Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMay 29, 2025 |
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Melissococcus plutonius Dear Dr. Fowler, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 10 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: Your manuscript presents highly informative and valuable data on the asymptomatic and symptomatic prevalence of M. plutonius in US honey bee colonies. The revealed high genetic diversity offers crucial insights for future mitigation strategies and prevalence studies. I've included a few comments and suggestions in the attached PDF to enhance the clarity of certain methodological aspects and the discussion section for the reader. This manuscript deserves publication after minor revisions. Reviewer #2: The authors combined surveillance and molecular epidemiology to investigate prevalence, diversity, and transmission dynamics of Melissococcus plutonius in US honey bee colonies. The results are promising and gave epidemiological insight into EFB disease in US. The manuscript could benefit from further context on the role of adult bees as potential asymptomatic carriers of M. plutonius and the implications for disease transmission. Could the authors elaborate on this aspect and discuss its potential impact on colony-level epidemiology? Additionally, given that co-infections with typical and atypical M. plutonius strains are commonly reported in EFB, did the authors observe any association between virulence factors—particularly the plasmids pMP1 and pMP19—and the presence of both strain types within a single colony? Were pMP1 and pMP19 detected concurrently in co-infected colonies? Exploring this might enhance understanding of plasmid-mediated virulence and its distribution across strain types. Reviewer #3: L108-109: formatting error L120/122: Oregon-based or Oregon based L138/140: Please check italic species names throughout manuscript L188: italic species names, please check throughout document L194: punctuation missing. L195ff: Is there a new paragraph or does it all belong to figure caption? Please cite/link your metadata file with the genotypes numbers. L204: Please check throughout manuscript: Fig-6, or Fig. 6, or Fig 6 ? L229: do you refer to your own results or other’s not cited here? L237: subtypes types L272:Are there more/additional supporting publications for North America than just the Mexican study? L282: under-reported L287: Please cite the reference here already (8?) as you refer to it in next sentence, otherwise bit confusing. L356: space between 10 ml and mL. Units seem quite inconsistently used throughout the manuscript. Please check again, i.e. ml, mL, uL, ul, and spaces between numbers and units L360: Is there an overgrowth with secondary bacteria expected if samples are not shipped on ice/cooled – in comparison to your own collected samples? L394: “previously described […] study” not citied L241: neither figure caption nor graph is very explanatory. Are the single colored dots in each network corresponding to the 96 isolates? L402: did you mean ‘section 4.2’ instead of 2.2? L409: was P. alvei the only species overgrowing your plates? L412: please check spaces between numbers and SI units L416: Incomplete sentence, please check. L428: file in suppl. Material is called differently: Mplutonius-public-assemblies-NCBI-accessions? L432: odd sentence structure “we used an automated workflow was implemented using....” L442: which reference did you use (accession number), bcs you have two DAT561 in your supplement file? The 2018 assembly? L444: Did you find a reference stating less than15 SNPs difference are defined for clustering bacterial strains or Mplutonius? L496: Is there no year and publisher available? From L479: please check again: some Journal names were abbreviated but many are not (520, 526, 531, 534…). L602, 605: Font size is bigger than others in this section Appendix: Figure 2 and 4: major tick marks missing. Maybe include (faded) horizontal gridlines consistent for all graphs. It’s untypical to use “0%, 25%, 50% “ for scientific graphs as there is the word “Percent” in the axis title included anyways Figure 6: I had some trouble to understand where your referred genotypes (f.e. 14, 33, and 26) are to find in this graph. In the Results section you refer to Fig 6 when explaining that populations in certain operations consist of genotype x, y, z but this is not the information I can retrieve from this graph. Do you maybe refer to Suppl. File Mplutonius-genotypes-plasmids-metadata_table2? ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Everything, everywhere, all at once - Surveillance and molecular epidemiology reveal Melissococcus plutonius is endemic among Michigan, US beekeeping operations PONE-D-25-28058R1 Dear Dr. Fowler, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Kai Wang Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): A great work, congratulations to you and your team! Regards, Kai WANG, Editor kaiwang628@gmail.com Reviewers' comments: |
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