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| Original SubmissionJune 26, 2025 |
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Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: Thank you for the opportunity to review this manuscript by Muhammad Salman Bashir, M.S.C. This is a meaningful investigation with a notably robust sample size. Below are my suggestions for the authors’ consideration: 1�Data Reporting: While the manuscript specifies the number of valid responses, it should also report the total number of surveys distributed/collected and the valid response rate (i.e., valid responses as a percentage of total collected). This is essential for assessing potential selection bias. 2�Measurement Norms: It is unclear whether the instruments measuring "Emotional Management" and "Exercise Adherence" have established normative data specifically for the Chinese college student population. The validity of subsequent statistical analyses hinges on confirming whether such population-specific norms exist and were used. 3�Statistical Analysis: The use of Pearson correlation assumes interval-level data. If the "Physical Exercise" variable (categorized as low, medium, high volume) is treated as ordinal, alternative correlation analyses appropriate for ordinal data (e.g., Spearman's rho or Kendall's tau) should be employed. The authors must explicitly address this methodological choice. ,4�Sample Representation: The representation of fourth-year students (1.3%) is statistically insufficient for meaningful analysis. I strongly recommend combining third- and fourth-year students into a single "Upperclassmen" category to contrast with "Underclassmen" (years 1-2), ensuring adequate group size for comparisons. 5�Data Accuracy (Table 3): The reported value η² = 0 is highly improbable. Effect sizes (eta-squared) approaching zero are rare in practice; this warrants careful recalculation and verification by the authors. Overall Assessment: The study presents substantial work, but the manuscript requires refinement in presentation and methodological clarity. Reviewer #2: Summary of the Study This study investigates the influence of physical exercise (PE) on emotional management ability (EMA) in college students. It explores the mediating roles of exercise adherence (EA) and psychological resilience (PR) in this relationship. Data was collected from 11,388 college students using stratified, cluster, and multi-stage sampling methods. The study uses the Wenjuanxing platform to gather data on PE, EA, PR, and EMA. Overall Quality Assessment Strengths: a) Large Sample Size: The study benefits from a large sample size (n=11,388), enhancing the statistical power and generalizability of the findings. b) Comprehensive Analysis: The study employs appropriate statistical techniques, including correlation and regression analyses, to examine the relationships between variables. Weaknesses: a) Reliance on Self-Reported Data: The study relies on self-reported measures, which may be subject to recall bias and social desirability effects. b) Cross-Sectional Design: The cross-sectional design limits the ability to draw causal inferences. c) Limited Generalizability: The sample is limited to college students in specific regions of China, which may affect the generalizability of the findings to other populations. d) Negative Direct Effect: The finding that physical exercise has negative direct effect on EMA seems counterintuitive and requires more in-depth explanation. Specific Suggestions for Improvement 1) Address the Negative Direct Effect: The manuscript reports a negative direct effect of PE on EMA in the regression analysis, which contradicts the positive correlation found in the correlation analysis. Clarify this discrepancy by: - Discussing potential suppressor variables or confounding factors that might explain this effect. - Conducting additional analyses to explore potential interactions between PE, EA, PR, and other relevant variables. 2) Strengthen the Discussion Section: - Elaborate on the practical implications of the findings for college students and higher education institutions. - Provide specific recommendations for interventions to promote physical exercise, enhance exercise adherence, and improve psychological resilience among college students. - Address the limitations of the study more thoroughly and suggest avenues for future research. 3) Provide More Detail on Measures: - Include more information about the validity and reliability of the scales used in the study. 4) Consider Alternative Analytical Approaches: - Explore the use of structural equation modeling (SEM) to examine the relationships between PE, EA, PR, and EMA more comprehensively. 5) Ensure Clarity and Consistency: - Review the manuscript carefully to ensure clarity and consistency in terminology, formatting, and reporting of statistical results. 6) Figures and Tables: - Consider including the path diagram (Figure 2) and key tables (e.g., Tables 5 and 7) directly in the main text rather than as separate files. - Ensure that all tables and figures are properly labeled and referenced in the text. Recommendations Based on my assessment, the manuscript has the potential to be published in Plos One journal, but it requires some major revisions to address the identified weaknesses and improve its overall quality. I recommend that the authors carefully consider the suggestions provided and revise the manuscript accordingly. Besides, I recommend sending this manuscript for English proofreading. Additional Suggestions 1) Theoretical Framework: While the study mentions social cognitive theory, expanding on this or integrating other relevant theories (e.g., self-determination theory) could provide a richer context for the findings. 2) Cultural Context: Provide more context on the cultural factors in Chinese universities that might influence the relationship between physical exercise and mental health. Thank you. Reviewer #3: 1.The introduction could benefit from a more in-depth exploration of the background surrounding college students' emotional management ability, ideally supported by concrete data or case studies for greater impact. 2. When it comes to the mechanisms linking physical exercise to emotional management ability, the literature review feels underdeveloped. A more thorough examination with clearer connections would strengthen the foundation of this research 3. The theoretical foundation's coverage of psychological resilience is somewhat superficial. A deeper investigation into its role concerning emotional management ability would add significant value. 4. The data collection section requires expansion on aspects like the questionnaire's distribution scope and recovery rate. Details on how the sample's representativeness and data reliability were ensured are also necessary. 5. The results presentation section's tables and charts lack the desired clarity and intuitiveness. The disorganized arrangement of correlation coefficients hinders readers' ability to access key information with ease. 6. The research conclusion section doesn't provide an in-depth analysis of the mechanisms through which physical exercise influences emotional management ability via exercise adherence and psychological resilience. The conclusions drawn appear rather general and could benefit from greater specificity. Reviewer #4: I would like to thank for the opportunity to review this manuscript. Please see the following comments to consider to further increase the quality of this manuscript. Strengths: 1.The sample size is sufficient, enhancing the generalizability of the research findings. 2.The mediation analysis provides meaningful insights, highlighting Exercise Adherence and Psychological Resilience as influential psychological factors affecting Emotional Management Ability. Areas for improvement: 3.Please confirm whether the research data can be publicly used? If there are restrictions, please explain the reasons. 4.Generally, when a proper noun is mentioned for the first time, its concept should be defined, and its abbreviation should be stated, such as physical activity (PA). 5.The relationship between emotional management ability and personality traits, cognitive styles, and social support should be clearly elaborated. 6.The relationship among the four variables is not clearly expressed. 7.The tables should be expressed more clearly, such as by adding percentages (%). Descriptive statistics tables should be as clear and simple as possible, and should include m (sd), kurtosis, skewness, and p-values. 8.Please recheck the consistency between the table content and the descriptive content, and standardize the table format according to the journal requirements. 9.Check if there are any typographical errors in the description of the direct effect 95% CI between the independent and dependent variables in Table 7. 10.The role of Exercise Adherence and Psychological Resilience as chain mediators in the relationship between Physical Exercise and Emotional Management Ability should be elaborated further in the discussion section. 11.In the limitations section, it should be mentioned that future research could include further exploration of the remaining variables, such as the potential influence of exercise self-efficacy and exercise motivation, which were reflected in this study. ********** what does this mean? ). 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The Influence of Physical Exercise on Emotional Management Ability in College Students: A Serial Mediation Model of Exercise Adherence and Psychological Resilience PONE-D-25-33803R1 Dear Dr. Han, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Muhammad Salman Bashir, M.S.C Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewer #1: Reviewer #2: Reviewer #3: Reviewer #4: Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #4: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: I believe the author has answered my doubts. I also think this is a very interesting study and the data is very comprehensive. Reviewer #2: I propose accepting the manuscript because the authors had adequetely addressed all the comments as suggested. I am satisfied with the address. Reviewer #3: I agree to accept the publication of this paper.Although I still have doubts about the sampling method of this paper, it does not affect the fact that this is a very great paper. Reviewer #4: (No Response) ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: No ********** |
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