Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJune 20, 2025 |
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Is the methodology feasible and described in sufficient detail to allow the work to be replicable??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors described where all data underlying the findings will be made available when the study is complete??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above and, if applicable, provide comments about issues authors must address before this protocol can be accepted for publication. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about research or publication ethics. You may also provide optional suggestions and comments to authors that they might find helpful in planning their study. Reviewer #1: This is a well-designed study protocol describing a single-masked, randomized controlled non-inferiority trial investigating the use of a ChatGPT-based AI chatbot to improve bowel preparation quality (BBPS) before colonoscopy. The topic is relevant and of growing interest, especially with the increasing integration of LLMs in patient education. The authors provide a detailed description of the study design, intervention, and statistical methods, following SPIRIT-AI guidelines. However, while the protocol is methodologically robust, several clarifications and improvements are needed to strengthen the protocol prior to trial implementation. Major Comments 1. While the manuscript clearly defines the statistical rule for non-inferiority (i.e., the lower bound of the 95% CI for BBPS difference must be greater than −1.1), the choice of the −1.1 BBPS point margin requires more clinical justification. The authors should elaborate why this value is considered clinically acceptable—e.g., by referencing the minimal clinically important difference (MCID), BBPS system validation, or its expected impact on detecting adenomas or determining adequacy (BBPS ≥6). 2. The study is single-masked (endoscopist only), but the participants and staff interacting with them are unblinded. This introduces a risk of performance and detection bias, particularly in patient-reported outcomes (anxiety, satisfaction). Please discuss how this potential bias will be mitigated (e.g., standardizing questionnaire delivery). 3. The inclusion of only digitally literate patients introduces a selection bias and limits generalizability, especially since poor bowel preparation is common among older adults, who may lack such literacy. This limitation should be more clearly acknowledged and discussed in the protocol. 4. While the manuscript outlines general plans for error logging and clinician review of 10% of sessions, it would benefit from specifying a threshold for unacceptable error rates that would trigger protocol revision or safety alerts. 5. It is unclear how adherence to bowel preparation instructions will be objectively assessed and compared between groups, especially since the chatbot allows for personalized interaction. Please define operational criteria for adherence in each arm (e.g., completion of laxative, compliance with timing). Minor Comments 1. The manuscript inconsistently refers to BBPS as a non-inferiority outcome and sometimes as a superiority outcome. Please clarify this in both abstract and methods. 2. The manuscript refers to SPIRIT-AI in multiple sections in nearly identical wording. Consider reducing repetition for conciseness. Reviewer #2: The authors of this manuscript—a trial protocol—present an interesting study, but I have several comments to offer. 1. To assert in the Introduction that no data exist on the use of ChatGPT for bowel preparation in colonoscopy is unsustainable. A study has already been published that yielded preliminary results through a concordance analysis (https://doi.org/10.3390/diagnostics14222537). The authors have neither cited nor discussed this work, which is presently the only one indexed in MEDLINE. Although that study employed an LLM to evaluate the BBPS rather than to provide information, it should nevertheless be cited to demonstrate how ChatGPT recognises the importance of bowel preparation for colonoscopy. 2. The study design and statistical plan describe a non-inferiority framework, yet the study is introduced as a “superiority randomised controlled trial”. This inconsistency must be corrected, and the primary hypothesis to be tested should be clearly defined. 3. The protocol lists BBPS, DASS-21 and PSQ-18 all as primary endpoints—three in total. How will multiplicity be handled? The resulting inflation of the alpha error will be considerable and must be discussed and justified; the sample-size calculation will presumably be greatly affected. 4. A two-sided test on a mean difference of 1.1 BBPS points is specified, but in a non-inferiority setting a one-sided test with H₀ defined on the delta margin is required. The delta of −1.1 should be based on solid clinical references (guidelines or correlation studies) and these should be cited, so that a loss of 1.1 points can be shown not to worsen the ADR in a clinically meaningful way, as well as remaining statistically coherent. 5. Does the planned sample size retain adequate power for the secondary outcomes as well? 6. The primary analysis proposes a t-test followed by a Mann–Whitney test, yet ANCOVA would be more appropriate, providing a 95 % confidence interval to be compared with delta in a non-inferiority context. Moreover, with only 96 participants you intend to adjust for seven covariates, entailing a marked risk of over-fitting; likewise, imputing 20 datasets in so small a sample carries a high likelihood of spurious variance. 7. The DASS-21 measures “sub-acute” anxiety and thus does not capture the immediate anxiety on the day of the examination, as it refers to the preceding week; similarly, the PSQ-18 is administered post-procedure, so post-sedative symptoms may influence it. These limitations need to be discussed. 8. Why exclude patients with clinical anxiety? Anxiety is an endpoint, and such patients are precisely those who might benefit from the intervention you propose. What will the findings mean in a cohort already calm at baseline, and to whom will they be applicable? 9. ChatGPT is not open source, contrary to the statement made in the manuscript. 10. Is it feasible to recruit patients meeting all these criteria within a few months without adopting a multicentre design? 11. Why employ an oncological CTCAE for diagnostic colonoscopies? Reviewer #3: This study details the protocol for a prospective, randomized controlled trial employing a non-inferiority framework. The study is designed to compare the efficacy of a novel ChatGPT-based counselling intervention with standard-of-care counseling for patients undergoing bowel preparation for colonoscopy. The trial will enroll 96 participants at a single center, with allocation to the intervention or control arm in a 1:1 ratio. The primary endpoint is the Boston Bowel Preparation Score (BBPS). Secondary endpoints will assess patient-reported outcomes, including anxiety via the DASS-21 scale and satisfaction using the PSQ-18. The protocol has secured ethics approval and adheres to both SPIRIT-2025 and the specialized SPIRIT-AI reporting standards. Major concerns: 1. Line 137-138: One aspect of your eligibility criteria allows both first‑time and repeat elective colonoscopy patients to enroll. Patients who have previously undergone colonoscopy may already be familiar with dietary restrictions and bowel‑preparation instructions, potentially affecting their baseline knowledge, anxiety and adherence compared with first‑time patients. How do you plan to account for this difference in your study design or analysis? Have you considered stratifying randomization by prior colonoscopy experience or adjusting for it in your statistical models to ensure that the intervention’s effect is not confounded by participants’ prior familiarity with the procedure? 2. Line 162-163: The protocol indicates that outcome assessments will be performed by experienced endoscopists who are blinded to the intervention. However, the manuscript does not specify how many endoscopists will participate in the trial or how inter‑observer variability will be managed. Could you clarify the number of endoscopists involved and describe any training or calibration procedures to ensure consistent scoring of the BBPS? 3. Line 180-189: In describing the intervention, the authors state that the chatbot’s content is based on guidelines from the ESGE and the MOH. However, the laxative timing and dosage in your protocol are slightly different from the 2019 ESGE recommendations. Could you specify which year/version of the ESGE guidelines you followed and explain any deviations in timing or dosage? How did you ensure that your regimen remains evidence‑based given these differences? 4. Line 244-250: Given that your intervention relies on a proprietary OpenAI model that is periodically updated, how will you ensure that participants receive consistent guidance throughout the trial? Your protocol mentions documenting model updates and assessing consistency but does not specify whether the ChatGPT version will be frozen for the duration of the study. Will you lock in a specific model version and settings, or implement procedures to detect and mitigate any behavioral changes if OpenAI releases an update mid‑trial? 5. Line 251-256: Your protocol states that patients will interact directly with the ChatGPT‑based chatbot without real‑time expert oversight and that the model will operate with a temperature parameter of 1.0 to encourage “creative and empathetic responses”. This raises the potential concern of high‑temperature settings can increase the likelihood of ambiguous or inaccurate advice. Could you justify the choice of a temperature setting of 1.0 and explain whether lowering it to reduce variability was considered? 6. Line 257-274: While the protocol details several mechanisms for classifying and logging AI‑generated errors and for escalating clinically inappropriate responses to human counselling, it does not define what level of error would be considered unacceptable or what corrective actions would follow. Could you clarify whether you have set quantitative thresholds for error rates or types that would trigger modifications to the chatbot prompts or suspension of the intervention? Additionally, how will decisions be made about implementing changes to the chatbot’s content if persistent errors are identified during monitoring? 7. Your eligibility criteria favor participants with “basic digital literacy” and fluency in English or Malay, and exclude those with cognitive impairment or complex comorbidities. This means the trial will largely involve individuals who are already comfortable with technology and able to understand health instructions, whereas those with low health literacy, limited language skills or complex medical needs—often the patients who have the most difficulty preparing for colonoscopy—will not be included. Given these inclusion criteria, could the authors comment on the selection bias and whether the study population truly reflects the broader patient groups most in need of improved bowel‑preparation support? Minor concerns: 1. "Dr(Surgery)" for Nabil Mohammad Azmi: This is an uncommon degree abbreviation. Please check. 2. Line 203: “No PII…..” is at first use. Line 244 “PII” has full term. The abbreviation should be defined upon its first use. Please write out the full term followed by the acronym in parentheses. 3. Line 220: “will be assessed using the “Flesh Kincaid” Grade Level score” should be “Flesch Kincaid”. 4. Line 395: should be “TMG”. 5. The manuscript uses both “counselling” and “counseling.” Please review the text for consistency and adopt a single preferred form throughout. 6. Line 535-536: "The primary outcome, the BBPS, is a validated measure of bowel cleanliness [18]": Reference [18] is for a psychiatric study using Woebot (JMIR Ment Health. 2017). The correct reference for BBPS validation would be [25] Lai EJ et al. (Gastrointest Endosc. 2009). 7. Reference 7 and 10 appear to be duplicates. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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A Prospective Single-Masked, Non-Inferiority, Parallel-Group Randomized Controlled Trial of the Efficacy of a ChatGPT-Based AI Chatbot to Improve Boston Bowel Preparation Scores for Colonoscopy Preparation: A Trial Protocol PONE-D-25-33008R1 Dear Dr. Abdul Jalal, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Chih-Wei Tseng Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Does the manuscript provide a valid rationale for the proposed study, with clearly identified and justified research questions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Is the protocol technically sound and planned in a manner that will lead to a meaningful outcome and allow testing the stated hypotheses??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Is the methodology feasible and described in sufficient detail to allow the work to be replicable??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors described where all data underlying the findings will be made available when the study is complete??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above and, if applicable, provide comments about issues authors must address before this protocol can be accepted for publication. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about research or publication ethics. You may also provide optional suggestions and comments to authors that they might find helpful in planning their study. Reviewer #1: The authors have fully addressed previous concerns. The manuscript is clear, consistent, and suitable for acceptance. Reviewer #2: The authors revised the manuscript concerning the remaining issues. The new version is now improved. Congratulations. Reviewer #3: The authors have been thorough and responsive, satisfactorily addressing all the major and minor concerns raised in my initial review. The resulting changes have substantially strengthened the manuscript. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No ********** |
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