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| Original SubmissionJune 23, 2025 |
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If the reviewer comments include a recommendation to cite specific previously published works, please review and evaluate these publications to determine whether they are relevant and should be cited. There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: N/A ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: General Evaluation Food security has always been a hot topic in academia and politics. Based on the survey data of farmers in Jiangxi Province, the author measures the enthusiasm of farmers for planting double cropping rice by their planting behavior, and empirically analyzes the impact and mechanism of farmers' digital literacy on the enthusiasm of farmers in traditional double cropping rice production areas in Jiangxi. In general, the topic selection has certain significance, the research design idea is clear, the demonstration process is reasonable, is a good empirical paper. In order to better improve the quality of the paper, several suggestions for reference: Specific Suggestions for Revision 1.Title Optimization The original title is overly lengthy. “Double Hundred and Thousand” refers to the survey project name rather than core concepts, which could be relocated to the data description section. Suggested revision: “Research on the Impact of Digital Literacy on Farmers’ Enthusiasm for Grain Cultivation: An Empirical Analysis Based on Double-Cropping Rice Cultivation in Jiangxi Province”. 2.Introduction Transition The section from “the importance of food security” to “the role of digital literacy” lacks a logical bridge. Add transitional sentences to create a smoother connection between ideas. 3.Literature Gap Justification The statement that “academic research on the impact of digital literacy on farmers’ enthusiasm for grain cultivation remains limited” needs to be substantiated by citing emerging studies (even those with conflicting conclusions) to precisely situate this paper’s contributions. 4.Introduction Streamlining The introduction section could be appropriately condensed while maintaining clear logic and smooth transitions between ideas. 5.Mechanism Analysis Depth The mechanism analysis could be more nuanced. For example, beyond information access, does digital literacy enhance farmers' market forecasting ability, risk tolerance, or operational management capacity when promoting farmland transfer? How does this differ from mere land transfer platform usage? 6.Model Equation Presentation In the model explanation section, avoid inserting mathematical formulas in the main text to prevent inconsistent paragraph spacing. 7.Measurement Validity Concerns Table 1 shows “digital technology literacy” measured by only one item (digital technology adoption). This may raise validity concerns and requires justification. 8.Instrumental Variable Validity The “municipal mobile phone penetration rate” correlates strongly with regional economic development, which may directly affect grain cultivation enthusiasm through non-farm opportunities and infrastructure. Although “village economic development level” is controlled, potential omitted variable bias remains. The exogeneity of this instrumental variable and its limitations need more thorough discussion. Consideration of more micro-level instruments (e.g., village/community digital infrastructure) is advised. 9.Heterogeneity Analysis Robustness In the education-level heterogeneity analysis, grouping “junior high school or below” vs “senior high school or above” is standard but requires reporting sample distribution (Table 7 shows N=730 vs N=191). The stability of results for the smaller sample group (senior high school or above) should be discussed. Similar sample size concerns apply to cooperative participation groups (non-members N=711 vs members N=210). Interaction term regression could enhance analysis. 10.Heterogeneity Dimension Expansion The heterogeneity analysis could incorporate additional dimensions for more comprehensive exploration. 11.Policy Recommendation Precision The policy suggestions section should better leverage findings from heterogeneity analysis to propose more targeted recommendations. Reviewer #2: This manuscript presents a timely and policy-relevant investigation into how digital literacy influences grain cultivation enthusiasm among farmers in Jiangxi, China. By using data from a large-scale survey and employing Probity and Tobit models, the study provides robust empirical evidence to support its conclusions. The design of a multi-dimensional digital literacy index and the examination of mediation and heterogeneity pathways add methodological strength. However, the manuscript would benefit from substantial improvements in clarity, depth of explanation, and structural precision, especially to meet international readership standards. The paper currently overuses general statements, lacks articulation of novel contributions, and could improve the interpretability of its empirical results. Specific Comments and Suggestions for Revision 1. Clarify the Study’s Original Contributions The current introduction does not clearly articulate the novelty of the paper. The authors are encouraged to list 2–3 explicit contributions at the end of the Introduction, e.g. The construction of a five-dimensional digital literacy index tailored to rural China; Identification of farmland transfer, machinery services, and green technology as mediating mechanisms; Heterogeneity analysis by education level and cooperative membership. 2. Define “Enthusiasm for Grain Cultivation” More Precisely The term “enthusiasm” is used repeatedly but is operationalized via behavior (whether or not to grow double-cropping rice). Since "enthusiasm" typically refers to emotional or attitudinal variables, consider rephrasing or providing a clearer construct definition (e.g., “measured enthusiasm through behavioral proxies such as crop choice and cultivation area”). 3. Improve Figure 1 with Caption and English Terms The theoretical framework figure lacks an informative caption and currently mixes Chinese-style conceptualization with English labeling. Revise the figure with: all variable names in English; A caption that explains arrows and variables (e.g., “This diagram illustrates the hypothesized mechanisms linking digital literacy to grain cultivation behavior.”) 4. Expand the Explanation of the Empirical Model While the use of Probit and Tobit models is appropriate, the manuscript lacks clarity about variable definitions and the reasoning for model choice. Include a section that explicitly defines all variables and symbols in the model equations to enhance transparency. 5. Strengthen Justification of Instrumental Variable The choice of “municipal mobile phone penetration rate” as an instrument for digital literacy needs stronger theoretical and empirical support. Authors should: Explain why this IV is correlated with digital literacy; Justify why it is not directly related to cultivation behavior; Cite prior literature or data on mobile infrastructure variation. 6. Standardize Tables and Improve Formatting Capitalize variable names and avoid overly technical abbreviations; Report confidence intervals in addition to standard errors; Align table styles with PLOS ONE formatting standards (e.g., using bold for significant variables, consistent decimals). 7. Eliminate Redundancies and Vague Phrasing Phrases such as “significantly positive effect on enthusiasm” are repeated frequently. Use more varied and precise language, e.g., “Digital literacy significantly increases the likelihood of adopting double-cropping rice” or “enhances the scale of cultivation.” 8. Summarize Mechanism Findings More Clearly in Conclusion The current conclusion summarizes the baseline results well but underplays the mediation analysis. Add a brief sentence such as: “Among the three mediating pathways, farmland transfer-in had the strongest effect, indicating that access to land remains a key channel for enhancing production behavior.” 9. Prioritize Policy Recommendations The policy section is comprehensive but could benefit from prioritization. For example, recommend first improving digital infrastructure, then farmer training, and finally green technology dissemination, according to feasibility and impact. 10. Deepen Discussion on Digital Divide The “Further Discussion” section raises valuable points about digital inequality. Consider adding specific mitigation suggestions such as: “To avoid marginalizing elderly or low-education farmers, policies could introduce rural ‘digital envoys’ to provide peer-based guidance in digital farming.” Reviewer #3: Thank you for the opportunity to read the paper titled Research on the Impact of Farmers' Digital Literacy on Farmers' Enthusiasm for Grain Cultivation: Based on the Survey Data of "Double Hundred and Thousand" Farmers in Jiangxi Province. The paper makes a useful contribution to the literature but would benefit from revisions prior to publication. I offer some suggestions below. The title needs revisions. The authors can consider the suggestion below The Impact of Farmers' Digital Literacy on Farmers' Enthusiasm for Grain Cultivation: Findings from the "Double Hundred and Thousand" Farmers in Jiangxi Province 3 Data Source, Variable Setting and Model Selection What was the study design? What impact design was used? Results The presentation of the results needs clarity. Section 41. Baseline Regression Results. Why baseline results? How were you able to establish impact from only baseline study? The presentation of the results should align with the study objectives/hypothesis. 6 Further Discussion This section is out of place. The discussion of the findings should come before the conclusion. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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Research on the Impact of Farmers’Digital Literacy on Farmers’Enthusiasm for Grain Cultivation: Findings from the “Double Hundred and Thousand” Farmers in Jiangxi Province PONE-D-25-33960R1 Dear Dr. WANG, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Dingde Xu Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): The authors have addressed well with the reviewers' comments and it is suggested to be accepeted. Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: The author has made careful revisions and provided point-to-point responses to my questions. The manuscript is acceptable. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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