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| Original SubmissionOctober 7, 2024 |
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In your statement, please include the full name of the IRB or ethics committee who approved or waived your study, as well as whether or not you obtained informed written or verbal consent. If consent was waived for your study, please include this information in your statement as well. Additional Editor Comments: See above [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: As the population of those living with dementia increases in size, learning how to effectively support caregivers is worthwhile. In this manuscript, Hodgson et al. explore the value in offering multiple phone consultations to those caregivers of persons living with dementia. The authors collect data on a large sample of caregivers. The main measure of interest is self-efficacy ratings for managing negative feelings (PROMIS T-score): Low scores are associated with accepting more than one consultation, and on average consultations coincide with an improvement in those self-efficacy ratings. Population trends (more people living with dementia) make this a reasonably timely report, and, I imagine, the report is of adequate interest to the readership of PLoS ONE. I have comments that I hope will improve the manuscript, listed in roughly the same order as the manuscript. The possibility of attrition bias deserves the most attention (see #5 and #6). It seems inevitable for this experimental design coupled with the described recruitment method. There are probably artful future-oriented ways to highlight this for the reader (What would next steps be, given the present findings?) (1) Exclusions are (or seem) intuitive, but it would be nice to know how many were excluded, and/or to “operationalized/define “crisis situation” and “frequent repeat caller” a bit more. If this is left to the discretion of the Helpline agent, then none of that information may be available, but a sentence/phrase with that explanation could be added to the manuscript. (2) The first paragraph of the discussion could probably be tightened up a bit: “A score of 40 is 1 standard deviation lower than US general population and score of 60 is 1 SD higher than the US general population.” is redundant with the immediately preceding sentence and could just be removed. The subsequent three sentences, “Callers who requested three calls […]” could be condensed something like this: “Compared to that normative data, out caregivers had below-average emotional self-efficacy, especially when requesting multiple consultations (one: 47.1, two: 44.5, three: 39.4).” (3) “Our first finding indicates that those who later requested additional calls had the lowest levels of self-efficacy in managing emotions at baseline, indicating the highest level of need.” My sense is that “highest level of need” extends beyond that PROMIS can measure. There is more to “need” than emotional self-efficacy, after all. Something like “[…] suggesting an elevated level of need” might better capture the scope of the present work. (4) This paragraph is more of a result than a discussion; the authors should consider moving to another section, or abbreviating or eliminating it, since the information it contains is a retelling of the contents of Table 3: “Five items from the PROMIS Self-Efficacy measure were significant in those who had one or two care consultations. The items “I can handle negative feelings”, “I can find ways to manage stress”, “I can avoid feeling discouraged stress”, and “I can keep emotional distress from interfering with things” were significantly improved (p <0.01) in those who had one care consultation. The item “I can find ways to manage stress” was significantly improved from baseline in those who had two care consultations” (p<0.01).” (5) “This study has several limitations. First […]” The authors name only one limitation before proceeding to the next paragraph (“Despite these limitations […]”). …did the authors intend for the later paragraph (“Practice recommendations cannot […]”) to be a second limitation? Another one would be the loss-to-follow-up of almost half the sample (2503 with initial consultation, 1375 of those engaging with the call two weeks later). Another would be that those engaging with subsequent calls may be a self-selected group of people who find benefit from the consultation calls. (6) “Our second finding suggests that callers benefited from all calls […]” are the authors sure they want to commit to *all*? Every single one? What if some of those 2503 didn’t value the call, and that’s why they were lost to follow-up? Reviewer #2: The authors have taken up a socially important, cognitively original topic that can supplement an important area of ignorance in the field of designing psychoeducational and support activities for families of people with dementia (PLWD). Thus, the research undertaken is part of an important discourse on the needs visible in the healthcare system and ensuring the psychological well-being of caregivers with mental disorders. The manuscript submitted for evaluation provides interesting data that have application value and can be used to design systemic solutions. In my opinion, however, the text requires the introduction of necessary changes that can improve its quality. First of all, I propose expanding the theoretical background. Although there are few comparable studies, it would be worthwhile to outline in a more exhaustive way the difficult and problematic situations that result from the specificity of dementia (PLWD) in the introduction. It would be good to capture the specificity of the functioning of patients and the difficulties experienced by their families. It seems important to me to outline, at least in the theoretical layer, other possible predictors of the effectiveness of using the offered telephone help - those that could be attempted to be identified in future studies. I believe that qualitative data, consisting of statements from people using the indicated help, would also contribute a lot. They could better illustrate the problem. The methodological part requires some additions. The selection of the sample and presentation of the results do not raise any objections. It seems to me that the PROMIS Self-Efficacy inManaging Emotions Short Form 8A research tool has been described quite poorly and in this form it is difficult to draw conclusions about its reliability. The authors have correctly identified the limitations of the research. However, I think that the discussion of the results is worth expanding (after previously expanding the theoretical part). ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Dear Dr. Hodgson, --> -->-->Authors have addressed reviewer's concerns. -->-->#However, this work was published as an abstract in December 2023 https://alz-journals.onlinelibrary.wiley.com/doi/epdf/10.1002/alz.082552 that needs to be duly acknowledged and cited as feasible. Even though it was your own work and presented in part- missed that important piece may be misconstrued as omission. File is attached for your reference. -->--> -->-->#Also, in the abstract 2504 participants were included that is 2503 in this manuscript- any reason for this discrepancy?-->--> -->-->#Abstract can include more information in methods section (some mention of statistical analyses or anything relevant in methodology) and results (Additional relevant information). ?> Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 03 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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Beyond Single Support Calls: Efficacy of Follow-Up Callbacks for Dementia Caregivers Using the Alzheimer's Association Helpline PONE-D-24-41264R2 Dear Dr. Hodgson, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Vineet Gupta, MD, FACP, SFHM Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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