Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJanuary 7, 2025 |
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-->PONE-D-25-01046-->-->Effects of mobile health counseling and behavioral interventions on weight management during pregnancy and postpartum: A systematic review and meta-analysis of randomized controlled trials-->-->PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Khademioore, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 29 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:-->
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Additional Editor Comments: Overall, the paper provides a valuable review of technology-based interventions for weight management during pregnancy and postpartum. Some areas require clarification and improvement: • Please provide a clear definition of "mHealth" in the introduction, as the term covers a wide range of interventions. Given the diverse delivery modes in your included studies (e.g., mobile apps, websites, text messaging, Zoom), a more specific and consistent definition is needed. Additionally, the current title "mobile health counseling and behavioral interventions" does not fully reflect the scope of the review. Consider revising it to "Digital health interventions" • The review presents two subgroup analyses of intervention types; however, the differences are not statistically significant. If possible, please provide a more detailed and cautious interpretation of these findings • In the discussion (lines 286–301), direct comparisons with previous systematic reviews are not appropriate due to major differences in inclusion criteria, populations, and interventions. These differences should be clearly acknowledged and carefully contextualized. • Please clarify whether only English-language studies were included. If so, this should be noted as a limitation due to potential language bias. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions -->Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. 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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: This article systematically reviews and meta-analyzes randomized controlled trials (RCTs) evaluating mHealth (mobile health) interventions, ranging from apps and text messages to online platforms, for weight management during pregnancy and postpartum. The authors aimed to determine whether these digital behavioral and counseling interventions reduce gestational weight gain (GWG), excessive GWG, and improve other maternal and neonatal outcomes. The review included 18 RCTs with varying sample sizes and populations, with a notable subgroup finding that women with a BMI ≥ 25 kg/m² experienced a statistically significant reduction in GWG compared with routine care. Overall, the evidence was graded from high to low certainty depending on the outcome. The included studies appear generally adequate to address the research question, although the reliance on self-reported pre-pregnancy weight in several studies is a limitation that may introduce nondifferential misclassification of the primary outcome. The meta-analytic approach is appropriate for the research questions posed. Strengths of the statistical approach include clear reporting of effect sizes, confidence intervals, and tests for interactions. However, some outcomes (e.g., preterm birth and pre-eclampsia) were based on only a few studies, resulting in wide confidence intervals and a lower level of certainty. This highlights a key weakness: while the overall methodology is statistically sound, the imprecision in certain subgroup analyses and the inherent heterogeneity in intervention designs limit the strength of some conclusions. The diversity of mHealth interventions (from text messages to interactive mobile apps) makes it difficult to determine which components drive effectiveness. Although subgroup analyses were conducted, further sensitivity analyses could help clarify the robustness of the results. Outcomes such as preterm birth and pre-eclampsia are based on few studies, resulting in wide confidence intervals and low certainty of evidence. Future iterations or updates could benefit from a more detailed breakdown of which aspects of mHealth interventions (e.g. frequency of contact, content of messages) are most effective. Many studies used self-reported pre-pregnancy weight, which could introduce bias. Although the authors noted the use of self-reported weights, a more thorough discussion of their potential impact on the overall results would be useful. As almost all of the studies were conducted in developed countries, the findings may not be generalizable to settings with fewer resources. Additional commentary on the implications of conducting the majority of studies in high-income settings and suggestions for future research in more diverse populations would strengthen the discussion. I did not notice any significant spelling errors, but the word "counseling" is used several times. You may want to consider replacing it with "counseling". Reviewer #2: An interesting and well written systematic review paper. A few suggestions as to how to strengthen the paper for readers of this journal 1) Please clarify the aim of the review throughout the manuscript. The abstract states ‘This systematic review evaluated the effects of counselling or behavioral mHealth interventions to prevent excessive GWG’, however the objective refers ‘This systematic review aimed to evaluate the effects of mHealth counselling or behavioral weight management interventions among pregnant individuals of all BMI categories, compared to routine care or in-person delivery of interventions’ This will help readers understand the context 2) Introduction could be more focused to provide a clear rationale regarding the types of interventions and set the scene for the review? Is this about healthy eating, activity or is it more about behavioural techniques. A broad summary of the types on interventions would be useful to give focus. Additionally the introduction needs to clearly explain if this review is focusing on weight loss as an outcome or is it other outcomes which are of interest 3) Methods an explanation of ‘usual care’ and ‘mHealth’. A clear definition as used by authors for searching is required 4) Methods: include years included to explain how old some studies are? 5) Methods: include how GWG was calculated in the selected studies generally and refer to limitations regarding self reported. 5) Discussion is unclear in places and could be more clearly explained throughout for readers. For example Moderate-certainty evidence suggests that mHealth interventions probably reduce GWG in individuals with a BMI≥25 ? please add more information to explain ‘probably reduce GWG’ Low-certainty evidence suggests that mHealth weight management interventions may reduce the risk of GDM, pre eclampsia, and preterm birth. Please clarify what this means with regards reduce the risk of GDM by adding values/numbers Limitations: more information is needed here to justify the conclusions. It states that pre pregnancy weight was self reported. There is no comments about the last weight recorded in pregnancy? Therefore these limitations must be acknowledged within the discussion to help put the results in context 6) It would be useful to readers to have more detail about the type of interventions which are more ‘successful’ this would add more depth to the discussion 6) Overall please clearly outline the findings from this review and provide a key message(s) for readers; Could this be more clearly and specifically stated for example ‘Our review showed that mHealth interventions are likely to reduce GWG in individuals with a BMI ≥ 25 kg/m2 and also the risk of excessive GWG according to IOM guidelines’. Does this mean that m Health are useful? ********** -->6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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