Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMarch 7, 2025 |
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PONE-D-25-11937 Vascular imbalance in polycystic ovary syndrome: Insights into endothelial dysfunction PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Kıran, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we have decided that your manuscript does not meet our criteria for publication and must therefore be rejected. I am sorry that we cannot be more positive on this occasion, but hope that you appreciate the reasons for this decision. Kind regards, Sanaz Alaeejahromi Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** Reviewer #1: 1. Although the topic is significant, the novelty of the study is somewhat limited because the role of endothelial dysfunction in PCOS has been explored in previous studies. The authors should clarify how their findings advance current knowledge beyond what is already known in the field. 2. The sample size (44 PCOS patients and 44 controls) is relatively small, which may limit the generalizability of the findings. 3. The authors should discuss in discussion whether the observed changes in vascular markers are specific to PCOS or whether they could also occur in other conditions associated with insulin resistance or obesity. In the discussion, compare your findings on vascular imbalances in PCOS to the findings of the previous studies on other metabolic conditions. This will clarify if the vascular changes are specific to PCOS or common across metabolic disorders, providing important context for your results. 4. The introduction lacks a clear presentation of the knowledge gap and specific hypotheses. Additionally, the rationale for hypothesizing that these factors may undergo changes in the ovary and contribute to the disruption of vascular tone regulation in PCOS is not clearly explained. We suggest expanding the Introduction to include: a. A discussion of the pathological roles of these factors in ovarian diseases or related conditions. b. The reasoning behind the hypothesis that these specific factors are implicated in the vascular imbalance observed in PCOS. 5. Considering that previous clinical studies have investigated serum nitric oxide and apelin levels in PCOS patients, with some reporting conflicting results, the novelty of this study may require further clarification. To highlight the contribution of your work, I suggest elaborating on how your study differs from or builds upon previous research. For instance: a. Does your study resolve any discrepancies from earlier findings? b. Are there methodological or analytical advancements in your study compared to prior studies? 6. While the manuscript is generally well-written, there are some spelling and grammatical errors that need to be addressed for clarity and precision. Below are the identified issues and suggested corrections: - In abstract, replace "routine biochemical, hormone, and glycated hemoglobin analyses" with "routine biochemical, hormonal, and glycated hemoglobin analyses" for grammatical consistency. - In the result section, under the head title " Evaluation of NO, apelin, noradrenaline, and prostacyclin levels", first paprgraph, line 7,’’ noradrenaline levels were found to be significantly higher in the PCOS group compared to the control group (p = 0.009) (Table 3)”, noradrenaline should be Noradrenaline. Reviewer #2: Dear Authors, I reviewed your manuscript entitled Preventive and Therapeutic Effects of L-Carnitine Tea Polyphenols Lotus Leaf Extract Tablets Against Zebrafish Obesity submitted to PLOS ONE. In this study the the anti-obesity effects of L-carnitine Tea Polyphenols Lotus Leaf Extract (LCTPLE) in Zebra fish model has been assessed. The topic is interesting and attracts the attention of readers and researchers in the field. The manuscript has serious concerns that need to be addressed by authors to improve the manuscript. 1. The abstract has not been written well and doesn't reflects the aim of the study properly. 2. There are several typos and grammar errors and the language needs to be improved. 3. Tee authors claimed the efficacy of the treatment after short duration of the treatment. In my honest opinion this short duration is not enough to evaluate the long-term effects studied in the manuscript. 4. The authors have evaluated the gene expression merely which can not be a reliable indicator for the observed changes. 5. The authors needs to evaluate dependent factors in protein levels to better reflects the efficacy of the treatment. 6. The discussion is not strong and the authors haven't discussed the results properly. 7. The authors needs to clarify what point distinguish their study from other published studies in term of novelty. Regards, Reviewer ********** what does this mean? ). 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Dear Dr. Tuğba Raika Kıran, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== This manuscript presents relevant findings on vascular imbalance in PCOS, using a clear biomarker-based approach. I recommend minor revisions to improve clarity: • Clearly state the novelty of your study in the Introduction. • Briefly justify the rationale for selecting the four specific biomarkers. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 28 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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Vascular imbalance in polycystic ovary syndrome: Insights into endothelial dysfunction PONE-D-25-11937R2 Dear Dr. Kiran, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Mukhtiar Baig, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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