Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionFebruary 7, 2025 |
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Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: General Comments I appreciate the opportunity to review the manuscript titled "Biomechanical Tradeoffs in Stroller Running: Reduced Vertical Impact Loading and Increased Torsional Injury Risk." The study addresses a relevant and underexplored topic with potential implications for injury prevention and running mechanics. Below, I offer several suggestions to enhance the manuscript's clarity, rigor, and impact. Specific Comments Introduction 1. The definition of a running stroller ("For the purposes of this analysis, a running stroller is defined as...") would be more appropriately placed in the Methods section under "Equipment." This adjustment would streamline the Introduction, allowing it to focus on broader context and avoid redundancy. 2. The Introduction could benefit from a more comprehensive review of recent literature on stroller running mechanics. Specifically, I recommend incorporating the following studies: Sandbakk et al. (2020): Energetic Cost and Kinematics of Pushing a Stroller on Flat and Uphill Terrain (DOI: 10.3389/fphys.2020.00574). Greany & Greany (2013): The Fitness Benefits of Pushing a Baby Stroller (DOI: 10.1097/JWH.0000000000000002). These references would strengthen the theoretical foundation and highlight the practical relevance of the study. 3. The manuscript could further emphasize its practical implications by discussing how the findings might inform injury prevention strategies for caregivers who engage in stroller running. Additionally, the real-world applications for sports rehabilitation and running technique optimization could be articulated more clearly. Methods 1. The manuscript currently describes participant demographics in the text but lacks a summary table. I strongly recommend including a table to present this information clearly and concisely. 2. The study exclusively uses the Babytrend Expedition EX Double Jogger. However, no rationale is provided for this choice. Could different stroller designs (e.g., single-wheel vs. double-wheel models) influence the results? A brief justification for the selected stroller would strengthen the methodological rigor. 3. While the study controls speed within ±10% variation, it does not address potential fatigue effects across multiple trials. Consider incorporating a post-trial Rating of Perceived Exertion (RPE) assessment or discussing fatigue as a potential limitation. 4. Given the use of an 18m indoor runway, it is unclear whether participants reached steady-state speed before force plate measurements. How was acceleration controlled? If speed varied significantly across trials, were any trials excluded based on extreme deviations? Clarifying these methodological details would enhance the reliability of the findings. Results 1. In Table 1, I recommend recalculating APIMP and FMIMP to verify whether the observed extreme changes represent genuine effects or potential artifacts. This step would ensure the robustness of the reported findings. 2. To improve the interpretability of the results, I suggest including 95% confidence intervals in the bootstrap analysis. This addition would provide a more reliable estimation of variability. 3. To complement statistical significance testing, I recommend calculating Cohen’s d to assess the practical significance of the observed differences. This would help contextualize the real-world relevance of the findings. 4. Please revise the p-value formatting to avoid expressions such as "p = 0." Instead, use "p < 0.001" or report the exact p-values where appropriate to maintain precision. 5. Table 1 would benefit from clearer units and labels (e.g., BW, St) to ensure consistency and improve readability. Discussion 1. The Discussion suggests that stroller running reduces vertical impact forces due to load-sharing through the arms. However, the extent of force offloading to the upper body remains unclear. Has prior research quantified hand force contributions during stroller running or similar load-assisted activities (e.g., trekking poles, exoskeletons)? Addressing this would provide a more nuanced understanding of the findings. 2. The study proposes that limited upper-body rotation leads to increased free moment and torsional stress. What biomechanical evidence supports this causal relationship? Expanding on this mechanism would strengthen the Discussion. 3. The first paragraph of the Discussion mentions stride length differences but does not clearly explain or resolve these discrepancies. A more detailed analysis or framework for interpreting these differences would be valuable. 4. The study reports significant changes in impact forces and torsional loads despite unchanged running speed. 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