Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJune 16, 2025 |
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Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** Reviewer #1: Dear Authors, This is a very interesting finding and you presented it beautifully. However I do have some concerns: 1. Your sample size is not very big to represent the total population of Proto-Malay Orang Asli and thus perhaps proportion is a better choice of word than prevalence in this case. Also, why sampling PMOA residing in Selangor, Negeri Sembilan and that of east Pahang only? Are these the regions where PMOA mostly reside? 2. Your concordance rate between Hybribio and NGS to be pretty high but it seems to be high only for Malaysians. I wonder whether the mutations covered in Hybribio also can detect G6PD variants common in the Chinese and Indian populations in Malaysia? 3. I see that you are still using the old WHO enzyme classification. There is already a new WHO G6PD enzyme classification : chrome-extension://efaidnbmnnnibpcajpcglclefindmkaj/https://cdn.who.int/media/docs/default-source/malaria/mpac-documentation/mpag-mar2022-session2-technical-consultation-g6pd-classification.pdf. Please do use this. 4. I see that the authors are using prevalence (proportion) for those <80% AMM as deficient. Why did you do this?Normally one used <30% as deficient and the shift drives the proportion to be higher. Lines s393-395, did the comparison with the Senoi's Orang Asli group use the same cut off ie. <80% AMM? Reviewer #2: Manuscript: G6PD Deficiency in Malaysia’s Proto-Malay Orang Asli Indigenous Population: A Molecular and Epidemiological Study The abstract is overly long and lacks clear structure, making it difficult to follow. Please consider shortening the content and organizing it more effectively. The introduction is also lengthy and lacks a clear focus. Although the authors mention that the Proto-Malay Orang Asli are the second largest indigenous group in Peninsular Malaysia with a high malaria prevalence, the supporting data cited is outdated (from 2009). Furthermore, it was mentioned that P. falciparum is the predominant malaria species, but did not clearly justify why this specific population was chosen for study. The rationale for focusing on this group should be explicitly stated. Additionally, the authors should clarify the current antimalarial treatment regimen used in Malaysia, particularly whether 8-aminoquinolines (which are relevant to G6PD deficiency) are routinely prescribed. If not, the link between G6PD deficiency and clinical relevance in this population may be weak. Strengthening the rationale and ensuring it aligns with current epidemiological and treatment practices would improve the clarity and relevance of the introduction. The manuscript would greatly benefit from a clear diagram summarizing the study design. While a total of 258 individuals were included, several essential details are missing or unclear. Specifically, the authors should indicate: • The number of males and females included, • How many individuals were subjected to enzyme activity testing, • How many were excluded following family-based analysis, • How many were tested using the Hybribio assay, and • How many underwent next-generation sequencing (NGS). It is also important to clarify the criteria used to select samples for Hybribio testing and NGS. On what basis were these subsets chosen? Given the relatively small total sample size (n=258), and the fact that fewer than half underwent genetic testing, the strength of the conclusions drawn from these data is limited. It is recommended all samples should undergo genetic testing. If this is not feasible for both Hybribio and NGS platforms, at minimum, comprehensive genotyping via the simpler and more cost-effective Hybribio method should be conducted to ensure broader coverage. Additionally, the use of only phenotypic enzyme activity tests can significantly underestimate the number of heterozygous females, as many may present with intermediate or even normal activity levels. This limitation should be clearly acknowledged, and its potential impact on data interpretation discussed. The manuscript should address whether a sample size of 258 is statistically sufficient, especially considering only 73 samples were subjected to the Hybribio test and 39 to NGS. This limited genetic testing may reduce the reliability of the allele frequency estimates and the associations drawn. Were any males with normal G6PD activity found to carry missense, synonymous (e.g., C1311T), or intronic mutations (e.g., T93C)? If so, these individuals should be excluded from the adjusted male median (AMM) activity calculations, as they were not wild type. The prevalence of G6PD deficiency should be calculated using the standard threshold of 30% enzyme activity, not 80%, as the latter significantly overestimates the number of deficient individuals. Activity levels between 30–80% is classified as intermediate, and this classification should be applied consistently throughout the manuscript. Lines 189–194, it is unclear how the variants are ordered. If they are ranked by frequency, this should be stated explicitly. Otherwise, ordering them by nucleotide position would improve clarity. Figure 1 is difficult to interpret due to the insufficiently detailed figure legend. The caption should explain clearly how the genotyping results are presented and interpreted. The variant rs782038151 appears unidentifiable in public databases. Please verify and correct this identifier or clarify its origin and validation. Detailed genetic data from both Hybribio testing and NGS should be included in supplementary tables. The current presentation in the main text is difficult to follow. A consolidated table presenting all detected mutations and their corresponding allele frequencies would improve clarity. Additionally, variants in intronic and untranslated regions should be included. The discussion is overly lengthy and should be more focused. In particular, the authors should elaborate on the implications of their findings for malaria treatment strategies, especially in the context of G6PD screening prior to the administration of 8-aminoquinolines (e.g., primaquine). The potential for implementing G6PD newborn screening in Malaysia and how this study contributes to that goal should also be discussed in greater detail. Please note that the G6PD Viangchan variant should be correctly referred to as 871G>A—this should be corrected wherever it appears in the manuscript. It should be clearly stated whether the G6PD Viangchan variant (871G>A) was detected in conjunction with the C1311T synonymous mutation and the T93C intronic variant. These variants are often co-inherited as part of specific haplotypes, and their co-occurrence has important implications for genotype interpretation, especially in populations with high linkage disequilibrium. Additionally, the manuscript should be carefully revised for scientific writing. 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G6PD Deficiency in Malaysia’s Proto-Malay Orang Asli Indigenous Population: A Molecular and Epidemiological Study PONE-D-25-30027R1 Dear Dr. Raja Sabudin, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Germana Bancone, Ph.D Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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