Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionApril 15, 2025 |
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PONE-D-25-18495Perspectives of teachers of students with intellectual disabilities on the role of educational policies and systems in using universal design for learning: A qualitative studyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Alfawzan, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. 1. "Table 3. Summary of the allocation of subthemes to main themes and the percentage of participants who discussed each subtheme" Where is percentage? 2. Define your themes, particularly what they represent. This will help the reader see whether the subthemes and quotations lie within this representation or not. For example, what ideas are to be cosidered as "Attitude toward UDL"? 3. In your thematization, Atitude may suggest teachers disposition or inclination to use or resist UDL. In here expected subthemes could be Positive attitude and interest towards using the method or resistance or appreaciation, and may be conceptualization. However, effect of using UDL principles should come under a diffeerent theme. Besides, you are not interested in evaluating the effects of the method, rather teachers perspectives. I suggest this section needs to be revisited. 4. the thmes and subthemes are few and question the holistic understanding of teachers perspectives who implement UDL. for example, did they not say anything about how the principle could be adapted to your context? 5. The discussion section begins with effect of adopting UDL principles. If this need be emerge as a theme, it has to come at the end. this needs re-strcturing the "findings" section and discussion section correspondingly. 6. Writing: "Challenging in the use of UDL" line 445. is it to mean Challenges? 7. You examinied perspectives of teachers in adopting UDL framework. I wish there could be a theretical and practical implication of the findings. By theoretical implication, you may highlight any contribution to the theory or framework. similarly, with practical implication, you may highlight how it can be successfully implemented and ensure quality of learning.8. Please adress reasonable comments of the reviewers. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 08 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: N/A ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: 1. UDL research development Please note that UDL research has significantly evolved since 2020. Earlier sources, although valid, should not be presented as representative of the current theoretical framework. 2. Inclusive cultures When discussing practices and policies, it would be appropriate to also mention inclusive cultures, referring to the three dimensions promoted by the Index for Inclusion (Booth & Ainscow, 2002). 3. Use of first person To maintain an academic writing style, it is recommended to avoid first-person formulations (e.g., in the “Methodological Approach” section). 4. Participant selection criteria On what basis (besides gender) were participants selected? What does “relevant information” (line 180) mean in this context? The selection process, as formulated, may introduce a potential bias. 5. Generalization of accommodations It would be helpful to make more explicit the principle of generalising special attention to all students in the class, not just those with ID: "what is essential for some becomes useful for all". 6. Article structure Some references or sections currently found in the “Discussion” would be more appropriately placed in the “Introduction.” Reviewer #2: Dear author, Thank you for the opportunity to review your manuscript. I believe this was an important topic for you to research. Here is my feedback: - Page 7, under methodological approach, you say "I conducted..." but then on page 8, you move to describing yourself as "the researcher" at lines 179 and 194. I would stay consistent - and I personally much prefer first person instead of "the researcher...." - Page 9, line 206, you say "we interviewed..." Who is the we? Previously you were saying "I" so I got confused here. - Table 3, page 11 - check your numbering. It looked inaccurate to me - Page 13, UDL Concept - can you expand on their knowledge of UDL? You really only have one paragraph, and then a lengthy quote. That doesn't really help me understand their knowledge of UDL at all. - Page 15, line 317, and throughout until the end - you use the word "confirm" a lot. Qualitative research doesn't seek to "confirm" anything. I would find a different word to use throughout. - Page 16, what is the difference between supervision and administration? - Page 16, "...which affected many aspects adversely" - explain this more in depth. - Page 17, How doe the two lengthy quotations relate to UDL? I don't see the relationship there at all. - Page 17, "The results indicated the positive effect..." In what way do the results indicate this? Be more clear - Page 18, Funding programs...What is the relation in this paragraph between budget and UDL? This was unclear to me. - Page 19, Quotation at the top of the page - how does this relate to UDL? Make a connection between budget and UDL. - Pages 20-22, watch for use of the word "confirm" - Page 22 - This might be personal preference, but I prefer "findings" instead of "results" for qualitative research ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy . Reviewer #1: Yes: Laura Rusconi Reviewer #2: Yes: Laura K. Anderson ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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Perspectives of teachers of students with intellectual disabilities on the role of educational policies and systems in using universal design for learning: A qualitative study PONE-D-25-18495R1 Dear Dr. Sarah K. Alfawzan, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. 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Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: N/A ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I have no additional comments to report. The author has revised the manuscript according to the suggestions and in line with the contextual circumstances in which the research is being conducted. Reviewer #2: Thank you for addressing my recommendations! I appreciate the work you put in to making the changes I suggested. I do not have further comments at this time ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy . Reviewer #1: Yes: Laura Rusconi Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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