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PONE-D-25-07315Artificial Intelligence Literacy, Sustainability of Digital Learning and Practice Achievement: A Structural Equation ModelPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Xu, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The reviewers noted that the title currently emphasises the methodology rather than the core focus of the study and should be revised to reflect the main themes. The introduction and problem statement lack contextual clarity, with references to K–12 education that do not align with the study’s scope. Key constructs such as “sustainable digital learning competencies,” “learning behaviour,” and “educational equity” are insufficiently defined and conceptually underdeveloped. Research questions are double-barrelled and require refinement. The literature review is disorganised and includes redundancies. The adoption of the COM-B model is not adequately explained or integrated. The conceptual framework lacks clarity and theoretical grounding. Methodological details, including sampling rationale and questionnaire development, are insufficient. The analysis lacks clear links to the research questions, and the use of control variables is not well justified. The discussion does not follow from the results, and conclusions introduce new terms without prior definition. Implications and limitations are missing. Thank you. Musa Adekunle Ayanwale Academic Editor PLOS ONE Please submit your revised manuscript by Jun 09 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please see our Supporting Information guidelines for more information: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/supporting-information. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Your study effectively highlights the impact of AI on education, particularly in vocational higher education, but some areas could be clearer. The introduction is broad, and specifying what kind of attention vocational education lacks—whether in research, policy, or institutional support—would strengthen your argument. The mention of the COM-B model is useful, but briefly explaining its focus on capability, opportunity, and motivation would help unfamiliar readers. Your methodology is clear, but specifying whether the institution studied is a vocational college would enhance precision. Some findings could be more clearly articulated, such as the statement that AI literacy correlates with sustainable digital learning behaviors through the sustainability of digital learning competences, which could be simplified for better readability. Additionally, the claim that students in vocational institutions struggle to translate learning behavior into good performance in practice needs further clarification—does this mean they lack application skills, institutional support, or workplace opportunities? The idea that sustainability of digital learning competences can be “slightly counterproductive” is intriguing but needs more explanation; in what way does it hinder performance? The connection to SDG5 is interesting, but it is not entirely clear how controlling for gender, family resources, and ethnicity contributes to educational equity—elaborating on this link would strengthen the conclusion. A clearer and more precise articulation of these key points would enhance the impact of your study. Reviewer #2: I wish to appreciate the effort and thoughtfulness of the authors to present this idea in this changing world. Below are my contributions and concerns: 1. Topic: Artificial Intelligence Literacy, Sustainability of Digital Learning and Practice Achievement: A Structural Equation Model. There is need to align the topic with the topic. The use of analytical tool on the topic is not necessary but making the topic to cover contents and context will be of a great value and attractive to the readers. 2. Introduction: “To enable better use of AI, data science education and data literacy may need to be integrated into K-12 education. Considering the context of higher education and TVET in the opening statements, what is the rationale for introducing the use of AI, data science education, and data literacy into K-12? As Chiu [12] suggests, the relationship between the two is currently not well-tested. What the two in this context? 3. Problem Statement: Problem statement is vague. There is need for critical analysis of literature to identify the gaps for the study. 5. Research Questions: RQ1: Is there a correlation between AI literacy and sustainable digital learning competences? This is good but no background speaks to the dependent variable (sustainable digital learning competence) Please include this. RQ2: To what extent does AI literacy and the sustainable digital learning competences affect students' learning behaviors? Does this behavior facilitate or help students translate it into practical skills? At beautiful as these questions are, they are double barrel, please split them or transform them to a hypothesis to test the role of AI literacy and sustainable digital learning competences on students’ acquisition of practical skills. Also, provide background to this. RQ3: Can AI literacy and sustainable digital learning competition contribute more to educational equity (SDG5) in a way? This is good. What is educational equity in the context of this study? 5. Literature: The concepts explained are good, however, most information provided could have been used at the study background. “digital competence (DC) is interpreted in various ways (such as digital literacy, digital competence, electronic literacy, electronic skills, electronic competence, computer literacy, and media literacy)” This is not clear. There is repetitions here digital competence-digital competence, electronic competence; i think the focus should be what these digital competences are. We adopt the above concepts and qualify them with the expectation that students will be able to use digital resources sustainably for a long period of time or with a high frequency while learning each skill. This is not clear, what concepts are above. What is learning competences, digital competence and sustainable digital learning competences? How are these measured in literature and specifically, in this study? No concept clarifications for these: educational equity, students' learning behaviors, and practical skills. 6.Theoretical Framework: The adoption of COM-B, but the proponent, year, justification, and application of it to current study is vague. 7. Hypothesis: It should be in plural form “Hypotheses” since they are more than one. Also, some of the hypotheses raised are not aligned with research questioned raised at the background. Also, empirical literature was not advanced for based on hypotheses formulated. 8. Framework: There is a spelling error ‘Farmework’ Also, is this conceptual framework or theoretical framework. The figure projects conceptual framework nor theoretical framework. There is need to elaborate how the framework summarises the study and supported by the theory adopted. 9: Ethical Consideration: Move it under the Methodology 10. Methodology: The explanations and presentation are good. However, technically and logically, there are areas for further explanations. What research philosophical and design adopted for the study and rationale for the adoption? What is the population of the study area and why is the adoption of convenience sampling approach? How is the sampling technique adopted provide protect the data and findings from bias? On the questionnaire, was the questionnaire adopted, adapted or researchers developed? 11. Questionnaire: “Investigate students' AI literacy and digital learning skills, and a five-point Likert scale” Where is sustainable digital learning competences, learning behavior, and Practice Achievement? How the data was collected (Online or paper) is missed. The construct “Practice Achievement” What the research has to say here is confusing, which tending towards quasi-experimental approach. 12. Analysis: What is the correlation between “Fig3. SEM of AI Literacy, Sustainable Digital Learning Competencies and Behavior” and “In Model 3, AI literacy and sustainable digital learning competencies and practice achievement” The study background and literature review did not provide basis for this model. Now, the model tends towards negative, why must the model be retained and explained? The figure for control variables is invisible in the report. No hypotheses or research questions that support the control variables? 13. Discussion: The discussion was not presented logically based on the research hypotheses formulated. Furthermore, the findings were not discussed to establish the relationship that exist between the variables and the implications. 14. Conclusions, Implications and Limitations: The conclusion provided is fair. “This study examined the relationship between AI literacy, sustainable digital learning competencies, students' digital learning behaviors and practical performance with 1004 senior students in Liaoning Province.” However, the introduction of concepts such as students’ digital learning behaviors and practical performance are posing confusion to the readers. The implications of study findings and limitation are missing which are very necessary for study of this type. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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PONE-D-25-07315R1Artificial Intelligence Literacy, Sustainability of Digital Learning and Practice Achievement: A Study of Vocational College StudentsPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Guangyu Xu, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The authors should refine research questions to avoid ambiguity, correct inconsistencies in terminology and framework labelling, clarify research design and measurement details, and expand on theoretical and practical implications. Thank you. Musa Adekunle Ayanwale, Ph.D Academic Editor PLOS ONE Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 13 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Dear Author, I wish to commend your thoughtfulness to conceptualised this timely study especially in the maginalised TVET colleges. The following view comments will enhance the stidy further: 1. RQ2: To what extent does AI literacy and the sustainable digital learning competences affect students' learning behaviors? Does this behavior facilitate or help students translate it into practical skills? This is a double question. What behaviour and how were the practical skills measured in this study? 2. Can AI literacy and sustainable digital learning competition contribute more to educational equity (SDG5) in a way? The rationale for this question is unclear. How it was achieved in the study is not sure. The word "competition" brought a confusion. Hope it is not typographic error. 3. Check this "family socioeconomic status (SES),/ family social status (SES)" in the literature review. 4. COM-B Model- Tag the heading as "theoretical framework" not COM-B Model, beacuse you made used of three models. 5.SDLC - should be fully defined under the hypotheses development before abbreviation. 6. Framework: Is it a conceptual framework/theoretical framework? The title bears conceptual framework while the figure tagged as theoretical framework. It is actually conceptual framework. 7. What design was used? The report of analysis was confusing with the provision made for control variables, the teaching, and assessment by teachers and students among others. 8. The biggest gap in this beautiful study is theoretical and practical implications of findings. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy . Reviewer #1: Yes: Dr Olajumoke Olayemi Salami Reviewer #2: Yes: Omotayo Adewale AWODIJI ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/ . PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org . Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step.
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