Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJanuary 30, 2025 |
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PONE-D-25-05247Integration of mathematical modeling and economics approaches to evaluate strategies for control of Salmonella Dublin in a heifer-raising operationPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Llanos-Soto, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Both reviewers have made some great suggestions for this manuscript. Please consider them carefully. As noted by one of the reviewers, the manuscript tries to cover a lot of ground, which is great but also sometimes difficult to manage. As noted, splitting the manuscript into 2 articles is a possibility, but I would encourage the authors to keep everything condensed in one as is, for which some additional details and re-structuring is warranted, as suggested below. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 24 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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L.-S. was supported by the Cornell Institute of Digital Agriculture (CIDA) through the Research Innovation Fund (RIF). URL: https://digitalagriculture.cornell.edu/research-support/. Funding sources did not play any role in the study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript.” Please include your amended statements within your cover letter; we will change the online submission form on your behalf. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Dear Author's, Thank you for the opportunity to review your manuscript. Overall, the paper is well written, and the mathematical model is clear and easy to follow from both an epidemiological and economic perspective. I appreciate the depth of analysis and the valuable insights provided. Below are a few comments that may help strengthen the study: 1. Benefit of the Study to Modeled HRO It would be helpful to explicitly highlight how this study enhances the understanding of S. Dublin transmission within a single heifer-raising operation (HRO). Additionally, since the model is based on an HRO, discussing its applicability to other cattle herd types would add value. 2. Realism of Cleaning Assumption The assumption of cleaning a farm 12 times per day seems quite intensive. The authors could discuss the realism of this scenario and, if possible, provide references or practical justifications for this assumption. 3. Transmission Pathways and Indirect Transmission Assumption The study assumes that susceptible individuals become infected primarily through indirect transmission via the environment contaminated with S. Dublin bacteria. However, some studies suggest that farm-to-farm movements are the main driver of spread (e.g., https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S0022030224008166). Since the authors acknowledge in line 526 that HROs play a role in dissemination, and again in line 778 regarding cattle movements, it would be useful to discuss S. Dublin spread via movements in more detail. 4. Testing and Quarantine Strategies Line 547 mentions that testing cattle before returning to their farms and quarantining animals upon arrival could help prevent the introduction of S. Dublin. It would be helpful to discuss how long before returning to the farm testing should occur. The authors may refer to the Danish study mentioned above (https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S0022030224008166) for additional context. 5. Test Sensitivity and Within-Herd Prevalence Line 551 states that the available tests have low sensitivity. The authors could briefly discuss how test sensitivity varies with within-herd prevalence, as this could impact the effectiveness of detection and control strategies. 6. Duration of the Simulation Period The manuscript simulates S. Dublin spread over a two-year period (lines 275 and 777). Given that the Danish study mentioned above reports a median infection duration of 25 months in farms, which aligns well with the chosen simulation period, the authors could briefly discuss how model results would be influenced by choosing a longer or shorter period. I appreciate the effort that went into this study and believe these additions will further enhance its clarity and impact. I look forward to seeing the revised version. Reviewer #2: This manuscript presents a stochastic simulation model to assess the impact of Salmonella Dublin infection and evaluate the cost-effectiveness of mitigation strategies in heifer-raising operations (HROs). The integration of an economic analysis with a modified Susceptible-Infected-Recovered-Susceptible (SIRS) model is a major strength, as it provides a novel and practical approach to understanding S. Dublin transmission dynamics and control measures. Given the increasing concern surrounding S. Dublin in dairy production and its public health implications, this study offers valuable insights for stakeholders, including farmers, policymakers, and researchers. The inclusion of model code in a public repository (GitHub) further enhances the study's transparency and reproducibility, which is commendable. Overall, this study presents a strong model with practical implications, but refining its focus and clarity will maximize its utility for both researchers and industry stakeholders. I believe the study currently attempts to cover too much ground in a single manuscript and would be beneficial to split it into two papers: one focusing on the within-farm model itself (per se already innovative), including sensitivity analyses of key parameters, and another dedicated to the economic evaluation of mitigation strategies. If the authors prefer to keep the structure as is, then some details need to be made clearer in the text, and the inclusion of some supplementary information in the core text of the manuscript should be reconsidered. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Integration of mathematical modeling and economics approaches to evaluate strategies for control of Salmonella Dublin in a heifer-raising operation PONE-D-25-05247R1 Dear Dr. Llanos-Soto, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. 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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors have thoroughly addressed my comments and incorporated the suggested revisions appropriately. They have also provided clear and satisfactory explanations where changes were not required. I am satisfied with their responses and consider the manuscript suitable for acceptance. Reviewer #2: We appreciate the author’s effort in addressing every single comment. I believe all revisions greatly strengthened the work, and we recognize the merit of the research. PLOS ONE publication criteria is met: the research is original, analyses are performed to a high technical standard and clearly described, conclusions are well supported by the data, and the manuscript is well written. Minor note for consideration: Lines 161–167: Thank you for clarifying the transmission routes of S. Dublin. We suggest simplifying the text to: “We have considered fecal-oral transmission via the shared environment as the exclusive transmission route in our model [10], given that direct transmission through recto-anal ingestion of fecal material and respiratory route [5] is believed less common.”, or something similar in short. Thank you again for politely addressing my comments and best of luck with your research! ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy . Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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