Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionFebruary 6, 2025 |
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Please see our Supporting Information guidelines for more information: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/supporting-information. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: The investigators used G*Power 3.19 (Heinrich Heine University, Dusseldorf, Germany) for sample size calculations. Based on an expected effect size of 1 (statistical power of.80 and error probability of.05), They computed the total estimated required sample size for acceptable statistical power to be 28 (14 in the EG, 14 in the CG). This is insufficient information. What were the precise differences sought with standard deviations, effect sizes, etc? The protocol in the Appendix is insufficient and lacks this information as well. Also, these calculations should be checked against a more standard clinical trials sample size software such as Power and Precision or other relevant tool such as PASS. The analysis performed looks somewhat reasonable. However, Tables 2 to 4 show many statistical comparisons being made. A p=value adjustment for multiple comparisons should be examined as those like p=0.04 or 0.025 may not be statistically significant. What are the primary and secondary endpoints? How does this affect the setting of the alpha levels for appropriate adjustment? Also, the Statistical Analysis section refers to normal tests. However, the Tables presented look to be done non parametrically. If normality was assumed, then the confidence intervals would be helpful in determining the reliability of the results. Please explain. The paper needs a thorough edit to be sure appropriate detail is provided. Reviewer #2: 1. It would be useful to include some important demographic details in this section, such as gender distribution, stroke etiology (ischemic/hemorrhagic), and affected side (right/left). 2. GFM Definition: The detailed description of the Gastrocnemius Function Massage (GFM) application is commendable. However, some expressions (for example: “the therapist gently pulls the arm and trunk backwards until the foot and gastrocnemius muscle relaxes”) need clarification in terms of anatomy and biomechanics. Do the terms “arm” and “trunk” here refer to the therapist’s or the patient’s trunk? Unclear. 3. Sham GFM: The “sham” method applied to the control group provides a valid comparison, but the extent to which the procedure was effective in terms of blinding (e.g., whether participants guessed their group) is not specified. 4. Gap: The fact that NDT was administered to all participants suggests that GFM was the only variable; however, more information on session length and degree of individualization in content for NDT would be helpful. 5. MAS: The explanations are sufficient, but it is not stated how many different assessors made the assessments and whether the assessors were blinded. 6. Gait Analysis - Legsystm: Adequate technical explanation is given. However, it would have been appropriate to refer to the validity and reliability information of the device. 7. Deficiency: Taking the effect size as 1 is a very high assumption. It should be stated which source or preliminary study this value is based on. 8. Sentence structures should be simplified; especially the part explaining the GFM application should be written in clearer and more technical terms. 9. A reference to the effect size used in the sample size calculation should be provided. 10. It should be stated whether the person(s) performing the spasticity assessment are the same person and whether blindness is ensured. 11. There are grammar and fluency problems in some sentences. Example: In the sentence “Participants in both groups had similar in terms of…” the expression “had similar” is used incompletely. The correct usage should be “were similar in terms of…” Reviewer #3: 1. Title & Abstract Strengths: The title is clear, specific, and reflects the key outcomes of the study. The abstract is structured and summarizes aim, methods, results, and conclusion. Suggestions: Consider adding "stroke patients" to the keywords for better indexing. The final sentence about long-term outcomes could be omitted in the abstract (due to word limits) and moved to the conclusion section of the main text. Introduction Strengths: Provides a solid overview of the prevalence and impact of spasticity post-stroke. Clear rationale and identification of the research gap. Suggestions: The hypothesis (H1) should be rephrased in academic style, e.g., “It was hypothesized that functional massage would significantly improve...”. Methods Strengths: Ethical approval and clinical trial registration are well-documented (a strong point). The sham-controlled design is commendable. Clear inclusion/exclusion criteria. Critiques: Massage description is written in an active, first-person tone (“The therapist stands…”). It should be revised into passive academic tone, e.g., “The therapist was positioned behind the patient…”. "10 GFM sham application" likely contains a typo — should be “10 minutes of sham GFM”. MMSE cut-off is listed as 23 — typically, 24 is used. Clarify with reference. Results Strengths: Statistical tests are appropriate. Tables are referenced, and p-values are reported clearly. Suggestions: Verify consistency between text and tables (e.g., changes in cadence or stride parameters). Discussion Strengths: Thorough and well-supported with citations. Proper alignment of results with existing literature. Strengths and limitations are acknowledged. Suggestions: Some explanations (especially about the mechanism of GFM) are slightly repetitive — could be condensed. Blinding details are not discussed. Was this single-blind or double-blind? Language & Style Critiques: Several minor spelling errors (e.g., “muslce” → “muscle”, “spacticity” → “spasticity”). Avoid direct instructions or first-person tone in the methods section. Overall Assessment Strengths: This is a well-designed randomized controlled trial with a novel approach. Use of a sham group strengthens the internal validity. Results have meaningful clinical implications. Weaknesses: The blinding protocol is unclear. Final Recommendation This study provides important insights into post-stroke rehabilitation using manual therapy techniques. With revisions in tone, style, minor methodological clarifications. Minor revision Reviewer #4: The manuscript aims to highlight the beneficial effects of functional massage applied in association with neurodevelopmental treatment on lower limb spasticity, within a rehabilitation program focused on improving gait parameters and functional mobility. The study is designed as a randomized and controlled clinical trial, conducted on a group of patients diagnosed with stroke. The results obtained demonstrate the effectiveness of the proposed intervention, supported by the use of standardized, validated and relevant assessment tools for the research objectives. The conclusions of the study highlight the potential of fusing functional massage of the gastrocnemius muscle with neurodevelopmental treatment, as an effective option for reducing spasticity, optimizing gait and increasing functional mobility in stroke patients. The originality of the study lies in the "merge" of functional gastrocnemius massage with neurodevelopmental treatment, a previously little-explored combination that brings a new and promising perspective in post-stroke recovery, focused on reducing spasticity and optimizing locomotor function. The title effectively captures the core elements of the study; however, while informative, it is somewhat lengthy and includes a minor inconsistency. Throughout the article, the term "functional massage" is consistently used, whereas the title refers to "function massage." It is unclear whether this variation is intentional or a typographical oversight, but it introduces a degree of ambiguity that could be confusing for the reader. While the introduction reflects a comprehensive understanding of the clinical dimensions of the pathology and the corresponding therapeutic approaches, it transitions too quickly from a general presentation of treatment methods to highlighting functional massage, without providing a clear transition or a convincing argument regarding the effectiveness of this technique in a neurological context. Although the authors propose functional massage as an effective intervention for reducing spasticity and indicate a promising direction for its merge with neurodevelopmental therapy (NDT), the theoretical foundation remains insufficiently supported. The paper would benefit from a strengthening of the scientific framework by including relevant studies from the specialized literature and by a clearer delimitation of the investigated techniques, which would increase the validity and impact of the conclusions formulated. Also, the authors don't clearly identify how the study relates to previous published research. The Methods section offers a thorough overview of participant demographics, inclusion and exclusion criteria, data collection instruments, and statistical procedures. The statistical techniques implemented are appropriate for the nature of the data; even so, there remains room for improvement within this section. In the study period is stated as May–November 2024, and the intervention consisted of twice-weekly therapy sessions for six weeks. It would be useful to clarify the exact time frame: whether each participant received treatment for 6 weeks within this extended period (May–November), or whether the stated period reflects the total duration of the intervention for all participants. This information would help to better understand the organization and delivery of the intervention. The discussion section accurately reflects the results obtained, with the findings providing strong support for the study’s primary objectives. The manuscript offers a valuable contribution to the stroke rehabilitation literature by shedding light on a relatively underexplored therapeutic approach. Even so, subtle insights can be better appreciated, such as the approach to spasticity which is treated in a relatively general way, with limited emphasis on its manifestations in the lower limb, particularly the foot. This limited focus somewhat diminishes the clarity and specificity of the analysis in relation to the study’s stated objectives. It may be beneficial for the authors to more clearly elaborate on the segmental aspects of spasticity, in order to better support the intervention’s effectiveness on the targeted region. In addition, the paragraph beginning with "Spasticity, a common consequence of stroke, negatively affects functional characteristics of individuals such as walking, personal care, mobility, and transfer" until the section "Parikh et al. [32] showed that manual therapy—specifically myofascial release—can significantly reduce spasticity and increase joint mobility in stroke patients." contains noticeable redundancy, particularly in the repeated use of the term "spasticity." This excessive repetition makes the text harder to read giving the impression of a hurried or underdeveloped exposition of ideas. The authors are encouraged to revise this section to make the ideas clearer and improve the overall flow of the text. The conclusion is generally well-aligned with the study’s findings, effectively underscoring the value of promoting a thoughtfully designed and innovative therapeutic approach. It highlights the strengths of the research while also maintaining a balanced perspective by acknowledging its limitations, thereby contributing to the credibility and relevance of the work. Please check out the "doi" from Reference nr. 15- "Mostafa DE, Olama KA, Aly MG. Effect of instrument-assisted soft tissue mobilization on hamstring flexibility in children with diplegic cerebral palsy. Egypt J Hosp Med.2022;89(1):4842–7. doi:10.21608/ejhm.2022.242276." It seems to direct the reader to a source other than the one indicated. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: Yes: Lect. Phd. PT. Eva ILIE ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Dear Dr. SEKEROZ, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== ACADEMIC EDITOR: After minor corrections, the article becomes suitable for publication. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 26 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #4: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: One can see from the results section that the analyses showed significant changes in the EG group and mostly no significant changes in the CG subjects. The authors should thus tell the reader why no direct p-value was calculated or displayed in the Tables 2 to 4 comparing the pre to post changes in CG vs EG for each result. This could be a limitation of the study and require a larger future trial requiring a more adequate sample size. The Discussion section should be expanded accordingly. Reviewer #2: I would like to inform you that I found the article you submitted to be scientifically sufficient. Your topic selection, methodological approach, and the contributions of your findings to the field were noteworthy. I believe your work will make valuable contributions to the literature. I thank you for your efforts and wish you continued success. Reviewer #3: The revisions have been reviewed and the article has been deemed appropriate. I think it is suitable for publication. you. Reviewer #4: I appreciate the authors' effort to respond rigorously and seriously to the reviewers' comments. All the issues raised have been adequately clarified, including strengthening the theoretical basis in the introduction, standardizing terminology, and detailing the duration of the intervention. The revised version of the manuscript brings significant improvements in terms of clarity, coherence, and scientific quality of the paper. I congratulate the authors for the careful way in which they integrated the feedback and for the obvious concern to perfect the study. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Effects of Gastrocnemius Functional Massage on Lower Extemity Spasticity, Spatio- Temporal Gait Variables and Fall Risk in Patients with Stroke: A Randomized Controlled Trial PONE-D-25-03271R2 Dear Dr. SEKEROZ, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Esedullah Akaras Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No ********** |
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