Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionApril 24, 2025 |
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PONE-D-25-22110Impact of COVID-19 on English Football Premier League Analyzing Rankings and Home-Field Advantage Using Extended Bradley-Terry ModelsPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Wu, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Based on my own reading of the manuscript, I concur with the reviewers that the paper requires substantial revision. In addition to the points already raised in the reviews, I would particularly expect the following aspects to be addressed:
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PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for providing me with the opportunity to review your paper. It analyses the impact of COVID-19 on rankings and home advantage in the English Premier League (EPL) in men’s football. Its methodological originality is to use extended Bradley-Terry models based on distinct home advantage factors across teams. I believe the manuscript has potential for publication in the journal. I have several comments for your attention below. I hope you find my feedback fair and helpful. I wish you all the best with further development of your research. Comments: In the second sentence of the abstract, the reference to ‘unpredictable match outcomes’ is unsupported and does not look essential to me, I suggest removing it. The same applies later to your main text lines 10-11. In your paper, you use only 11 references. Relatedly, some claims/sentences lack evidence. For example, the first two sentences need referencing, Butler and Butler (2023) https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S2773161823000058 may be helpful here. In the first sentence, you refer to the EPL as ‘one of the most prestigious soccer leagues in the world’, it is probably THE most prestigious one. You also refer to its high level of competition. However, Scelles et al. (2022) https://www.tandfonline.com/doi/full/10.1080/23750472.2020.1784036 found that its average ‘end of season’ competitive balance over 2006-2018 was average compared to other European first tiers in men’s football. Therefore, you may want to be more explicit about what you refer to through ‘high level of competition’, while acknowledging contrasting evidence in the literature. HFA is not explicitly introduced as acronym for home-field advantage until line 49 despite being used earlier. I would probably argue that home advantage (HA) is more commonly used in the literature. Line 15, it should be Leitner et al. The references used in your first paragraph are all supportive of no fans limiting home advantage. However, Scelles et al. (2024) https://www.tandfonline.com/doi/full/10.1080/19406940.2024.2323012 do not support it. Therefore, you may want to be more nuanced. The literature on predicting the outcome of football games lines 26-48 is quite dated. I suggest updating it, for example by checking more recent references having cited the papers you refer to. The same applies to the reference to Pollard line 52. In this specific paragraph about home advantage (that is, lines 48-56), I would expect more discussion about the factors explaining it as per the literature. This would help better discuss your later findings. The idea that Manchester United is known for its strong home advantage lines 133-135 needs to be supported. Is it true since 2013, that is, since Sir Alex Ferguson stopped as head coach? In other words, was it an Alex Ferguson effect rather than a Manchester United effect? When presenting the data lines 152-169, I would suggest referring to the introduction of the Video Assistant Referee (VAR) in the league ahead of the 2019-2020 season, see for example Hamsund and Scelles (2021) https://www.mdpi.com/1911-8074/14/12/573 and Teixeira da Silva et al. (2024) https://link.springer.com/article/10.1007/s12283-024-00459-3. This would help better discuss your findings, for example when referring to ‘the referee’s preference towards the home team’ line 191. The content lines 174-183 needs to be supported by references. The same applies to ‘Manchester United, Arsenal, and Chelsea, which had high HAF ranks in pre-COVID due to strong fan bases’ lines 255-257, as this suggests that fan bases alone explain home advantage for these three clubs, while there may be other factors as per the literature on home advantage. Lines 355-356, a p-value of 0.1133 cannot be deemed marginally significant since it is above 0.1; instead, it should be deemed not significant but not far from being significant at the 10% level. The discussion section can be improved in several ways: - referring back to previous literature - better highlighting your contributions to the literature - more explicitly identifying the limitations of your study, maybe by grouping them together with directions for future research in a dedicated subsection. A short conclusion summarising your key findings and contributions could be added. I do not understand why two authors are thanked in the acknowledgements; the first two sentences should be removed here. Reviewer #2: The paper deals with an interesting issue. However, the following aspects deserve attention and should be implemented: 1) The fairly simple Bradley-Terry model is extended by one or two parameters. So there is no major innovation in the model. 2) It is not clear why the Bradley-Terry model or an extension of it is used. Why are the Elo model or the Davidson model, in which a draw is already modelled, or even machine learning models such as RankNet etc. not taken into consideration? It would be useful to clearly explain this and justify why the model in question was selected. 3) A brief (!) overview of the potential explanations of the home advantage should be given. 4) It is not clear where the data for the estimation/simulation of µ and β in (4) and (5) come from. It is also not entirely clear whether this is an estimate or a simulation. In the case of the former, a regression output should actually be offered. 5) A presentation of the estimation equations would also be desirable. 6) The new model is a good representation of the situation in the Premier League in the period under consideration. It seems to me that the fitting of this model is given precisely to this league and the period described. In this respect, the question of external validity arises. What does the model say for other time periods and what does it say for other leagues? If it is only suitable for the situation described, then the findings are rather modest. 7) The empirical study is based on data from the 2014 to 2023 seasons. During this period, the personnel in all the clubs analysed (players, managers) were presumably at least partially replaced. How is this dealt with in the study? Apparently, clubs are viewed as anthropomorphic units, and this problem is not addressed. Since personnel policy has a considerable influence on the probability of winning, this should mean that the model considered can only make valid statements for the respective situation and the respective league. All in all, I don't think the paper is very innovative. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Nicolas Scelles Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. 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