across seasons. Paddy soils experience recurring wet-dry cycles that profoundly shape and regulate microbial community structures. It is therefore recommended to either include a dedicated paragraph addressing this temporal limitation or present preliminary data from multiple seasons to better reflect the ecological variability. Consolidation sites may have undergone concurrent improvements in land leveling, fertilization, and irrigation. In the absence of detailed documentation regarding the specific types of fertilizers used, irrigation schedules, pesticide applications, and tillage frequency, it becomes infeasible to isolate the observed effects as being exclusively attributable to “consolidation.” To enhance the accuracy of such attributions, it is recommended to incorporate data from farmer surveys or official government project records. Soil sampling and bacterial samples were collected from the 20–40 cm depth interval; however, it remains unclear whether the geochemical data correspond precisely to this same soil layer. It is recommended to include a schematic diagram or a table to clarify this. Redox potential (Eh), dissolved organic carbon, Fe(II)/Fe(III) ratios, and bulk density are known to play a critical role in paddy soils but are not included in the current dataset. The inclusion of these parameters could potentially account for a larger portion of the 84% unexplained variance observed in the variation partitioning analysis (VPA). Although concentrations of Cu, Cd, Pb, Cr, Hg, and Zn are presented, no significant differences are observed between the LC and WL treatments. It may therefore be appropriate to relocate this table to the supplementary material to maintain focus on the main findings. Only 15% of the variance is explained. The remaining 85% should be addressed and may be attributed to potential factors such as unmeasured edaphic variables, biotic interactions, methodological noise, or inherent stochasticity. Report the results of goodness-of-fit tests, such as the χ² test or AIC comparisons with niche-based models. Currently, the higher R² value for LC is interpreted as an indicator of stronger stochasticity; however, it could also suggest lower levels of environmental heterogeneity. The slopes are shallow (−0.1401 vs. −0.2513), and the R² values are very low (0.0064 and 0.0082). Please indicate whether the slopes remain statistically significant after controlling for environmental variables using partial Mantel tests. Elaborate on the Methods section by incorporating comprehensive details regarding the full factorial design, precise GPS coordinates, and a meticulously crafted agronomic management questionnaire. Please incorporate a supplementary table that meticulously enumerates all edaphic variables for each site, along with corresponding sequencing depths and rarefaction metrics. Conduct network analyses anew using an additional null-model approach (e.g., SPIEC-EASI), and present the results with FDR-corrected measures of statistical significance. Include a dedicated section detailing the limitations of the study, such as the temporal snapshot nature of the data and the imbalance in sample sizes across groups. Conduct a sensitivity analysis by excluding sites characterized by extreme pH levels or organic matter content, in order to evaluate the robustness of the consolidation signal. Meticulous proofreading for grammatical accuracy and typographical errors is essential; furthermore, enlisting the assistance of a professional editing service is highly recommended to enhance overall clarity and linguistic refinement. Provide a conceptual diagram that succinctly illustrates the sequential process whereby soil consolidation leads to homogenization, fostering a stochastic microbial assembly, which in turn enhances positive cohesion within the soil matrix. Deposit the raw sequence reads into a publicly accessible repository (e.g., https://nmdc.cn/) and provide the corresponding BioProject link in the Data Availability section to ensure transparency and facilitate further research. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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<p>Land consolidation drives changes in soil bacterial community structure and promotes positive bacterial interactions PONE-D-25-26012R1 Dear Dr. Shi, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Erika Kothe Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): One reviewer indicated that small editorial polishing might be required. This can be done at the page proof stage. Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: The authors have thoroughly revised their manuscript and effectively addressed the concerns raised in previous review rounds. The study is well-structured, methodologically sound, and provides novel insights into how land consolidation alters soil bacterial community structure, assembly mechanisms, and interaction networks in paddy soils. The addition of explicit hypotheses, detailed methodological descriptions, rigorous quality control, and improved data transparency significantly strengthen the work. The discussion acknowledges limitations such as sample imbalance and single time-point sampling while offering clear perspectives for future research. Overall, the manuscript presents valuable and timely findings with both theoretical and practical relevance for microbial ecology and sustainable land management. I recommend acceptance after minor editorial polishing. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Junqiang Zheng ********** |
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