Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJune 13, 2025 |
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Construction of an Automated Machine Learning-Based Predictive Model for Postoperative Pulmonary Complications Risk in Non-Small Cell Lung Cancer Patients Undergoing Thoracoscopic Surgery PLOS ONE Dear Dr. sun, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The reviewers have provided highly constructive feedback on your manuscript. Key points include the need for clarification regarding the feature selection process, a more detailed explanation of the machine learning models employed, and improvements to figure legends to enhance their clarity and self-explanatory nature. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 01 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: It was a great pleasure to review the manuscript titled “Construction of an Automated Machine Learning-Based Predictive Model for Postoperative Pulmonary Complications Risk in Non-small Cell Lung Cancer Patients Undergoing Thoracoscopic Surgery” by Xie Qiu et al. In this study, the authors proposed a predictive model for postoperative pulmonary complications (PPCs) using automated machine learning (AutoML), and they further developed a platform to facilitate clinical application of the model. The study addresses an important clinical need, and the methodology is clearly described with appropriate figures and statistical analyses. However, there are several points that require clarification or improvement before the manuscript can be considered for publication. Concerns: #1. Regarding the occurrence of postoperative pulmonary complications (line 105-106, line 138-140): The authors included pneumonia, pleural effusion, atelectasis, pneumothorax, and persistent air leak as components of postoperative pulmonary complications (PPC). However, the severity of these complications is not clearly defined. For instance, it is unclear how long the air leak persisted or whether invasive therapeutic interventions were required for its management. The Clavien-Dindo classification is widely accepted for grading the severity of postoperative complications, with Grade 3 or higher indicating the need for invasive procedures, such as reoperation, CVC placement, and drainage tube insertion. Clarifying the severity of PPCs using standardized classification system would enhance the clinical relevance of the findings, particularly since mild complications (e.g., Clavien-Dindo Grade 1 or less) may not have significant clinical implications. #2. Regarding the Baseline Characteristics of training and testing cohorts (line 143): The authors provided a comprehensive set of baseline characteristics; however, operative time was not included in the analysis. Recent studies have demonstrated that the prolonged operative time is associated with postoperative complications following lung surgery (Paolo de Angelis et al., Ann Surg. 2023 December 01, 278(6): e1259-e1266). Given this evidence, the inclusion of operative time as a variable in the predictive model may enhance its accuracy and clinical relevance. #3. In general, the topic is relevant to clinicians, who are not familiar with highly specialized methods such as BLSO and the enhancement methods used. A brief explanation may assist these readers. #4. Regarding study design (line 109-110): What is the final model that autoML has selected, how were the features selected, what kind of hyper-parameters were used? If this is not relevant to your methodology using ISBLO, please state the reason. #5. Can you explain how autoML with IBSLO contributed to ‘Robustness against data heterogeneity’? Did it also contribute to minimum overfitting despite the small sample size? #6. Please clarify that feature selection and cross-validation were done after train-test splitting. Minor Points: #1. The legend of blue bar should be changed from BSLO to IBSLO in Figure 2. Reviewer #2: Sun et al. implemented an integrative predictive framework that utilizes machine learning and clinical parameters to predict postoperative pulmonary complications in patients with non-small cell lung cancer. Overall, the manuscript addresses a significant research gap in assessing the predictive model for postoperative complications among patients with NSCLC by leveraging AutoML. However, there are several areas where the manuscript can be improved. I have suggested improvements to enhance the clarity of the reporting results and format. 1. In abstract, the abbreviation of IBSLO should be revised. 2. The section on Results in the abstract should include the necessary details. For example, authors described “The improved algorithm significantly outperformed other algorithms on 12 standard test functions.” Here, what are the improved algorithm and other algorithms? Authors should clearly specify the methods mentioned. 3. Although authors mentioned the disadvantages of conventional machine learning algorithms, can the authors make comparisons between AutoML and those conventional machine learning algorithms (for example, random forest and support vector machines with similar tuning parameters)? 4. Some technical terms may be unfamiliar to broad readers who lack a scientific understanding of machine learning methods. For example, what are the 12 CEC2022 test functions? 5. For independent t-tests, have the authors assessed the assumptions of the t-test? 6. In the section “3.2 Algorithm Enhancement Performance”, how have the authors set up the 30 independent runs? The details need to be updated throughout the manuscript. 7. The figures need to be revised with high-resolution ones. The figures are hard to read. 8. Authors should provide descriptions for each label in Figure 1. Additionally, the label on the x-axis should be presented consistently, using either a horizontal format or a 45-degree rotation. 9. I was unable to find the details of the results linked to the figures. 10. While the authors mentioned developing an intuitive risk prediction system in the manuscript, I could not find the link to the platform of the PPCs risk assessments (described in Figure 7) Reviewer #3: Authors constructed an automated machine learning-based predictive model for postoperative pulmonary complication risk among non-small cell lung cancer patients who underwent thoracoscopic surgery. Leveraging automated machine learning in selecting significant features is interesting. However, there are several places where the manuscript can improve. I have suggested improvements to enhance the clarity of the reporting: 1. In the Abstract, authors reported “The AutoML model identified 5 important features: Preoperative leukocyte count; body mass index (BMI); Surgical approach; Age; Intraoperative blood loss; C-reactive protein (CRP).” The authors listed six features. Is it a typo? 2. How did you select six features? Have you used a fixed threshold based on the mean of SHAP or others for selecting features? 3. Please describe the details of F1–F12 in Figure 1. 4. Did you use all variables in Table 1 for comparing the performance of IBSLO, BSLO, ALO, HHO, and WOA for Figures 1 and 2? Also, did you include all variables of Table 1 in the training and validation models? 5. Please use the same scales on the y-axis on (A) and (B) of Figure 6 for comparison. 6. How did you get 91.4% in Figure 7? Do you have any formulas for this calculation? 7. Do you have any suggested percentages for close monitoring? 8. Where are the results related to “the dynamic opposition-based learning strategy significantly improved local optimum avoidance rates”? 9. Where are the results related to “particularly their superior capability in capturing nonlinear associations between features such as surgical approach and intraoperative blood loss compared to traditional logistic regression”? 10. SHAP interpretability analysis elucidated complex interaction patterns between key predictors and postoperative pulmonary complications (PPCs). Where are the results for the Analyzing feature interactions? 11. Did you find a U-shaped association in your data? ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: Yes: Atsushi Ito Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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