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| Original SubmissionFebruary 28, 2025 |
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PONE-D-25-10160 Evaluating continuous nanosecond pulsed electric field (nsPEF) treatment as a non-thermal alternative for human milk pasteurisation PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Bansal, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 11 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors provide a study on nsPEF treatment of human donor milk aiming upon microbial inactivation to enhance product safety. The paper is well written and of high scientific as well as societal interest. ns is a promising technique. I would recommend to add further literature on use of PEF and nsPEF in liquid food treatment, in particular dairy or other protein rich products such as liquid egg or blood. A. Shivani Indumathi, G. Sujatha, V. Appa Rao, Rita Narayanan, C.N. Kamalarathnam, V. Perasiriyan A. and Serma Saravana Pandian (2022). Effect of Pulsed Electric Field on Physicochemical Parameters and Nutrient Content of Mother’s Milk. Biological Forum– An International Journal, 14(2a): 572-575 S, S., G, S., Narayanan, R., & V, P. (2022). STORAGE STUDIES ON PULSED ELECTRIC FIELD PROCESSED MOTHER’S MILK. Indian Journal of Veterinary and Animal Sciences Research, 50(5), 76-80. nsPEF is claimed to require less energy / cause less product damage than PEF. That statement needs further justication, in particular as the energy input levels reported in the study are very high. With energy input levels of 500 to 600 kJ/l commercial scalability is questionable, and also significant heating is to be expected. Even if under the conditions used in the lab trials (small treatment volume / large electrode area / long treatment time / time to cool down) the peak temperatures were low, when scaling up time behavior will be different and more heating occur. Those effects, potential limitations or ways to handle should be discussed. How much cool-down do you expect during the transport from the treatment chamber to the reservoir? Which temperature peaks are expected during the treatment, can you calculate those using the residence time in the chamber and the energy input? It is mentioned that nsPEF leads to less corrosion. Has any corrosion been observed using 316 stainless steel electrodes, and would you expect undesired effects on HM composition? The conclusion state that molk fat gobules might have a protective effect. Such effects have been described by field modelling, e.g. in https://doi.org/10.1016/j.cep.2006.07.011 Very high field strength levels have been used. Did you perform a study if those are required or are they more or less a result of available / resulting treatment conditions. Minimum required field levels would be of high interest for equipment design. I would recommend to revise and discuss above points prior to publication. Reviewer #2: In this paper, nanosecond pulsed electric fields (nsPEFs) were tested as an alternative, non thermal technique for the pasteurization of donated human milk. The topic of the paper is potentially interesting, however, the adopted methodologies present major issues that make the paper not recommendable for publication in this reviewer's opinion. Detailed comments are following. Major issues 1) LInes 134-135: "a total of 240,000 pulses (60,000 pulses per step, 5 min 135 resting time between each step) were applied at 50 Hz frequency using a pulsed power generator as the optimised processing condition." Are these pulse numbers consistent with the flow rate and the pulse repetition time? 2) Figure 1 and sectionn 2.3: Please, provide more details regarding the pulse generator. I understand it is a commercial pulse generator, but I think it would be useful to describe the circuit topolgy since it covers quite a large range of pulse durations (from 2 us down to 40 ns). 3) Figure 1 and section 2.3: Details on the geometric characteristics of the cuvette should be provided. I guess it is based on parallel plate electrodes. However, as I understand from the description and by the figure, the exposed medium is flowing through a plastic tube. This implies that pulses were not actually delivered through conductive coupling, but through capactivie coupling instead, which would imply a reduction of the induced electric field with respect to the applied one. 4) Table 1: How were the E-field values assesssed? Is it the voltage-to-distance ratio considering the voltage applied on the electrodes? If so, based on the previous comment, this should be replaced by a more accurate calculation considering that the media were exposed while flowing in a tube, and not in direct contact with the electrodes. 5) Section 2.4 (Pulse waveform and energy measurement): The energy was not measured. It was calculated. Anyway, this parameter was not used in the rest of the paper. 6) Line 172: Please, provide a definition/physical meaning for this "cell constant" 7) Lines 265-267: As I understand, the authors tested saline solutions with different concentrations to identify the one having a conductiviy level similar to that of human milk. If so, this should be better explained at the beginning of section 3.1 What I don't catch is the reason why the different media are exposed to different pulse durations. The different conductivity values affect the current and, hence, the induced electric field, but should not affect the pulse durations, unless I am missing something regarding the pulse generation modality, which gets back to my previous comment regarding clarifications on the pulse generator. 8) Lines 293-298: The statistically significant differences should be included in Table 3. Also, I guess the subscript numbers in the statistics refer to the different experimental conditions, but these have not been defined. 9)LInes 309 - 312: If the manuscript has not been published yet, it should not be cited 10) Figure 2 (Pulse shape) : The bipolar aspect of pulses in the case of MilliQ could be due to the capacitive coupling situation, rather than to the different conductivity. It is strange, however, that the other pulses are not bipolar as well. Moreover, nsPEFs are supposed to be rectangular, which are not in the figure shown here, and also in some conditions they present spurious pulses with peak values that are comparable to the main one. This is another aspect that recalls the pulse generation issue. Please, elaborate on that. 11) Figure 3 (Temperature): I understand that the heating effect under nsPEFs was not as much as that in conventional heating pasteurization techniques. However, tha temperature excursion is not negligible (almost 10 °C). Can this be called a "non-thermal effect"? Could this temperature excursion affect the organoleptic properties of the milk? Please, comment on that. Minor issues 1) Introduction section, line 65. "In the previous study,..." Do you mean "In our previous study"? 2) Lines 133-134. "Based on the previous studies with Milli-Q water (manuscript 134 submitted and yet to be published)..." If the manuscript has not been published yet, then it should not be mentioned. ********** 6. 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