Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionNovember 4, 2024 |
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Dear Dr. Qu, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The study is interesting, well-articulated, and has the potential to contribute to sleep science. However, several areas require clarification. As a result, I consider the manuscript to have‘Risky major revision’ due to its limitations. In addition to Reviewer 1’s comments, the author may also want to address the following points Abstract: In addition to stating the OR, the author may consider providing an interpretation (e.g., 20% lower odds [OR 0.8, 95% CI: 0.63–1]). Intro: A more comprehensive literature review is recommended to better establish the rationale for the study, particularly regarding Weekend Catch-Up Sleep and the Risk of Aging. Exposure Assessment: I may have missed it, but I did not see the paper “[5] Kim et al. (2021),” which assessed the relationship between weekend CUS and other factors such as phenotypic age and anti-aging effects. Please clarify. Statistical Analysis: The authors may consider explaining the rationale for adjusting for age when age itself is the outcome variable. If aging (phenotypic age) is used as the outcome, why was self-reported age included as an adjustment variable? Similarly, for other adjusted variables, how do they justify their inclusion in the model? For example, if education and BMI were not significantly associated, what was the rationale for including them? Results: Providing an interpretation of the results would enhance the paper’s readability. Conclusion: Is this a cohort study? The author previously described it as cross-sectional—please clarify. Tables: Authors may consider formatting the mean and SD as Age (mean±sd); Could you please consider indicating which tests were undertaken for which variables in the table, may be by using the endnote? I mean which mean diff was t-test and which one is Mann-Whitney U tests; Indicating the sig. using * would be useful. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 24 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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Please also provide details on how you will ensure persistent or long-term data storage and availability [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: In this study, the authors investigate the relationship between weekend Catch-Up Sleep (CUS) and biological aging using data from NHANES 2017-2018. The study presents an interesting perspective on how sleep compensation on weekends may influence aging risk, particularly in individuals with different sleep habits and durations. While the findings are intriguing, several methodological and conceptual concerns need to be addressed to strengthen the manuscript. Major Concerns: Major Comment #1: Specification Regarding Sleep Disorders, specially Sleep Apnea The manuscript considers sleep disorders in subgroup and sensitivity analyses but does not specify which disorders are included. Given that NHANES 2017-2018 contains specific questions on obstructive sleep apnea (OSA), snoring, and breathing interruptions during sleep, it is unclear whether these factors were considered. OSA is particularly relevant as it is linked to inflammation, metabolic dysfunction, and accelerated biological aging—factors that could confound the observed relationship between CUS and aging. Additionally, while the manuscript states that sleep disorder information was obtained from NHANES, it appears to rely on the broad self-reported question about "trouble sleeping." This approach does not distinguish between insomnia, OSA, or restless legs syndrome, which may have differing impacts on aging. The authors should clarify whether: - OSA was included as a distinct category in the analysis. If not, this is a significant limitation that should be acknowledged. - Snoring and breathing irregularities were considered as proxies for undiagnosed OSA. - Additional subgroup analyses could be performed, distinguishing between different sleep disorder types. Furthermore, the sensitivity analysis excludes participants taking sleep and psychiatric medications, but the manuscript does not specify which medications were excluded. Since benzodiazepines, non-benzodiazepine hypnotics, and antidepressants can alter sleep architecture and affect biological aging, this exclusion criterion should be explicitly defined. Major Comment #2: Mediation and Moderation Analyses The current statistical approach categorizes weekend CUS duration into discrete groups (e.g., no CUS, 0-1h, 1-2h, >2h), which may limit the ability to detect more nuanced relationships. A more robust approach would be to apply moderation and mediation analyses, which could provide deeper insight into the role of CUS in aging. - Mediation Analysis: CUS duration could act as a mediator between weekday sleep patterns (e.g., total weekday sleep, bedtime) and aging risk. This would help determine whether the protective effects of early bedtime or sufficient weekday sleep are explained through CUS. - Moderation Analysis: Rather than treating CUS as a fixed categorical variable, it could be modeled as a moderator of the relationship between weekday sleep duration and aging. This would clarify whether CUS can buffer the negative effects of insufficient weekday sleep. Applying these approaches would allow for a more continuous and dynamic understanding of sleep patterns rather than relying on static categorical cutoffs. If such analyses are not feasible with the current dataset, the authors should discuss this limitation in the manuscript. Major Comment #3: Age-Stratified Analysis The manuscript investigates the relationship between weekend CUS and aging but does not explicitly differentiate between young and older adults, either biologically or chronologically. While the authors use phenotypic age as a biomarker for biological aging, they do not analyze whether the effects of CUS differ across different age groups. This omission is important because aging is a continuous process, and the impact of sleep compensation on biological age might differ between younger and older individuals. For example, the manuscript notes that CUS prevalence peaks in the 30-40 age group before declining, yet no further stratification is conducted to examine whether CUS has a differential effect on aging risk in younger versus older adults. A subgroup analysis based on age deciles or biologically defined aging categories (e.g., younger adults vs. middle-aged vs. older adults) would strengthen the findings and provide greater clarity on how CUS interacts with aging processes at different life stages. Major Comment #4: Consideration for Cognitive Aging The manuscript focuses on biological aging but does not address whether weekend CUS is related to cognitive aging. While NHANES 2017-2018 does not include direct cognitive tests it does provide metabolic and inflammatory biomarkers that could serve as indirect markers of cognitive decline. Given the well-established link between sleep, aging, and cognitive function, the authors should discuss whether their aging measure captures cognitive aspects or is limited to metabolic/physiological aging. If possible, additional analyses could examine how CUS relates to metabolic and inflammatory markers that are relevant for cognitive aging. Major Comment #5: Limited Citations The introduction primarily relies on single references per claim, which may limit the depth of evidence supporting its conclusions. While citing individual studies is valuable, certain claims—especially those regarding the effects of sleep and aging—would benefit from referencing multiple sources to provide a broader scientific foundation. To strengthen the introduction, the authors should increase citation density by incorporating multiple studies for each major claim. Reviewer #2: The study is solid overall, the topic is relevant, and the work is well-executed. The NHANES 2017-2018 data provide a strong foundation, the statistical analysis is appropriately conducted, logistic regression is used correctly, and the conclusions align with the presented results. But there are a few things that could be clarified. First, at times, the authors seem to imply a causal relationship, even though the study is clearly correlational. It would be good to soften some of the wording because it’s still unclear whether catch-up sleep itself directly affects aging processes or if it simply correlates with other factors that do. Second, regarding data availability—everything is stated correctly, but it would be helpful to specify exactly where the raw data or more detailed summary statistics can be accessed, especially if any preprocessing was applied, since that always adds transparency. The finding that the effect is mainly seen in people who go to bed before midnight is particularly interesting, and it would be great if the authors could elaborate on possible explanations—are there physiological mechanisms, behavioral factors, or something else at play? The language of the manuscript is clear overall, but the structure of the results section could be slightly improved. Sometimes, transitions between statistical models feel abrupt, which might make it harder to follow for readers who are not fully immersed in the details. In general, this is a well-conducted and interesting study, but adding a bit more clarity on these points would make it even stronger. ********** what does this mean? ). 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Dear Dr. Qu, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 18 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols . Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols . We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Fakir Md Yunus, PhD, MSC, MPH, MBBS Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: If the reviewer comments include a recommendation to cite specific previously published works, please review and evaluate these publications to determine whether they are relevant and should be cited. There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. Additional Editor Comments: Thank you for your thoughtful and thorough responses to the reviewers’ comments. The manuscript has significantly improved and is close to being ready for publication. To further strengthen the clarity, coherence, and overall readability of the paper, we encourage the authors to carefully review and consider the following editorial suggestions. These are intended to enhance the presentation and accessibility of your work for a broader readership. We look forward to receiving the revised version. Abstract: In addition to stating the OR, the author may consider providing an interpretation (e.g., 20% lower odds [OR 0.8, 95% CI: 0.63–1]). Intro: A more comprehensive literature review is recommended to better establish the rationale for the study, particularly regarding Weekend Catch-Up Sleep and the Risk of Aging. Exposure Assessment: I may have missed it, but I did not see the paper “[5] Kim et al. (2021),” which assessed the relationship between weekend CUS and other factors such as phenotypic age and anti-aging effects. Please clarify. Statistical Analysis: The authors may consider explaining the rationale for adjusting for age when age itself is the outcome variable. If aging (phenotypic age) is used as the outcome, why was self-reported age included as an adjustment variable? Similarly, for other adjusted variables, how do they justify their inclusion in the model? For example, if education and BMI were not significantly associated, what was the rationale for including them? Results: Providing an interpretation of the results would enhance the paper’s readability. Conclusion: Is this a cohort study? The author previously described it as cross-sectional—please clarify. Tables: Authors may consider formatting the mean and SD as Age (mean±sd); Could you please consider indicating which tests were undertaken for which variables in the table, may be by using the endnote? I mean which mean diff was t-test and which one is Mann-Whitney U tests; Indicating the sig. using '*' would be useful. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: All my comments have been addressed. I have no further questions. Great work! ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: Yes: Daniel Baena ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/ . PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org . Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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