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| Original SubmissionOctober 31, 2025 |
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Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above and, if applicable, provide comments about issues authors must address before this protocol can be accepted for publication. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about research or publication ethics. You may also provide optional suggestions and comments to authors that they might find helpful in planning their study. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: The protocol addresses an important and timely topic with a clear structure and adherence to recognized guidelines (JBI, PRISMA-ScR), which is commendable. However, several aspects require refinement to enhance clarity and rigor. Key terms such as “organized community sport” and “physical disability” need precise operational definitions to avoid ambiguity, and the rationale for the age cutoff (up to 25 years) should be justified. The objectives should explicitly integrate the theoretical frameworks (RE-AIM and QPPF) mentioned later in the text, and the global scope requires more detail on how language diversity, cultural differences, and low-resource settings will be handled. The methods section should provide clearer strategies for grey literature screening, translation, and inter-rater reliability checks. Additionally, the exclusion of unorganized sport may limit cultural relevance, and anticipated limitations such as heterogeneity and publication bias should be acknowledged. Minor issues include typographic inconsistencies, citation formatting, and duplicate references. Overall, the protocol is promising but would benefit from stronger conceptual clarity, methodological transparency, and attention to global applicability. Specific Comments Title How do you operationalize “organized” and “community” in global contexts where informal sports dominate? Will para-athletics and adaptive sports be treated differently from mainstream sports? Abstract The abstract lacks explicit mention of frameworks (RE-AIM, QPPF) in objectives, these appear later but should be upfront. Also, no mention of anticipated limitations (e.g., heterogeneity, lack of intervention trials) Why was age cutoff set at 25 years? Is this consistent with WHO youth definition or arbitrary? How will you handle mixed-disability cohorts where physical and cognitive disabilities coexist? Introduction Heavy reliance on prevalence data without linking to sport participation gaps quantitatively. Mentions barriers but does not classify them systematically (e.g., socio-economic vs infrastructural). Line 62, “Positive social experiences enhance participation”, needs stronger theoretical underpinning (Self-Determination Theory?). Line 79, How will you differentiate between “quality participation” and mere attendance? Will cultural factors (e.g., gender norms in sport) be analyzed? Review questions Second question (“barriers and facilitators”) is broad, should specify if these will be mapped to frameworks or thematic synthesis. Will you assess barriers/facilitators quantitatively (frequency) or qualitatively (themes)? How will you address intersectionality (e.g., gender + disability)? Eligibility criteria “Physical disability” definition is vague, should align with ICD or ICF classification. Exclusion of “unorganized sport” may omit culturally relevant practices in LMICs. Why exclude school-based therapy interventions but include school sports? How will you handle hybrid programs (therapy + sport)? Methods Grey literature search strategy is ambitious but lacks detail on screening rigor. No mention of language translation process, critical for global scope. Will you use dual independent screening for grey literature? How will you assess methodological quality (JBI critical appraisal tools?) even though scoping reviews typically do not? References Inconsistent referencing (authors used ‘ …et al’ after mentioning three authors in reference [2], whereas after mentioning six authors in references, [3, 10, 19, 21, …]. Also eight authors were mentioned in reference [16], reference number [13] and [15] are the same, please check all references in the entire protocol and format according to the journal’s guideline. Supplementary files Search strategy lacks Boolean logic clarity for complex queries ********** -->7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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