Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJune 12, 2025 |
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However, the SDC provided no direct funding for preparation and submission of this article.” Please state what role the funders took in the study. If the funders had no role, please state: "The funders had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript." If this statement is not correct you must amend it as needed. Please include this amended Role of Funder statement in your cover letter; we will change the online submission form on your behalf. 4. We noted in your submission details that a portion of your manuscript may have been presented or published elsewhere. “The dataset (socio-demographic characteristics) used in this manuscript has also been used in a separate publication (DOI:10.1186/s12913-025-12893-5). However, the analysis presented here is entirely distinct. This study focuses on the satisfaction with healthcare services whereas the other examined satisfaction with health insurance components. The socio-demographic characteristics of respondents are the same due to the use of the same dataset, but the research questions, analytical approach, and findings are different. This manuscript has not been published or submitted elsewhere for publication.” Please clarify whether this [conference proceeding or publication] was peer-reviewed and formally published. If this work was previously peer-reviewed and published, in the cover letter please provide the reason that this work does not constitute dual publication and should be included in the current manuscript. 5. Please remove all personal information, ensure that the data shared are in accordance with participant consent, and re-upload a fully anonymized data set. Note: spreadsheet columns with personal information must be removed and not hidden as all hidden columns will appear in the published file. 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In sample, how did you select the sample proportionately from the selected health facilities enrolled in HIB. Have you selected the health facilities randomly or what? Proportionate from total population or NHIP enrollment or what ? clarify. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: 1. Sample Size Justification Comment: The Methods state that “A total of 468 insured patients … were included” but no a priori power or sample-size calculation is provided to justify this number for the planned multi-ordinal logistic regressions (pp. 13–14, L126–131). Recommendation: Please include a power analysis—specifying expected effect sizes, number of predictors, desired power (e.g., 80 %), and α-level—to confirm that n = 468 is sufficient to detect meaningful associations. 2. Handling of Likert-Scale Data Comment: Satisfaction domain scores are calculated by averaging 18 PSQ-III items on a 1–5 Likert scale (pp. 20–21, L223–228). Treating ordinal data as continuous may bias estimates if scale assumptions are violated. Recommendation: Report Cronbach’s α for each domain in the full sample (not only the pre-test) to confirm internal consistency. Conduct sensitivity analyses using ordinal methods (e.g., factor analysis on the ordinal items or GEE for ordinal outcomes) to verify that mean-based scores yield similar results. 3. Choice of Multi-Ordinal Logistic Regression Comment: The manuscript uses multi-ordinal logistic regression for three outcome categories (“dissatisfied,” “neutral,” “satisfied”) but does not report testing the proportional-odds assumption (pp. 8–9, L37–42). Recommendation: Provide diagnostics (e.g., Brant test) for the proportional-odds assumption. If violated, consider partial proportional-odds or multinomial logistic models to avoid biased odds ratios. 4. Model Selection and Overfitting Comment: Variable selection used stepwise forward selection based on AIC (pp. 15–16, L25–28). Stepwise methods can inflate Type I error and risk overfitting when many predictors are considered. Recommendation: Report the number of parameters relative to events per parameter in each domain model. Consider penalized approaches (e.g., LASSO) or cross-validation to assess model stability. Present full (“all-covariate”) models alongside the reduced models to demonstrate robustness of selected predictors. 5. Presentation of Regression Results Comment: Table 4 displays only statistically significant predictors, obscuring potentially important confounders (pp. 24–25, L249–252). Recommendation: Publish complete regression tables—including non-significant covariates—with AORs, 95 % CIs, and p-values for all variables to enhance transparency and allow readers to assess confounding. 6. Adjustment for Multiple Comparisons Comment: Conducting seven separate domain-specific regressions increases the risk of spurious findings (pp. 24–25, Table 4). Recommendation: Apply a multiple-testing correction (e.g., Bonferroni or Benjamini–Hochberg) or explicitly state that analyses are exploratory, to contextualize p-values—particularly those near α = 0.05. Reviewer #2: Dear Authors, We greatly appreciate the effort in your study assessing patient satisfaction under Nepal’s NHIP. To further enhance the clarity and rigor of your manuscript, we suggest the following statistical and methodological clarifications and improvements: 1. Justification of Reference Categories in Regression Models In your ordinal logistic regression models, the choice of reference groups (e.g., "no formal education" for education level, "age below 20" for age, "agriculture" for occupation) appears arbitrary and lacks a clear rationale. Reference categories should ideally be selected based on: - Policy relevance (e.g., the majority or socially normative group), - Interpretation convenience (e.g., stable or meaningful baseline), - Statistical stability (e.g., groups with sufficient sample size). Using the first-listed category by default can lead to unstable or inflated odds ratios, particularly when categories differ significantly in sample size or variance (e.g., age below 20 vs. above 60 years in age groups). We recommend re-examining the choice of reference groups and explicitly justifying them within the methods section. 2. Incomplete Reporting of Multinomial Logistic Regression Results In Table 4, the regression results are presented selectively, often showing odds ratios only for one or two categories (e.g., only "60+ age group" without comparisons to other age groups). This selective presentation limits the reader's ability to: - Compare all levels within a categorical variable, - Understand the overall effect pattern of the variable, - Detect potential suppression or confounding effects. If space is limited, we recommend including full regression tables (with all categories) as supplementary material, and clearly stating whether the table includes only statistically significant. 3. Lack of linkage between descriptive and inferential statistics Table 1 provides useful descriptive statistics on patients’ socioeconomic characteristics, but lacks inferential statistical analysis to assess whether the categorizations used are appropriate and whether there are significant differences across groups. When variables have three or more categories, statistical tests such as ANOVA or chi-square tests can be employed to compare satisfaction levels across categories. These analyses would help clarify the structure of associations between patient characteristics and satisfaction, and reinforce the rationale behind the regression model specifications. 4. Disconnection Between Analytical Findings and Conclusions The main findings of your regression models emphasize associations between patient satisfaction and socioeconomic characteristics (e.g., age, education, chronic illness). However, the conclusions emphasize only domain-level satisfaction (e.g., low satisfaction in financial and accessibility aspects) and call for broader health system strengthening—without referencing the regression findings. This weakens the internal logic of the study. We suggest aligning the conclusions more directly with your analytical results—for instance, noting that vulnerable groups (e.g., older adults, lower-educated, subsidized patients) were systematically less satisfied, and that targeted policy actions may be needed for these groups. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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Dear Dr. Marasini, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please address the comments of the reviewer and also check the grammatical/spell errors throughout the text as well as rationale for the reference value in methods/data analysis part. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 28 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols . Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols . We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Kshitij Karki, MPH, MA Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: If the reviewer comments include a recommendation to cite specific previously published works, please review and evaluate these publications to determine whether they are relevant and should be cited. There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments: Thank you for the revision. Please go through the minor comments from the reviewer. Also, I would like to request you to go through the grammatical/spell errors in the manuscripts (as in Line 123). You can also write in methods/ data analysis part - why you choose the reference value for bivariate/multivariate analysis. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Thank you for carefully revising your manuscript in response to the previous review comments. I appreciate the effort you have made to incorporate the suggested changes, and I believe the paper has improved as a result. I would like to offer a few additional minor comments, which I believe, if addressed, will further strengthen your work and contribute to making it an even better paper. - Please provide additional details on the generalized ordered logistic regression, including how the proportional odds assumption was tested and whether it was satisfied. - In Table 1, please add a note explaining the presence of missing data for variables where N is less than 468. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/ . PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org |
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Patient Satisfaction with Healthcare Services among Health Insurance Program Beneficiaries in Nepal: A Cross-Sectional Study PONE-D-25-31570R2 Dear Dr. Sabina Marasini, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Kshitij Karki, MPH, MA Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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