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PONE-D-25-23254EGCN: Entropy-based Graph Convolutional Network for Anomalous Pattern Detection and Forecasting in Real Estate MarketsPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Le, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 26 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: [1] The current model integrates GCN, KDE, JSD, clustering and multiple predictors, but it is recommended that the author highlight in the method section which are the original contributions of this work and which are the combination of existing methods to enhance the recognition of innovation. [2] Although the author uses KDE and JSD to measure temporal entropy, the paper does not compare with other entropy measurements (such as Shannon entropy or Renyi entropy). It is recommended to add motivation or conduct ablation experiments. [3] The anomaly recognition threshold on page 15 uses the form of μ+kσ, but the sensitivity to changes in k value is not explained. It is recommended to add an analysis of the impact of different k values on anomaly recognition and subsequent prediction accuracy. [4] It is recommended to explain in detail how to integrate Haversine distance and temporal correlation, whether to weighted average or construct multiple edges? This has a direct impact on the graph structure learning results. [5] Although it is mentioned that nodes are clustered into "normal" and "abnormal" categories, it is not specified whether the clustering algorithm is K-means, Spectral Clustering or GMM, etc. It is recommended to clarify the method and analyze its robustness. [6] Although the data is divided into before and after COVID, it does not explain whether there is data leakage or overlap, especially whether the edge construction involves information during the test period, which needs to be explained. [7] It is recommended to add whether data such as social media and real estate forums are included, why only the RoBERTa model is chosen for extraction, and whether industry models such as FinBERT or SenticNet are considered. [8] The abnormal areas detected in Australia, the United Kingdom, and the United States should be verified by experts in more specific cities/time periods, and actual market events should be added to support them. [9] It is recommended to explain the processing strategies for missing, abnormal points, and scale differences in time series data in the data preprocessing section to enhance reproducibility. [10] If the number of abnormal areas is far less than the normal area, there is a class imbalance problem. Whether resampling, weighted loss or other countermeasures are performed should be explained. [11] Currently, only the number of detections is reported, and there is a lack of indicators such as Precision, Recall, and F1-score to evaluate the accuracy of anomaly detection. It is recommended to add. [12] Currently, only point estimates such as MSE, MAE, and MASE are listed, lacking statistical significance verification. It is recommended to add confidence intervals or p-values to prove the effectiveness of the improvement. [13] It is recommended to disassemble the EGCN module and compare the versions such as "no emotional input", "no JSD", and "no clustering" to verify the contribution of each part to the final effect. [14] It is recommended to use the data of some countries as training sets and other countries as test sets for cross-validation to demonstrate the transfer and generalization ability of the model. [15] The abnormal areas detected in the figures on pages 19-21, it is recommended to use heat maps or highlight colors to mark abnormally dense areas to enhance the explanatory power of geographical distribution. [16] It is recommended to retain the most critical prediction improvement indicators and avoid listing the error reduction figures for all countries and all time periods to improve reading fluency. [17] There are many repeated sentences and the language can be further condensed. For example, "EGCN consistently outperforms..." appears frequently in the whole text. It is recommended to adjust the expression diversity. [18] Some paragraphs lack connecting sentences. For example, it is recommended to insert transition logic between "graph construction" and "GCN architecture" to enhance the coherence of the content. [19] In the whole text, whether "anomaly-aware forecasting" and "cluster-specific forecasting" refer to the same concept, the wording should be unified and clearly defined. [20] If some years are not enclosed in brackets and the order of some citations is inconsistent with the main text, it is recommended to check the format of the whole text. Reviewer #2: 1. Major Comments a. Unit of Anomaly Detection There is some ambiguity regarding whether anomalies are identified at the location level (e.g., city or suburb) or at the location–time level (e.g., city-month). The model appears to detect spatial anomalies using time-aggregated features like entropy, but it is unclear whether it can distinguish persistent vs. transient anomalies. This distinction is important for interpretation, particularly if anomalies are episodic (e.g., brief demand surges) rather than structural. Please clarify whether time-specific anomaly flags are possible, and how temporal variability is captured post-clustering. b. 2008 Financial Crisis The authors train the model using data from 2003 to 2019 and test on 2020 to 2024, citing COVID-19 as a representative stress test. However, this approach overlooks the 2007–2009 global financial crisis, a major event that severely disrupted real estate markets in many countries. It would strengthen the empirical analysis to (i) explicitly test the model’s performance during the 2008 period or (ii) justify its exclusion. Including this episode could provide insight into whether EGCN can generalize across different types of systemic shocks—credit-driven versus pandemic-driven. c. Static Evaluation Strategy Using a single, static train-test split limits the generalizability of the results. Time-series models, particularly in dynamic markets, are more realistically evaluated using rolling or expanding-window validation schemes. For example: train on 2003–2012, test on 2013–2015; then expand the training set to 2015 and test on 2016–2018, etc. This would provide a more robust assessment of performance across different economic conditions and minimize the risk of results being driven by a particular test window. d. K-fold Cross-Validation Consider alternative validation strategies like blocked or forward-chaining k-fold validation (e.g., using temporally contiguous folds) to assess the stability of the anomaly detection and forecasting pipeline over time. For example, the data from 2003–2024 could be partitioned into five non-overlapping temporal blocks. For each fold, the model is trained on blocks 1 to k−1 and tested on block k. This would reveal whether EGCN generalizes well across distinct time periods without relying on a single post-COVID test window. e. Permutation or Placebo Testing To ensure that the anomalies identified are meaningful and not artifacts of reconstruction error sensitivity, the authors could conduct a placebo test by permuting node labels or shuffling temporal sequences. EGCN could then be run on this randomized data. If the model identifies a similar number of “anomalies” or achieves comparable forecasting gains, it would suggest overfitting or limited signal. A significant drop in performance under the placebo would support the validity of the detected anomalies. 2. Minor Comments a. Anomaly Thresholding The paper uses a threshold of the form: Threshold = mean + k × standard deviation (Eq. 7). However, how k is selected is not explained. Is this a fixed constant, chosen via cross-validation, or calibrated to a desired false-positive rate? Given that this thresholding directly determines which regions are flagged as anomalous, a clearer explanation is critical for replicability and robustness. b. Zillow Data The U.S. dataset is sourced from Zillow, but Zillow’s coverage and data quality have changed significantly over time, especially before 2007 when the platform had limited footprint in many regions. The paper should clarify whether early-period data are reliable, imputed, or incomplete, and how this may affect training consistency across the 2003–2019 period. c. Total vs. incremental Anomaly Counts Figures 2–4 show total anomalies detected by each model, but do not analyze whether EGCN detects new and meaningful anomalies or simply more of the same. Do the detected anomalies overlap across models? Are the additional anomalies unique to EGCN and validated against external events or expert knowledge? Without this, a higher anomaly count might reflect greater sensitivity but not necessarily greater accuracy or utility. d. Missing Scotland in UK Analysis Figure 3 (UK anomaly map) appears to exclude Scotland, which has its own legal and housing systems. Was this due to data availability? If excluded, this should be noted and justified explicitly. e. Missing Alaska and Hawaii in U.S. Analysis Figure 4 does not include Alaska and Hawaii, which is a common map simplification but should still be acknowledged. These states have unique housing dynamics (e.g., tourism, isolation, military presence) that could generate distinct anomalies. The authors should state whether these states were excluded due to data limitations or visualization choices. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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PONE-D-25-23254R1EGCN: Entropy-based Graph Convolutional Network for Anomalous Pattern Detection and Forecasting in Real Estate MarketsPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Le, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 27 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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