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PONE-D-24-54259-->-->Who presents the greatest challenge in intellectual disability research - participants or health and research professionals? Findings from the QuinteT Recruitment Intervention within an internal pilot RCT for those with Type 2 Diabetes-->-->PLOS ONE?> Dear Dr. Kelly, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 09 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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Niazi Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal requirements: 1. When submitting your revision, we need you to address these additional requirements. Please ensure that your manuscript meets PLOS ONE's style requirements, including those for file naming. The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and 2. We note that your Data Availability Statement is currently as follows: [All relevant data are within the manuscript and its Supporting Information files.] Please confirm at this time whether or not your submission contains all raw data required to replicate the results of your study. Authors must share the “minimal data set” for their submission. PLOS defines the minimal data set to consist of the data required to replicate all study findings reported in the article, as well as related metadata and methods (https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/data-availability#loc-minimal-data-set-definition ). 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Please also provide contact information for a data access committee, ethics committee, or other institutional body to which data requests may be sent. If data are owned by a third party, please indicate how others may request data access. 3. Please amend either the title on the online submission form (via Edit Submission) or the title in the manuscript so that they are identical. 4. Your ethics statement should only appear in the Methods section of your manuscript. If your ethics statement is written in any section besides the Methods, please move it to the Methods section and delete it from any other section. Please ensure that your ethics statement is included in your manuscript, as the ethics statement entered into the online submission form will not be published alongside your manuscript. Additional Editor Comments This engaging paper iterates inquiries that align well with the reported findings. However, it could be made more precise by explicitly referencing the study's focus on recruitment challenges in randomized controlled trials (RCTs), such as "Identifying the Key Challenges in Intellectual Disability Research Recruitment: Participants or Professionals?" The long title presented is not appropriate. Employing the QuinteT Recruitment Intervention (QRI) methodology is innovative and well-suited for identifying recruitment barriers and enablers in vulnerable populations. The multi-method approach—interviews, analysis of recruitment discussions, screening logs, and review of study documents—provides a comprehensive view of the challenges. The thematic analysis is appropriately applied, though the lack of screening log data from two sites is a limitation. Including more perspectives from family or carers could have enriched the findings, as their influence on recruitment decisions is significant. The conclusions are consistent with the data presented. They highlight the systemic barriers within the healthcare system and among professionals as more significant than participant-related challenges. This finding is insightful and aligns well with the study's objectives. Focusing on organizational buy-in and emotional labor among healthcare professionals and researchers provides a fresh perspective. However, the conclusions could be more actionable by explicitly connecting the identified challenges to broader implications for healthcare research policy and practice. Citations in the study are appropriate and comprehensive, drawing from a mix of foundational studies and recent advancements. However, some references to key themes, such as advocacy versus paternalism and gatekeeping, could be further developed to deepen the discussion. Additionally, more explicit connections between the study's findings and prior research on RCT challenges in vulnerable populations would strengthen the narrative. To improve the paper's suitability for publication, the authors could: 1. Refine the title for clarity and precision. 2. Address methodological limitations, such as missing data from screening logs, by discussing their potential impact in greater depth. 3. Discuss how the findings might influence future recruitment strategies or policy adjustments. 4. Ensure a balanced discussion of participant versus professional challenges by integrating more voices from participants or caregivers where possible. 5. Tighten the narrative in the discussion section to link findings to actionable recommendations and broader implications. 6. Incorporating recent literature can enhance your study by providing contemporary insights into recruitment challenges in intellectual disability (ID) research and related fields. Here are some pertinent studies: a. Shariq, S., Cardoso Pinto, A.M., Budhathoki, S.S. et al. Barriers and facilitators to the recruitment of disabled people to clinical trials: a scoping review. Trials 24, 171 (2023). https://doi.org/10.1186/s13063-023-07142-1. Summary: This review identifies obstacles and enablers in recruiting disabled individuals, including those with intellectual disabilities, into clinical trials. It emphasizes the need for inclusive recruitment strategies to address underrepresentation. b. Iflaifel, M., Hall, C.L., Green, H.R. et al. Widening participation – recruitment methods in mental health randomised controlled trials: a qualitative study. BMC Med Res Methodol 23, 211 (2023). https://doi.org/10.1186/s12874-023-02032-1. Summary: This study explores perspectives on online and offline recruitment methods to enhance diversity in mental health RCTs, offering insights that could apply to ID research. c. McCausland D, Haigh M, McCallion P, and McCarron M. IRB challenges in multisite studies: A case report and commentary from the Intellectual Disability Supplement to the Irish Longitudinal Study on Ageing (IDS-TILDA) [version 1; peer review: 3 approved]. HRB Open Res 2024, 7:3 (https://doi.org/10.12688/hrbopenres.13854.1) Summary: This paper discusses ethical review processes in multisite studies involving adults with intellectual disabilities, d. Jacobsen P, Haddock G, Raphael J, Peak C, Winter R, Berry K. Recruiting and retaining participants in three randomised controlled trials of psychological interventions conducted on acute psychiatric wards: top ten tips for success. BJPsych Open. 2022;8(4):e125. doi:10.1192/bjo.2022.527. Summary: Although focused on psychiatric settings, this article provides practical recruitment and retention strategies that could be adapted for ID research contexts. e. Jones H, Cipriani A, Barriers and incentives to recruitment in mental health clinical trials. BMJ Ment Health 2019;22:49-50. Summary: This article examines factors influencing recruitment in mental health trials, offering insights that may be relevant to overcoming similar challenges in ID research. 7. Incorporate the one area missing in this manuscript, the recent moves by regulatory agencies towards Real World Evidence (RWE) trials that will be supported by the conclusions drawn in this paper, with discussions on recruitment challenges in clinical research involving vulnerable populations. The FDA’s 2023 Guidance on Diversity Plans to Improve Enrollment of Participants from Underrepresented Racial and Ethnic Populations in Clinical Trials offers insights on planning and implementing inclusive recruitment strategies. While this guidance is not ID-specific, its principles could be adapted for this study's context. 8. Integrate the FDA's emphasis on investigator training for inclusive recruitment and apply it to the context of ID studies. 9. Reference recent literature on recruitment challenges in vulnerable populations (such as the 2023 scoping review on disabled populations) to position the study within the broader clinical research landscape. 10. Include a recommendation to adopt structured recruitment plans that align with FDA diversity guidelines. This could involve pre-trial simulations or mock recruitment to identify bottlenecks early. 11. Conclude by advocating for integrating regulatory frameworks, such as FDA guidance, into future ID research to standardize recruitment practices and improve inclusivity. 12. Discuss the FDA's 2023 Guidance on Diversity Plans in the methods and recommendations sections to underscore the importance of structured recruitment strategies. 13. Cite the FDA’s Guidance for Industry on Clinical Trial Design and Conduct for Pediatric Populations for parallels in designing trials for vulnerable populations. 14. Highlight how the FDA’s focus on inclusivity can complement ethical frameworks like the Declaration of Helsinki in the study's context. [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/ . PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org . 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PONE-D-24-54259R1-->-->Who presents the greatest challenge in intellectual disability research - participants or health and research professionals?-->-->PLOS ONE?> Dear Dr. Kelly, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 16 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols . Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols . We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Sarfaraz K. Niazi Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments: While finding volunteers for randomized controlled trials (RCTs) is never easy, the procedure is even more difficult for those with intellectual disabilities (ID) and Type 2 diabetes (T2D). Using the QuinteT recruiting Intervention (QRI), this study investigated the challenges in recruiting and sought to explain why they arose and how they may be resolved. Three UK National Health Service (NHS) sites participated in the study, which included interviews with individuals with ID/T2D, research experts, and healthcare personnel. The results opened our eyes. Unlike first impressions, many people with ID/T2D were willing to engage; the healthcare professionals were more reluctant. Some employees felt awkward suggesting volunteers since they thought their participation wouldn't be suitable or they wouldn't grasp the study. Others battled the bureaucratic and logistical obstacles inside the NHS, which hampered recruiting prior to it ever starting. One of the most important lessons from this research was that, usually at the organizational level, recruitment difficulties began far sooner than predicted. Some NHS staff members, especially those not experienced in dealing with people with ID, clearly lacked buy-in. Staff turnover and current post-pandemic pressures only aggravate the situation and complicate regular engagement. The research teams had an emotional load as well—always seeking clearances, navigating administrative obstacles, and trying to persuade stakeholders the study was worthwhile. Notwithstanding these difficulties, those people with ID/T2D who were contacted were usually eager and saw the study as a wonderful chance to participate in a social and learning environment. The results ran counter to several medical professionals' presumptions, which held that participants would find it difficult to interact. Gatekeeping primarily played a role in limiting involvement. Determining whether they should even be informed about the study, healthcare providers, support staff, and even family members often made decisions on behalf of individuals with ID/T2D. to seriously consider joining had the opportunity to give joining serious thought since someone else had already made that decision for them. This well-meaning but ultimately limiting approach resulted in hiring fewer people than expected. Fascinatingly, individuals with ID/T2D demonstrated a clear awareness of the study and eagerly participated when given the opportunity. This study emphasizes the need for a change in viewpoint: instead of presuming restrictions, medical professionals and caregivers should concentrate on enabling people with ID to make their own wise decisions. Roadblocks inside organizations also complicated the research. Every NHS location followed its own bureaucratic procedures, and variations in how they handled research permissions resulted in annoying delays. Some sites engaged ID teams early on, streamlining their process, which resulted in more recruiting. Others greatly limited their recruiting capacity by not being able to get the required clearances in time. was yet another challengeedge of intellectual disability presented still another difficulty. Although some clinical research nurses (CRNs) were at ease with RCT procedures, they were reluctant to find volunteers since they had no experience interacting with people with ID. This uncertainty sometimes led to qualified people being turned away, depending more on presumptions than on data. Beyond the mechanics of hiring, this study clarifies the emotional effort required in research with sensitive groups. The study teams had to negotiate NHS staff opposition, control delays, and continually modify their strategy to match the limitations of every site. exacerbating manpower shortages and reducing the ability aggravating manpower shortages and lowering the capacity of healthcare teams to conduct research. Recruitment was either facilitated or hampered in the NHS, mostly depending on the leadership approach used there. Strong leadership and involved teams made sites more successful; poor leadership and high staff turnover presented more serious problems. Despite these challenges, the study offered a comprehensive analysis on how to enhance recruitment. First and most importantly, early interaction with front-line staff and NHS leadership is vital. Before recruiting starts, establishing relationships and getting buy-in can have a big impact. Particularly for those not experienced in dealing with people with ID, training for healthcare personnel can help to lower discomfort and question presumptions. Real-time recruiting data collection and analysis are also crucial since it is difficult to find the actual obstacles without thorough screening logs. Lastly, as recruiting people from underrepresented groups calls for more effort, adaptability, and tenacity than normal RCTs, researchers must fight for enough funding and reasonable deadlines. This study challenges the commonly held belief that recruiting individuals with ID/T2D for clinical research is a daunting task. Rather, the actual challenges come from the hospital system—organizational inefficiencies, gatekeeping, and staff's lack of preparation. The emphasis should be on removing these obstacles going forward so that those with ID have the same chances of being involved in studies as the general population. Better planning, focused instruction, and significant institutional support can help recruitment in this profession become more inclusive and successful. Changing the perspective from exclusion to empowerment will enable individuals with ID the freedom and encouragement needed to make wise research decisions. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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