Peer Review History
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PONE-D-25-42789Kidney Tubule Dysfunction and Injury and the Long-Term Risk of Acute Kidney Injury Following Cardiac Artery Bypass Graft SurgeryPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Wang, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 10 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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In your statement, please include the full name of the IRB or ethics committee who approved or waived your study, as well as whether or not you obtained informed written or verbal consent. If consent was waived for your study, please include this information in your statement as well. 6. If the reviewer comments include a recommendation to cite specific previously published works, please review and evaluate these publications to determine whether they are relevant and should be cited. There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. Additional Editor Comments: Abstract Needs Clearer Structure and Condensation The abstract is overly detailed, especially the description of the parent cohort and exclusion criteria. This level of procedural detail belongs in the Methods section, not the abstract. The objective and design are clear, but the results could be more concise. Avoid reporting redundant statistics (e.g., demographics already present in the Results section). The conclusion should more explicitly highlight the clinical implications and novelty (i.e., biomarkers measured years before surgery predict AKI risk). Clarity on Biomarker Categories There is inconsistency in terminology: A1M and UMOD/EGF are labeled as “tubule dysfunction” markers, while KIM-1 is “injury.” It would help to consistently distinguish these throughout the paper and justify the categorization. The narrative mixes up “higher quartiles associated with lower odds” and “associated with higher odds”—ensure clarity and correct logical direction. Potential Confounders and Model Justification Although multivariable models are described, it is unclear whether perioperative characteristics (e.g., bypass time, contrast exposure, pre-op medications) were unavailable or intentionally excluded. Their absence may lead to residual confounding. Please justify why the time from REGARDS baseline to CABG (a median of 5.5 years) was treated as a covariate rather than stratified or included as an interaction term, since biomarker stability over time could influence effect estimates. Interpretation of KIM-1 Null Findings KIM-1 is widely considered a sensitive tubular injury marker. The manuscript should more clearly discuss why KIM-1 showed no association in this cohort, especially compared to TRIBE-AKI findings. Possible explanations (biomarker degradation, baseline stability years before surgery, population differences) should be expanded. Results Section Contains Errors and Ambiguity There are mismatches in numbers and descriptions. For instance: The statement regarding post-surgery creatinine change appears contradictory (“median 5.5 [4, 8] and 0.1 [0.0, 0.2]”)—this requires correction. The sentence “higher A1M was associated with lower odds of AKI” contradicts the OR 1.34 (which indicates higher odds). These inconsistencies reduce confidence in the reported findings. Missing Discussion on Clinical Utility The paper asserts that biomarkers may allow “early identification,” but the effect sizes are modest and CIs include the null (e.g., A1M lower bound 1.00). The discussion should temper conclusions and describe whether these biomarkers provide predictive value beyond existing models. Strengths/Limitations Need Stronger Integration with Findings The manuscript mentions biomarker degradation, restricted age range, and lack of pre-hospitalization creatinine—but does not explain how these factors may bias results. Consider including a paragraph addressing the generalizability to younger populations and whether exclusion of 48% of CABG records (due to illegibility/incompleteness) may introduce selection bias. Use consistent terms for CABG (either “CABG surgery” or “CABG”) throughout.--> Standardize “peri-CABG AKI,” “post-CABG AKI,” and “AKI following CABG.” [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: I Don't Know ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I recommend the acceptance of this manuscript for publication. The study presents a novel and significant contribution to the field of nephrology and cardiac surgery by investigating the long-term predictive value of kidney tubular biomarkers for acute kidney injury (AKI) following coronary artery bypass graft (CABG) surgery. Its prospective design, rigorous methodology, and insightful findings offer a new paradigm for understanding AKI susceptibility, moving beyond immediate perioperative risk factors to assess renal health years in advance. The work is well-executed, clearly written, and has substantial potential to influence future clinical practice and research directions. This study's core contribution lies in its innovative temporal approach, evaluating kidney tubular health at a stable baseline an average of 5.5 years before the stressor event, thus framing CABG as a "renal stress test" to uncover subclinical vulnerability. The research design is robust, nested within the large, population-based REGARDS cohort, and employs a well-defined cohort of 394 patients who underwent CABG. The methodology is commendable, utilizing precise measurements of specific biomarkers for tubular dysfunction (A1M, UMOD, EGF) and injury (KIM-1) and applying rigorous statistical models that adjust for a comprehensive set of confounders, including traditional markers like eGFR and albuminuria. The key findings are compelling: higher baseline A1M was associated with increased odds of AKI, while higher UMOD was associated with decreased odds, suggesting that markers of tubular dysfunction, rather than injury, are potent long-term predictors. Clinically, this opens a vital window for early risk stratification, paving the way for targeted preventive strategies to mitigate AKI risk in vulnerable patients undergoing cardiac surgery. To further strengthen this already impactful manuscript, I offer the following specific suggestions for revision: 1.Enhance Clinical Context: In the discussion, please elaborate on the practical feasibility and potential cost-effectiveness of implementing these biomarker tests in routine pre-operative assessment pathways. A brief comparison of their predictive power against existing clinical risk models could also be valuable for clinicians. 2.Address Surgical Heterogeneity: While the study acknowledges limitations regarding surgical details, a brief discussion in the limitations section on how the lack of differentiation between elective and urgent cases, or variations in bypass time, might influence the observed associations would add nuance. 3.Clarify Biomarker Stability: The potential for biomarker degradation over long-term storage is mentioned as a limitation. It would be helpful to briefly cite any existing literature on the long-term stability of these specific urinary biomarkers under the storage conditions described, to better reassure the reader about the validity of the measurements. 4.Future Directions - Specificity: The suggestion for future research is excellent. To make it more concrete, consider proposing a specific follow-up study, such as a prospective trial where high-risk patients identified by these biomarkers are randomized to a KDIGO-guided preventive bundle versus standard care to assess outcomes. 5.Additional discussion: The author can further explore in the discussion section the detectability, cost-effectiveness of markers such as A1M in clinical practice, as well as their potential for integration with existing clinical risk prediction models (such as the Demirjian model). Reviewer #2: The manuscript is an adequate scientifc research. It is written in standard English. Requirement of informed consent has been waived. however, regarding data availabilty, some restrictions has been applied ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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PONE-D-25-42789R1Markers of kidney tubule dysfunction and injury and long-term risk of acute kidney injury following cardiac artery bypass graft surgeryPLOS One Dear Dr. Wang, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== Please address the reviewer comments ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by May 10 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Additional Editor Comments: Please address the reviewer comments [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #4: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: I Don't Know ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #3: The authors have tried to respond to many questions. But some of the sections have overlapped to each other. Reviewer #4: Thank you for the revision. The manuscript is improved and most substantive concerns have been addressed. However, the clean revised version still contains several obvious internal errors that should be corrected before acceptance. The main remaining issues are: (1) the title uses “cardiac artery bypass graft” instead of “coronary artery bypass graft”; (2) the cohort size is given as 30,239 in the manuscript background but 30,329 in the Results; (3) the Figure 1 legend refers to the “REGARDS Trial” rather than the REGARDS cohort/study; (4) Table 3 appears to contain an impossible EGF summary value for the AKI group (6.6 [4.0–1.1]); (5) at least one Results sentence remains garbled (“lower higher odds,” “while whereas”); and (6) the PrevAKI trial is described as ongoing even though the cited study is a published randomized trial. These look fixable and do not seem to undermine the overall scientific message, but they reflect insufficient final quality control. I would therefore recommend revision rather than acceptance in the current form. ********** 7. 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Markers of kidney tubule dysfunction and injury and long-term risk of acute kidney injury following coronary artery bypass graft surgery PONE-D-25-42789R2 Dear Dr. Wang, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Ramada Rateb Khasawneh Academic Editor PLOS One Additional Editor Comments (optional): Good Luck Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #4: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #3: He has tried to respond to most of the questions but please revise on the Authors contribution still not completed with some of the authors missing and some categories have no specific authors. Reviewer #4: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: No ********** |
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