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| Original SubmissionJune 24, 2025 |
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PONE-D-25-33941Adaptive and Migration-enhanced Tree Seed Algorithm for Multi-Threshold CT Image Segmentation and Lung Cancer RecognitionPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Li, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please address each comment raised by the Reviewers before resubmitting the manuscript. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 28 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Trying to improve such a method like TSA, which is not that good, why not. But the result is a complicated algorithm, with many ad hoc formulae and hard-coded parameters without any sensitivity analysis. Also some comparisons are not fair. The paper is far too long. It could be (and IMO should be) more concise, at least by removing redundancies and useless comparisons. Also not all figures are really needed. You could select just a few representative ones. You should clearly point out in which way this paper is _significantly_ different from the other TSA variants ([26], [34], ...) by partly the same authors and what is really new in it. Last but not least you write "The source code for the AMTSA algorithm is publicly available at www.jianhuajiang.com" but I did'nt find it (only codes of some other TSA variants) so I have not been able to reproduce your experiments and to perform more comparisons. ----------------------------- line 20 "the No Free Lunch Theorem states that no optimization algorithm can perform optimally in all contexts [14]." [14] is Panos M Pardalos, Varvara Rasskazova, Michael N Vrahatis, et al. Black box optimization, machine learning, and no-free lunch theorems. Springer, 2021. It would better to cite the original paper Wolpert, David H., and William G. Macready. 1997. “No Free Lunch Theorems for Optimization.” IEEE Transactions on Evolutionary Computation 1 (1): 67–82. I don't have [14] at hand, but if this paper really claims what you say, this is too vague. A more correct claim is that the NFLT states that all algorithms are equivalent (in average) when considering all possible functions on a given search space to a given value space (i.e. a set of functions closed under permutations). In practice a benchmark is never c.u.p. so there may exist a best algorithm. line 48... Motivations and Contribution are partly redundant. You should be more concise, at least by removing from Motivations sentences like "By redesigning the seed generation process,..." which are in fact contributions. line 83 and many other (203, 223, 276 ...) "as its randomness hinders the balance between exploration and exploitation" Please, rigorously define what exploration and exploitation are (I mean say how you _measure_ them). And what a "good balance" is (fifty/fifty?) And then prove, at least experimentally, that this two measures can indeed be balanced thanks to your approach. As you define a diversity measure (lines 413...) you could (should) do that on more multimodal test functions than just F8 (p. 19, fig. 10, 12)) line 260 (formula 16) Why 10? Sensitivity analysis? lambda: sensitivity analysis? line 299 (formulae 18,19) Several hardcoded parameters like 0.2 etc. Sensitivity analysis? And why (1.2-0.2) and not just 1? lines 340-354 Redundant. line 533... Comparative Experiment 1: AMTSA versus EST-TSA, MTSA, TSA, STSA, fb-TSA Not very useful. As TSA is anyway not a good algorithm challenging it is easy, and you could/should compare to just the best ones of these variants. And I wonder why you don't compare to ATSA [26] or KATSA [34] which have partly the same authors. Are they in fact not as good as claimed? line 569... "Several classical heuristic optimization algorithms (GA [56], BA [57], GWO [41]) as well as some novel algorithms (DE [52, 53], JADE [55] and LSHADE [54]) are selected for comparative analysis" As you use the CEC 2014 benchmark you have to compare at least to the two or three first winners of this competition. Not only L-SHADE (but with the right population size, which is decreasing), but also GaAPPADE and maybe MVMO-SH. I also suggest CMA-ES. Actually, for L-SHADE and possibly for the other methods, I am not sure you respect the conditions to correctly use the CEC 2014 benchmark, for fair comparison (population size, number of evaluations, parameters). Please carefully check [54], in particular the Algorithm Parameters section and the results in Table I. About GWO you should read Camacho-Villalón, Christian L., Marco Dorigo, and Thomas Stützle. ‘Exposing the Grey Wolf, Moth-Flame, Whale, Firefly, Bat, and Antlion Algorithms: Six Misleading Optimization Techniques Inspired by Bestial Metaphors’. International Transactions in Operational Research, July 2022. https://doi.org/10.1111/itor.13176 And more generally you should consider Sörensen, K. (2015). Metaheuristics—the metaphor exposed. International Transactions in Operational Research, 22(1), 3-18. in which the authors write "several journals such as the Journal of Heuristics (Journal of Heuristics 2015), Swarm Intelligence (Dorigo 2016), and the ACM Transactions on Evolutionary Learning and Optimization (ACM 2021) have already done—and add a statement to the following effect to their submission guidelines: This journal will not publish papers that propose “novel” metaphor-based metaheuristics, unless the authors (i) present their method using the normal, standard optimization terminology; (ii) show that the new method brings useful and novel concepts to the field; (iii) motivate the use of the metaphor on a sound, scientific basis; and (iv) present a fair comparison with other state-of-the-art methods using state-of-the-art practices for benchmarking algorithms. particularly the last three points. line 575 "we conducted 30 rounds of experiments, each containing 200 iterations," The stop criterion must be a maximum number of fitness evaluations (the search effort), not a number of iterations. This is particularly important for algorithms like L-SHADE whose population size is variable during the run. But it seems you use the same population size for all algorithms (and which one?) And using the same population size for different algorithms is usually not a fair practice. Some algorithms are designed to perform well with smaller populations and more iterations, while others benefit from larger populations and fewer iterations, even when the total number of fitness evaluations is held constant. For each method, you should at least use the population size suggested by the author(s) or automatically estimated by the algorithm (sometimes dynamically, i.e. a variable population size). line 748... Table 13 "Although AMTSA does not always perform the best in terms of SSIM, its advantage in PSNR demonstrates its potential to preserve the original image information effectively." A bit optimistic. line 866... Table 14 Although the results seem interesting there is no way to evaluate the fairness of the comparisons. Please specify all parameters values (including population size) and the versions of the other algorithms (references?) Typos ----- weibull => Weibull (several times) Reviewer #2: I have the following comments: - The proposed algorithm should be evaluated using one of the recent CEC benchmark sets, such as CEC 2021 or CEC 2022. - Conduct ablation analysis for your algorithm. - Include empirical runtime comparisons (e.g., AMTSA vs. DE or JADE) to assess practical scalability. - The adverb "where" after an equation should be written with small letters. - It is essential to compare your algorithm experimentally or through discussion with efficient optimization algorithms such as iCSPM, iCSPM2, Exploratory Cuckoo Search, and Improved SSA (ISSA) with HDPM - The lung cancer dataset (300 images) seems small. Clarify if cross-validation was used to mitigate overfitting. - Include visual examples of segmented CT images (e.g., with 4/10/20 thresholds) to qualitatively validate improvements. - The fixed parameter ST=0.1 is used across all TSA variants. Justify why this value is optimal or discuss sensitivity analysis. - What are the advantages and disadvantages of your method over existing methods? - The contributions of the authors should be described well in the conclusion section. - The limitations of the proposed approach should be mentioned in the conclusion section. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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PONE-D-25-33941R1Adaptive and Migration-enhanced Tree Seed Algorithm for Multi-Threshold CT Image Segmentation and Lung Cancer RecognitionPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Li, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please address the concerns of Reviewer 1. In addition, Please post your code online for the reviewers to check it. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 11 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Most of my comments have been addressed and the paper has been seriously improved. Just a few questionable points (see below). As said in my previous review TSA is intrinsically not a good algorithm. This is because the basic idea is weak, contrarily to say DE, ACO, PSO or CMA-ES. Therefore it is indeed easy to improve it thanks to complicated additional mechanisms, which imply to tune more parameters. The presentation of the results is not completely fair. For example it is hard to believe that all convergence curves would be better for AMTSA. ------------------------------- line 554 "Compared to TSA, AMTSA not only converges faster, but also maintains a high population diversity throughout the process." According to Figure 9 not for F1. You have to support this claim (if possible) thanks to more convincing examples, and to explain why this is wrong on some problems. Also you claim "a dynamic balance between global exploration and local exploitation" (line 84). But Figure 11 shows that the exploration/exploitation ratio quickly decreases to zero. So what is your formal definition of a "balance"? Clearly not fifty-fifty! --- Figures 15-17 You present 12 convergence curves on which AMTSA outperforms the other methods. But there are 30 functions in the benchmark. What about the 18 others? If AMTSA is outperformed on some of them you have to say it and to try to explain why. --- Table 10. Result of Wilcoxon’s test for AMTSA and other algorithms. The list of algorithms is not the same as in Tables 5-7. In particular CMA-ES does not appear. Why? --- line 1041 "more effective balance between exploration and exploitation;" As said this claim has to be better supported. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Reviewer #2: No further comments. The paper can be accepted for publication. No further comments. The paper can be accepted for publication. No further comments. The paper can be accepted for publication. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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