Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMay 21, 2025 |
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Additional Editor Comments (if provided): This study proposal is an interesting and important paper that compares the effects of self-guided compared to facilitator-guided debriefing for immersive virtual reality simulation-based pediatric emergency team training. It is clear that time and energy have been dedicated to this study and overall, it is a well written study proposal. I congratulate the research team for this excellent work. A few minor comments are given by the reviewers. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Does the manuscript provide a valid rationale for the proposed study, with clearly identified and justified research questions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Is the protocol technically sound and planned in a manner that will lead to a meaningful outcome and allow testing the stated hypotheses??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Is the methodology feasible and described in sufficient detail to allow the work to be replicable??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors described where all data underlying the findings will be made available when the study is complete??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above and, if applicable, provide comments about issues authors must address before this protocol can be accepted for publication. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about research or publication ethics. You may also provide optional suggestions and comments to authors that they might find helpful in planning their study. Reviewer #1: Very minor revision This is a well written protocol sensibly based on experience from an earlier randomised pilot study. The research questions are clearly specified (lines 153-168). The sample size appears appropriate although the description (lines 307-316) is not entirely clear. Could the authors look at the description again? The analytical methods with respect to the statistical analysis are entirely suitable. Reviewer #2: The proposed study is timely and relevant, targeting a key gap in medical simulation pedagogy—whether self-guided debriefing can yield comparable learning outcomes to facilitator-led debriefing in immersive VR environments. The manuscript demonstrates strong methodological rigor, with a thoughtful use of pilot data to inform trial design and robust tools to evaluate both technical and non-technical outcomes. A. Comments on methods’ section: Strengths: • The study is methodologically rigorous and adheres to the SPIRIT guidelines. • It employs a well-defined randomized controlled, single-blinded, non-inferiority design, which is appropriate to answer the stated research questions. • The use of validated and standardized assessment tools (e.g., CTS, ABCDE checklist, DASH-SV, IMI, NASA-TLX, SUS, VRSQ) strengthens the internal validity and reproducibility. • Clear blinding procedures for outcome raters and detailed randomization methodology are commendable. • The intervention and assessment phases are well-illustrated with timelines and scenarios. • Considerations for VR-induced side effects (cybersickness) and ethical approvals are properly addressed. Comments for Improvement: 1. Clarify rationale for non-inferiority margin: o The chosen margin of 0.5 on the CTS scale appears derived from pilot data, but a clearer justification of its clinical relevance is warranted. The margin should reflect what constitutes a non-meaningful difference in teamwork skills. 2. Stratified randomization detail: o Although stratified randomization is mentioned, the strata used (e.g., gender, prior VR/simulation experience) are not clearly specified. This should be detailed to ensure group comparability. 3. Team composition and matching: o The formation of teams (pairs of students) may introduce variability. Consider clarifying whether any matching criteria (e.g., prior teamwork experience or clinical rotation level) were used to reduce heterogeneity across teams. 4. Handling missing data: o The statistical plan notes an intention to account for missing data using mixed models, but further detail on handling attrition, particularly in individual-level data (e.g., imputation or exclusion), should be provided. 5. Blinding limitations: o While rater blinding is described well, the lack of participant blinding may introduce performance bias. Although understandable, it could be useful to acknowledge this limitation more explicitly and discuss mitigation strategies. 6. Assessment of carryover effect: o As the same individuals are involved in both pre- and post-tests with different scenarios, consideration of potential carryover learning effect or learning due to exposure (rather than intervention) is warranted. 7. Data safety and monitoring: o The manuscript would benefit from a brief mention of any data monitoring committee or oversight mechanism, particularly in the context of student participants and recorded video data. B. The Discussion and Limitations Sections: Strengths: • The discussion highlights the relevance and potential implications of scalable immersive virtual reality (VR) training, particularly its role in overcoming logistical and cost barriers in simulation-based medical education. • The manuscript acknowledges the novelty of comparing self-guided versus facilitator-guided debriefing in immersive VR—a relatively unexplored area. • The potential for broader implementation and democratization of simulation access is well-articulated and compelling. Comments for Improvement: 1. Overly Optimistic Tone Without Data: o The discussion leans heavily toward the anticipated benefits of self-guided debriefing without sufficient caution. Given this is a protocol paper, it would be more appropriate to moderate claims and clearly distinguish between expected outcomes and established findings from prior literature or pilot data. 2. Limited Integration of Pilot Study Findings: o While pilot data are referenced earlier, their implications are not critically analyzed in the discussion. Incorporating a reflection on how these preliminary results informed both the study design and expected impact would enhance the rationale. 3. Theoretical Underpinnings Need Emphasis: o The discussion would benefit from deeper integration of learning theory—particularly self-regulated learning and cognitive load theory—to better contextualize the study’s potential impact and risks (e.g., learner variability, overload). 4. Scalability Considerations Are Oversimplified: o The promise of wider accessibility is emphasized, but logistical, cultural, and technological barriers to implementation (especially in low-resource settings) should be acknowledged. 5. Lack of Discussion on Generalizability: o The study uses medical students in a high-income country with access to advanced technology. The discussion should more explicitly address the limitations in generalizing the findings to other populations, healthcare systems, or educational levels. 6. Limitations Section is Underdeveloped or Implied: o A standalone "Limitations" paragraph or subsection is lacking. The discussion should explicitly list anticipated limitations such as: � Use of medical students rather than residents or clinicians (may affect ecological validity). � Short-term assessment only; no long-term follow-up to assess knowledge retention or skill transfer. � Inability to blind participants, which may introduce bias. � Potential variability in self-guided debriefing quality despite standardized prompts. Overall, the manuscript is well-prepared and represents a valuable contribution to the field. Minor revisions as outlined above would strengthen clarity and transparency. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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