Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJanuary 22, 2025 |
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Please also provide contact information for a data access committee, ethics committee, or other institutional body to which data requests may be sent. If data are owned by a third party, please indicate how others may request data access. Additional Editor Comments: Please see the comments made by the reviewers [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly Reviewer #3: Partly Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: N/A Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: No ********** Reviewer #1: Article type: Research Article Title: “Effects of Tool Feed Direction and Number of Passes on Electrochemical Dissolution and Groove Geometry in the Electrochemical Grooving of Tube Inner Walls” Manus. ID: PONE-D-25-02811 has been reviewed. - The research article is different and remarkable. However, some additions and corrections need to be made. The following list of comments will help to further improve the manuscript: • It would be beneficial to change the title of the manuscript to a more interesting one. • The most striking section of a study is the abstract section. Therefore, important results from the study should be highlighted. • The following Keywords should be changed. More specific keywords should be added. “Pressure, Unidirectional, Hybrid, Flow” • The introduction section should be enriched with important information from the latest literature studies. (2023-2025) • The difference (novelty) of the study from the studies in the literature should be explained more carefully. (At the end of the introduction) • A detailed flow chart should be added to the article for a better understanding of the study. • The “Materials and Methods” section should be rewritten in more detail. • How the parameters applied in the study were selected should be explained in detail. • More information should be provided about the temperature and relative humidity of the environment where the study is conducted. • All devices/software used within the scope of the study should be given in a flow chart. (use Microsoft Visio) • Figures 2, 4 and 8 should be rearranged and their sizes increased (3x). (single column from top to bottom) • The results obtained within the scope of the study should be shown with at least 2-3 bar graphs. In this way, the results will be more easily understood. • The "Unidirectional Electrolyte Flow" section should be written in more detail. (with literature support) • There are many spelling errors in the work. Please check the section below step by step. “….Examining the MRR values, it can be seen that although the cumulative amount of dissolved material increases, it decreases in each additional pass. This is because the change in the amount of dissolved material does not occur linearly as the machining time increases with the number of passes. The change in amperage—taking into account the initial data (150 A)— is around 20% for two passes, 40% for four passes, and 48% for six passes. The rate of decrease in the amount of current decreases as the number of passes increases. This can be attributed to how the tool is moved and as explained in the experimental work title, the tool moves in the axial direction relative to a workpiece with cylindrical geometry and does not make any movement in the radial direction. Figure 5 shows a portion of the workpiece cross-section in the radial and axial directions for passes two, four, and six. Figure 5. Cross-section of the machined part in (a) the radial direction and (b) the axial direction As seen in Figure 5, as the tool completes the number of passes, the distance between the workpiece and the tool increases, which causes the electrolyte’s electrical resistance to increase. This increase in electrical resistance limits the current flow, which causes a decrease in the amount of material machined. The amount of dissolved material for each experimental condition and the change of dissolved material are shown in Figure 6. Figure 6. Dissolved material (Δm) and change of dissolved material (ΔM) for (a) the UEF condition and (b) the HEF condition In Figure 6, is the difference in dissolved material between the two different passes, which can be calculated as follows: Δ +2 = Δ +2 − Δ , (5) where is the dissolved material and is a constant, which can be 0, 2, or 4. Although the cumulative amount of machined material constantly increased, the highest values for ΔM were obtained in the first two passes in both tool movement conditions, and the difference decreased with each subsequent pass. Relative to the first two passes, the amount of decrease was around 40% and 34% in the next four passes and 43% and 44% in the next six passes in the UEF and HEF conditions, respectively. Therefore, as the number of passes increases, the dissolution rate of the material decreases. Examining the cross-section geometry, which changes with the pass operation in the radial direction, it can be seen that the groove is made with the effect of the area where the insulation was located for the first two passes and had a more regular structure. Therefore, as the number of passes increases, the groove depth and width increase. The effect of the insulation material decreased significantly, especially after six passes, and the inner diameter of the material was enlarged (over machining). Figure 7 shows this change for the UEF condition, and the groove geometries were obtained from the middle of the workpiece. Figure 7. Changes in groove geometry for different operations As seen in Figure 6, the maximum amount of dissolved and machined area was achieved with UEF. This is because it can be related to the direction of tool movement and electrolyte transfer. With HEF, the tool moves at a constant speed, regardless of the electrolyte transfer direction. However, with UEF, the tool moves with a constant feed rate in the opposite direction of the electrolyte transfer, and during its movement in the same direction as the flow, the tool returns to its starting position very quickly (600 mm/min). Therefore, the machining operation occurs only in the opposite direction of the flow. As a result, and with the help of the conical structure of the tool’s tip, the electrolyte is forced to move between the workpiece and the tool, and the forced flow causes vortices on the inner wall of the workpiece due to the increase in pressure and speed. With HEF, half of the passes occur in the opposite direction of the flow, and the other half occur in the same direction as the flow. During its movement in the same direction as the flow, the electrolyte automatically fills the machining gap, which results in less material being machined. A schematic of this procedure is illustrated in Figure 8….” • The “Conclusions” section should be reviewed. It should be enriched with the info/results obtained. Also, Percentage comparisons should be included. (For example... was/were 34% better. ) • • • After the revision, I would like to review the work again and see the additions and corrections made. Reviewer #2: Dear author, It is seen that the authors prepared an article titled "Effects of Tool Feed Direction and Number of Passes on Electrochemical Dissolution and Groove Geometry in the Electrochemical Grooving of Tube Inner Walls" and the effects of machinability characteristics on Electrochemical Dissolution and Groove Geometry were investigated. It is recommended that the manuscript be resubmitted after further investigation. Best wishes. Reviewer #3: 1. The abstract should be brief and concise. Please remove unnecessary explanation from the abstract. 2. Two different tool feed directions have been mentioned in the abstract. Please state them clearly. The statement is quite ambiguous. 3. The literature survey presented in the Introduction section was quite subjective. Therefore, research gaps cannot be clearly understood from the literature survey. The motivation behind this study is not clear. 4. Justify the reason for choosing the workpiece material. Please provide the physical properties of the Stellite 21. 5. In Fig. 2, which one is UEF and which one is HEF is not clear. 6. The grammar should be improved. 7. Why MRR is decreasing with an increase in number of passes? Is there any physical reason for this happening? 8. The reduction of amperage with the number of passes is not clear. 9. No significant difference has been observed between the outcomes of UEF and HEF. How can this be happened? Please give justification for showing two different flow directions. 10. What is the novelty of this study? No significant contribution has been found in this study. No clear physical justification for the presented outcomes has been found in this study. Reviewer #4: In this paper the authors studied the impacts of different electrolyte transfer methods, unidirectional electrolyte flow (UEF) and hybrid electrolyte flow (HEF), on the EC grooving of tubes. Two parameters were considered: the number of passes and the tool feed direction. The experimental results show that although the amount of dissolved material increases with the number of passes, the incrementation rate of dissolved material decreases with the number of passes due to increased electrical resistance. Additionally, the geometry of grooves changes at the inlet and outlet of the electrolyte due to fluid properties such as pressure variance and turbulent flow. Tool feed direction also affects the uniformity of grooves. This is a clear, concise, and well-written manuscript. The introduction is relevant, and theory based. Sufficient information about the previous study findings is presented for readers to follow the present study rationale and procedures. The text is clear and easy to read, and the results are sufficiently discussed. The objectives clearly stated, experimental methods are advanced, data statistically analyzed, the conclusions well supported by the data presented. In my opinion, the manuscript is suitable for publication as it is. Reviewer #5: The paper does not strongly emphasize what differentiates this study from prior work. State clearly what was not done before by the investigators around the globe. Authors should the motivation for grooving inner tube walls using ECM should be expanded. What are the key challenges in conventional methods? More latest literature on recent ECM strategies for internal features or difficult-to-machine areas. Clarify the novelty, how does this study add to existing knowledge? Hardly any details related to the experimental set-up used have been discussed. Authors must add the same and explore it for better readability. Important process parameters must be clearly tabulated or presented. Was statistical analysis used to determine the significance of factors? The conclusion section is overly general. Specify key findings with numerical data. Include practical implications of the findings: How does this help optimize ECM in industry? ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: No Reviewer #5: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: N/A Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: (No Response) ********** Reviewer #1: After revision: The authors have made significant improvements to the paper by addressing the feedback provided by the reviewers, resulting in a clearer presentation of results. Based on these revisions, the paper is now ready for acceptance. Reviewer #2: Dear author, Necessary revisions have been performed. Manuscript can be accepted for publishing. Best wishes. Reviewer #3: 1. The abstract is too much extended. It is better to shorten the abstract and display only the key findings. 2. The literature survey not only includes the description of the work defined in the previous literature. However, it is the combination of the summary and the critics of each literature. The current literature survey lacks that point. The author should take care of it while writing the introduction. 3. Fig. 2 does not show any UEF and HEF conditions. 4. The initial results showed minimal differences between the outcomes achieved from UEF and HEF conditions. However, the current results show significant differences between the outcomes from UEF and HEF, especially in the entry position as explained in the revised manuscript. How many times have the experiments been repeated? If the results are repeatable, why was the difference not significant in the initial study? Reviewer #4: The authors have answered all the questions and improved the paper. The paper can be published in its present form. Reviewer #5: Authors have now incorporated all the suggestions. The article is now well revised and improved as well. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: Yes: Siamak Ghorbani Reviewer #5: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Electrochemical grooving of tube inner walls with emphasis on feed strategy and multi-pass effects on material removal and groove geometry PONE-D-25-02811R2 Dear Dr. Demirtas, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Dr. Mithilesh K. Dikshit Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): The manuscript is accepted in the current format. Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #3: N/A ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Reviewer #3: All the comments have been addressed appropriately. This paper can be accepted for publication in the present form. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #3: No ********** |
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