Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMarch 24, 2025 |
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PONE-D-25-12070Investigation of Anxiety Levels and Associated Factor Analysis in Breast Cancer Patients Undergoing Chemotherapy with Implanted Venous Access Ports During the Stable Phase of DiseasePLOS ONE Dear Dr. Zhang, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The manuscript addresses a clinically relevant issue concerning anxiety among breast cancer survivors with Implanted Venous Access Ports (IVAPs), and falls within the scope of PLOS ONE. However, major revisions are required before it can be considered for publication. Key issues include a lack of clarity regarding the timeline of ethics approval versus data collection, absence of psychometric validation or internal consistency reporting for the anxiety measure used, and insufficient adjustment for confounding variables in the regression analysis. The authors must also clarify their sampling strategy, handling of missing data, and ensure that all references are complete and correctly formatted. The manuscript requires significant English language editing to improve clarity. Although not essential, I strongly recommend expanding the literature review to include international psycho-oncology guidelines and revising the tables for readability. Both reviewers raised consistent and valid concerns, which the authors should address comprehensively Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 15 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Once you have amended this/these statement(s) in the Methods section of the manuscript, please add the same text to the “Ethics Statement” field of the submission form (via “Edit Submission”). For additional information about PLOS ONE ethical requirements for human subjects research, please refer to http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-human-subjects-research . Additional Editor Comments: Recommended Revisions Literature Review The introduction and discussion would benefit from greater engagement with international literature (e.g., NCCN, ESMO, psycho-oncology guidelines) to situate the findings in a broader global context, particularly for a PLOS ONE readership. Tables and Visual Aids Consider revising the tables for readability—highlight significant results, clarify column headings, and use consistent formatting. Including a participant flow diagram and a figure showing anxiety severity distribution would improve the manuscript’s accessibility. Operational Definitions Brief operational definitions of key subjective terms (e.g., “pulling sensation”) should be included to ensure interpretability across clinical contexts. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: • Sampling technique not well-detailed. Suggestion: Kindly clarify the sampling approach used to recruit the 920 eligible participants. For example, indicate whether a consecutive or convenience sampling strategy was employed. This will help readers evaluate the representativeness of the study population and potential biases. • No discussion of non-responders or missing data. Suggestion: Please include a brief discussion on non-responders or invalid questionnaires. Were there any systematic differences (e.g., demographic or clinical characteristics) between those who responded and those who did not? Even a statement acknowledging the limitation of not assessing this would be helpful. • No psychometric validation of SAS in this specific cohort (e.g., internal consistency): Even though the SAS is a validated tool generally, its reliability can vary across populations, especially when an individual have a life threatening conditions like cancer. Without testing internal consistency in this population, it’s unclear whether the scale is truly measuring anxiety accurately and consistently in these patients. Suggestion: Please consider reporting the internal consistency of the SAS scale in your sample (e.g., Cronbach’s alpha). Although SAS is widely validated, reporting this psychometric property will improve the reliability and generalizability of your anxiety findings in this unique cohort of breast cancer patients post-IVAP chemotherapy. If already available, this can be easily added to the Methods and Results sections. Or this could be mentioned in the limitation. • Improve Reporting of Variable Definitions. Suggestion: It would enhance the clarity and reproducibility of your study if you provide brief operational definitions or criteria used to assess subjective symptoms like “pulling sensation” or “foreign body sensation.” This will help standardize interpretation across different clinical contexts. Reviewer #2: Overall Summary of the Research This study investigates the prevalence and associated factors of anxiety among female breast cancer patients in a stable disease phase who previously received chemotherapy through Implanted Venous Access Ports (IVAPs). Conducted at a single tertiary cancer hospital in China, the study involved 776 patients, using self-administered questionnaires and the Zung Self-Rating Anxiety Scale (SAS). Through univariate and multivariate regression analysis, the study identified several factors significantly associated with anxiety levels, including physical condition, wound dehiscence, sensations related to the IVAP (e.g., pulling or foreign body sensation), use of alternative venous access, and the sequence of surgery and chemotherapy. The manuscript addresses an important yet underexplored dimension of cancer survivorship care. While the research question is relevant and the sample size substantial, the study has some limitations regarding methodological structure, literature review, and manuscript structure that must be addressed prior to publication. MAJOR ISSUES 1. Study Design and Clarity- There is confusion about the timeline of the study. The ethics approval is dated June 2024, while data were collected from patients treated between 2019 and 2023. It is unclear how retrospective consent was obtained. The methods need clear alignment of ethics, data access, and recruitment periods. The study is described as cross-sectional, but it includes retrospective data analysis. The authors should explicitly state this and address related limitations (e.g., recall bias). 2. Instrument Validation- There is no report of cultural or linguistic validation of the Zung SAS for use in this specific patient population. Please clarify whether the version used has been validated in Chinese (if applicable), and provide a reference. 3. Confounding and Covariates- The regression model does not appear to adjust for potential confounders such as age, cancer stage, treatment type, or socioeconomic status, which could influence anxiety. These should be included or justified for exclusion. It is unclear how multicollinearity was checked in the regression model, especially given several closely related variables (e.g., symptoms from IVAP, physical condition, etc.). 4. Literature Review and Theoretical Framing- The introduction and discussion underutilise international literature. For a PLOS ONE audience, broader referencing beyond national studies (e.g., NCCN or ESMO psycho-oncology guidelines) would strengthen the scientific context. Some references are missing or shown as placeholders (e.g., “Error! Reference source not found.”). Please revise for completeness and accuracy. 5. Language and Grammar- The manuscript requires extensive English language editing to improve clarity and fluency. Grammatical errors, awkward phrasing, and overly literal translations (e.g., "bad physical condition") detract from the overall quality. MINOR ISSUES 1. Tables and Figures- Tables are dense and could benefit from clearer headings, footnotes, and consistent formatting. Consider highlighting statistically significant results for easier interpretation. A flow diagram of patient inclusion/exclusion and a figure visualising anxiety severity distribution would enhance clarity. 2. Ethical Clarity- The ethics section mentions both “preliminary review” and “final ethics approval” dated after data collection began. Please clarify when ethical approval was granted in relation to participant recruitment. 3. Limitations- The limitations section is quite brief. It should discuss: a) Single-centre recruitment b) Use of self-reported outcomes c) Lack of clinical anxiety diagnosis (vs. screening scale) d) No data on supportive care interventions or prior psychiatric history 4. Data Availability- While the manuscript states that all data are available in supplementary files, ensure that datasets are in a machine-readable format and include a DOI if applicable, in line with PLOS data policies. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy . Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Khyati Manoj Shah ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/ . PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. 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Investigation of Anxiety Levels and Associated Factor Analysis in Breast Cancer Patients Undergoing Chemotherapy with Implanted Venous Access Ports During the Stable Phase of Disease PONE-D-25-12070R1 Dear Dr. Zhang, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Sampath Kumar Amaravadi, Ph.D Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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